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Thee Wet of Life'n'Death

o'shit, damn, darn! whathfck I done did
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Written by dkzksaxxas_DanielX

(DadaDoggyDannyKozakSaxfn)

Published 29th Oct 2018

Author's Note

Ignorance is the doorway to stupidity in humanity that breeds mo'bigger ignorance in the name of Human Knowledge. It's TRUE. Y'can look it up.

#ignorance #rain #sadness #storm #water

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Re. Thee Wet of Life'n'Death

Amorous_tryst

29th Oct 2018 9:03pm

I enjoy the way you slaughter the English language and conventional writing:
though the mess you've left
may cause some stress
the thought naught lost
to my nest now tossed

In all seriousness, the deluge of sewer water that pours upon us, float atop the salty brine of our tears, for that water will always be kept and felt deeper.

May solace and peace of mind be near.

Teri

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Re. Thee Wet of Life'n'Death

dartford (Paul S...)

29th Oct 2018 10:33pm

I think ignorance and stupidity
are very different places
I can't possibly know how you feel
but to pretend that I do, now
that would be stupid ..

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