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Running Late
It seems as though he's running late
All else is going to have to wait
But it seems he has to shave
Not a task that he can waive
He lathers up before the mirror
Wipes off the steam until it's clear
Applies the blade with hurried wrath
Until he sees his lover in the bath
Her body glistening with soap
A shine that always gives him hope
Possibly a stroke of luck
Forget the time, he'll stay and fuck
His love rinses off the residue
Down the drain and right on cue
Enough to make a late man sigh
Watching his lover towel and dry
He takes her gently to the bed
His sense of time already fled
She reclines and parts her thighs
Insisting that his Rolex lies.
All else is going to have to wait
But it seems he has to shave
Not a task that he can waive
He lathers up before the mirror
Wipes off the steam until it's clear
Applies the blade with hurried wrath
Until he sees his lover in the bath
Her body glistening with soap
A shine that always gives him hope
Possibly a stroke of luck
Forget the time, he'll stay and fuck
His love rinses off the residue
Down the drain and right on cue
Enough to make a late man sigh
Watching his lover towel and dry
He takes her gently to the bed
His sense of time already fled
She reclines and parts her thighs
Insisting that his Rolex lies.
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Re. Running Late
19th Aug 2018 9:55pm
sexy story telling here dearest Sir Crow
it gave me a naughty giggle in the end :)
love Crim
it gave me a naughty giggle in the end :)
love Crim
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Re: Re. Running Late
19th Aug 2018 10:05pm
Glad it gave you a giggle, Crim. They say that time marches on, but here it slows to a crawl...
Re: Re. Running Late
19th Aug 2018 10:11pm
this is my wavelength today dearest Sir Crow I feel you...
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SiO_7LhPZFM
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SiO_7LhPZFM
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Re: Re. Running Late
19th Aug 2018 11:41pm
Re. Running Late
19th Aug 2018 10:06pm
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19th Aug 2018 10:09pm
Thanks Reggie. He's got game and a sultry girlfriend. Who can ask for anything more?
Re. Running Late
19th Aug 2018 10:17pm
When I read the opening paragraph I thought he was late for a date - but the date was already in the same room!
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19th Aug 2018 10:24pm
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20th Aug 2018 6:48am
Conceivably, I realise, it might not necessarily have been his face he was shaving - she could have been watching him shave a more personal spot as a tease.
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Re. Running Late
19th Aug 2018 10:32pm
Or maybe he needs to treat himself ... to a new Rolex ... great write my dear poet ...
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19th Aug 2018 11:35pm
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19th Aug 2018 10:38pm
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19th Aug 2018 11:37pm
Re. Running Late
19th Aug 2018 11:23pm
Moments like this always make us lose sense of time. I agree with Tim, time should not exist!
Wonderful write Crow
Wonderful write Crow
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Re: Re. Running Late
19th Aug 2018 11:43pm
It's keeping track of time that causes madness. Just letting it slide is the way to go. Thanks Bonzi!
Re. Running Late
20th Aug 2018 1:42am
Re. Running Late
20th Aug 2018 4:34am