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masturbating madness
i slip sideways
into the nowhere zone
where vagrant thoughts
come to greet the dark
& pay it homage
a manic psyche is honored
in the demented landscapes
of the psychotic
while menstrual moons
glow neon red
& fuck the mind
as errant feelings
run amok
& i masturbate
madness
with guttural growls
i sniff the cunt
splayed
& brazenly open
revealing its secrets
as i free fall
inside the spiraling
blackness
& all is understood
despite the question
i silently wonder
where do my vagrant thoughts
go when they need shelter?
deep inside the ego
where the id
hides my insanity
until my poetry talks back
& uncovers lunacy
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Re. masturbating madness
7th Dec 2017 10:26am
"a manic psyche is honored
in the demented landscapes
of the psychotic"
This defines me... you've spoken straight into my heart and released the darkness, I praise... I praise... awesome work!
in the demented landscapes
of the psychotic"
This defines me... you've spoken straight into my heart and released the darkness, I praise... I praise... awesome work!
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Re: Re. masturbating madness
7th Dec 2017 10:28am
thank you dearest poet you made my night worthwhile knowing I spoke to your heart & where you are with this write.. I deeply cherish your thoughts visit..
love Crim
love Crim
Re. masturbating madness
7th Dec 2017 11:02am
This is so bold, unleashed ... I love it when I am become undone ... especially by my own hand. A bold declaration ... bravo my sweet poetess.
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Re: Re. masturbating madness
7th Dec 2017 12:59pm
thank you graciously beautiful Dragonfly I am beaming from your comment :)
love Crim
love Crim
Re. masturbating madness
7th Dec 2017 11:53am
Do it yourself, you can never go wrong there and nbody can claim illegal touching
Do it and do it hard ,,,,
Let the ink flow
Good
Like
Do it and do it hard ,,,,
Let the ink flow
Good
Like
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Re: Re. masturbating madness
7th Dec 2017 1:02pm
yes very true dearest Poet love your take this is in a way was more a metaphorical masturbation.. like i'm rubbing out madness with this write ;) I agree though do hard & often..
thank you dear friend for the love on this write..
love you..
Brenda
thank you dear friend for the love on this write..
love you..
Brenda
Re: Re. masturbating madness
7th Dec 2017 1:05pm
Re: Re. masturbating madness
7th Dec 2017 1:08pm
Re. masturbating madness
7th Dec 2017 12:07pm
When Allen Ginsberg needed inspiration or a break through, he used masturbation as a writer's tool to reframe and refocus. Whatever it takes to engage the inner self....we each divulge our truth in various ways.
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Re: Re. masturbating madness
7th Dec 2017 1:04pm
thank you dearest Turtle very interesting I will have to try that.. in this write though the masturbation is metaphorical..
love Brenda
love Brenda
Re. masturbating madness
7th Dec 2017 1:40pm
where do my vagrant thoughts
go when they need shelter?
deep inside the ego
where the id
hides my insanity
until my poetry talks back
& uncovers lunacy
Really adore these lines. They s peak so deeply to me.
go when they need shelter?
deep inside the ego
where the id
hides my insanity
until my poetry talks back
& uncovers lunacy
Really adore these lines. They s peak so deeply to me.
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Re: Re. masturbating madness
7th Dec 2017 1:44pm
thank you graciously beautiful Jade.. I love your thoughts & visits.. i'm happy this poem talks to you :)
love Crim
love Crim
Re. masturbating madness
Anonymous
7th Dec 2017 2:47pm
There is no lunacy to be found in you, my beautiful Dark Angel. Lunacy lies in trying to cage thought and voice when they need expression. And you're never one to shy away from truth and darkness. Without the darkness, how would we ever see the stars? You keep illuminating darkness. A brilliant and gorgeous write. So much love for you, so much...ever your Willow

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Re: Re. masturbating madness
7th Dec 2017 3:55pm
thank you beautiful Willow was just free falling with thoughts on this one & those are the words that came to mind.. I deeply appreciate the love you show my darkened voice..
love you dear one..
love Brenda
love you dear one..
love Brenda
Re. masturbating madness
7th Dec 2017 4:06pm
For me, the only thing crazy about this
Is it's insanely good!! N stop saying splayed (open) cunt...plz becuz 'HE' has a 'bind of his bone' lol
Is it's insanely good!! N stop saying splayed (open) cunt...plz becuz 'HE' has a 'bind of his bone' lol
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Re: Re. masturbating madness
7th Dec 2017 4:16pm
Re. masturbating madness
Anonymous
7th Dec 2017 5:16pm
“while menstrual moons
glow neon red
& fuck the mind”
Absolutely awesome! Really enjoyed reading this and wow I love the images you create in your writing. You are the queen!
Star xo
glow neon red
& fuck the mind”
Absolutely awesome! Really enjoyed reading this and wow I love the images you create in your writing. You are the queen!
Star xo

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Re: Re. masturbating madness
7th Dec 2017 5:20pm
aw beautiful Star i'm blushing you honor me deeply.. you write from the soul & shine brightly.. thank you dearest poetess for such a beautiful comment :)
love Crim
love Crim
Re. masturbating madness
7th Dec 2017 5:40pm
wow unfortunately too relatable but then I have always been a bit crazy
"until my poetry talks back
& uncovers lunacy" - - - - - - - Rings just perfect :-))) - Huge Hugs :-)
"until my poetry talks back
& uncovers lunacy" - - - - - - - Rings just perfect :-))) - Huge Hugs :-)
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Re: Re. masturbating madness
7th Dec 2017 6:09pm
thank you dearest David giggles but then all the good ones are :)
love & hugs..
Brenda
love & hugs..
Brenda
Re. masturbating madness
7th Dec 2017 10:05pm
my dearest... I could not highlight parts of this poem...because I couldn't pick a part....I really love this....you spin a phrase effortlessly and splay your heart for all to see...I kneel at your altar my dark queen
your devotee'
Jeff
your devotee'
Jeff
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Re: Re. masturbating madness
7th Dec 2017 10:35pm
thank you graciously dearest Jeff I am deeply honored & humbled by your comment..
love Crim
love Crim
Re. masturbating madness
7th Dec 2017 10:23pm
And here I thought it was going to be an erotic. There's so much more to consider in the "nowhere zone" and it's fascinating on multiple level. Favorite lines:
where do my vagrant thoughts
go when they need shelter?
deep inside the ego
where the id
hides my insanity
Not only are you a great poet but you have some knowledge of psychology. Woe to those whose ego and id are at battle...
where do my vagrant thoughts
go when they need shelter?
deep inside the ego
where the id
hides my insanity
Not only are you a great poet but you have some knowledge of psychology. Woe to those whose ego and id are at battle...
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Re: Re. masturbating madness
7th Dec 2017 10:36pm
thank you graciously dearest Sir Crow for the continued love you show me I cherish your thoughts..
love Crim
love Crim
Re. masturbating madness
Anonymous
7th Dec 2017 11:49pm
Fucking brilliant. God you have a gift dear. I hope when moments of sadness travel through your mind. You come back and look at this. This is magic.
Beth
Beth

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Re: Re. masturbating madness
7th Dec 2017 11:57pm
thank you graciously dearest Beth you honor me i'm beaming from your beautiful comment.. I deeply cherish you dear one :)
love Brenda
love Brenda
Re. masturbating madness
8th Dec 2017 00:21am
Dear crim...
you sit so prideful in your position of the amazing written works you gift us all with..
You speak with such a royal elegance in every single one of your pieces..
Love
H
you sit so prideful in your position of the amazing written works you gift us all with..
You speak with such a royal elegance in every single one of your pieces..
Love
H
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Re: Re. masturbating madness
8th Dec 2017 00:24am
thank you beautiful H for such a lovely comment touching my heart.. truly I am but one among all the unique talented voices here that make this place beautiful.. you light up the page with your writes dear one..
love Crim
love Crim
Re. masturbating madness
Anonymous
8th Dec 2017 1:37am
Brenda.. simply brilliant.. as always you inspire my sister.. love you..
Dave
Dave

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Re: Re. masturbating madness
8th Dec 2017 1:39am
thank you Dave my brother as do you.. you bring the power with your writes..
love you..
Brenda
love you..
Brenda
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Re: Re. masturbating madness
8th Dec 2017 1:48am
thank you beautiful Daniella such a warm smile & feeling spreading through me from your lovely comment.. I cherish you dear one..
love Brenda
love Brenda
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Re: Re. masturbating madness
8th Dec 2017 11:37am
Re. masturbating madness
8th Dec 2017 4:31am
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8th Dec 2017 11:38am
Re. masturbating madness
8th Dec 2017 12:59pm
......and the LUNATICS PREVAIL!
You are my dear
the mother superior of us all!
Christopher
You are my dear
the mother superior of us all!
Christopher
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Re: Re. masturbating madness
10th Dec 2017 11:46pm
giggles thank you graciously dearest Christopher you always gift me smiles with your comments :)
love Brenda
love Brenda
Re. masturbating madness
Anonymous
10th Dec 2017 1:56am
My love...well dear gods, if coming unleashed and getting lost in madness while masturbating always produced an ending this good...how lucky would we all be? You have outdone yourself here...you will forever keep me in awe of your mind and your poetic brilliance...
I love you fiercely
yours always & forever
xoxoxox Love Taryn
I love you fiercely
yours always & forever
xoxoxox Love Taryn

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Re: Re. masturbating madness
10th Dec 2017 11:49pm
aw my love thank you beautiful.. everday you leave me in awe my erotic Goddess.. you induce so many lusty thoughts ;)
I love you passionately..
love Brenda
I love you passionately..
love Brenda
Re. masturbating madness
10th Dec 2017 3:42am
Crim, you had me at "masturbating". If any activity deserves the reckless abandon and opportunity to touch madness (pun intended), your self exploration is certainly it. And in "menstrual moons"? Even furthermore deliciously decadent. Mental images I'll keep for some time, thank you.
Dreaming of you,
Sandman
Dreaming of you,
Sandman
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Re: Re. masturbating madness
10th Dec 2017 11:52pm
giggle Sandman thank you for exporing the depths of my madness with me ;) happy to leave you with pleasing images..
love Crim
love Crim
Re. masturbating madness
11th Dec 2017 2:11am
Re: Re. masturbating madness
11th Dec 2017 2:12am
thank you beautiful poetess I am smiling wide wide from your comment :)
love Crim
love Crim
Re. masturbating madness
12th Dec 2017 00:10am
"with guttural growls
i sniff the cunt
splayed
& brazenly open
revealing its secrets
as i free fall
inside the spiraling
blackness"
God this is beautiful. Dark and erotic with a perfect dose of insanity. I really love your writing.
i sniff the cunt
splayed
& brazenly open
revealing its secrets
as i free fall
inside the spiraling
blackness"
God this is beautiful. Dark and erotic with a perfect dose of insanity. I really love your writing.
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Re: Re. masturbating madness
12th Dec 2017 00:15am
thank you graciously dearest VKM
your thoughts on this write
gifted me big smiles :)
love Crim
your thoughts on this write
gifted me big smiles :)
love Crim