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Role Reversal
Her Master has her well contained
Stashed in an ancient antique box
Her patience is becoming strained
And she contrives to pick the locks
So this time she just won't submit
And then seizes the upper hand
No quarter 'cause her fuse is lit
And it's high time she took a stand
She straps him down upon the bed
And soon climbs on his stiffened cock
Safe word recalled, but nothing said
Since she stays disinclined to talk.
Stashed in an ancient antique box
Her patience is becoming strained
And she contrives to pick the locks
So this time she just won't submit
And then seizes the upper hand
No quarter 'cause her fuse is lit
And it's high time she took a stand
She straps him down upon the bed
And soon climbs on his stiffened cock
Safe word recalled, but nothing said
Since she stays disinclined to talk.
Published 12th Nov 2018
Author's Note
Probably reflects my ignorance about true BDSM.
Photo from the film "Girl In the Box."
Photo from the film "Girl In the Box."
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Anonymous
12th Nov 2018 8:43pm
This is a very satyrical write my friend. As usual, your wording and rhythm, are impeccable. About BDSM, I think it's all about exploring and the features are very subjective. So no one is truly a master. I enjoyed it. Well done. J
12th Nov 2018 8:47pm
Thank you J. This is another I had mixed feelings about but posted anyway to see how it flies. As always, I appreciate your support and very kind words!
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12th Nov 2018 10:10pm
Thank you Eerie. A little switch now and then keeps things in the proper perspective. No Master, it seems to me, is above an occasional bit of discipline and education himself. It might not really work that way with BDSM, but it's fun to think about.
12th Nov 2018 10:16pm
I think that attitude depends on the Master. A case by case if you will. Fun to think about non-the-less!
13th Nov 2018 3:48am
Wow Crow........this brought many thoughts to me.......a great ink as usual......you always make my mind think......I luv that about reading you......you’re so clever.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
13th Nov 2018 10:41pm
So glad it made you think, gentle Flower. Thank you for the kind comment. Purple luv and hugs to you too!
13th Nov 2018 8:18pm
dearest Sir Crow sexy write
I used to have such deeply hidden desires
of being a kept woman...
darkly titillating...
love Brenda 😈
I used to have such deeply hidden desires
of being a kept woman...
darkly titillating...
love Brenda 😈
Thank you for sharing a glimpse of your past desires, Brenda. I always appreciate your comments, and consistently love your own work.
Love, Thomas
Love, Thomas
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