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The Error Of Your Ways

illusions do not
a reality become
by pinching yourself

Written by takis1917

Published 8th May 2018

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Re. The Error Of Your Ways

LilDragonFly

8th May 2018 1:20pm

Another pithy poem ... bravo!

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8th May 2018 2:42pm

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Re. The Error Of Your Ways

summultima (uma)

8th May 2018 6:53pm

agrees...the magical depths n blended colours of this immersive flight could never be neared upon ..by the hard(ened) black & white-nez of the mere settled grounds...the title & the 'pinch' word punches real hard on a reader...

masterly as ev dear Takis! write on..

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Re. The Error Of Your Ways

Anonymous

11th May 2018 11:14pm

couldnt be a more sincere mini masterpiece. ;)