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Mothers Who Hate
Sitting on a crowded city bus I notice a young woman notice a mother holding her little girls hand
while boarding the bus.
After locating an empty seat the mother pushes her child then snaps at her daughter to sit -the -fuck-down and shut- the -fuck- up! or i'll bust your mouth, you stupid bitch! then slams her tiny body down into her seat.
The young woman is horrified, having witnessed such an abrupt display of child abuse and gets up and moves to the back of the bus to avoid any emotional connection with the child.
Early morning rush hour in full swing. Yelling, horns blowing, and noisy bus patrons deep in conversations. Not one single person said a word, the blind ignorance was priceless...
while boarding the bus.
After locating an empty seat the mother pushes her child then snaps at her daughter to sit -the -fuck-down and shut- the -fuck- up! or i'll bust your mouth, you stupid bitch! then slams her tiny body down into her seat.
The young woman is horrified, having witnessed such an abrupt display of child abuse and gets up and moves to the back of the bus to avoid any emotional connection with the child.
Early morning rush hour in full swing. Yelling, horns blowing, and noisy bus patrons deep in conversations. Not one single person said a word, the blind ignorance was priceless...
Written by
Zazzles
(Broomie)
Published 6th Jun 2017
| Edited 16th Jan 2025
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I wasn't there.Someone told me about this woman and how brutal she is to her baby daughter.
it really hurt me Inside, I had to write about it.
it really hurt me Inside, I had to write about it.
Re. Mothers Who Hate
6th Jun 2017 11:15pm
This is sad I related to this coming from a mother of hate, I don't know why some people won't get involved, I feel for that child 😊
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Re. Mothers Who Hate
7th Jun 2017 2:19am
Hi Epic, yes it breaks my heart when I see or hear about our babies being abused
sorry you lived through a mom who hates.
nice to meet you ..
Zazzles
sorry you lived through a mom who hates.
nice to meet you ..
Zazzles
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7th Jun 2017 5:50am
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Anonymous
7th Jun 2017 6:38am
Zazzy honey. .
this really touched a bloody raw nerve within me, i had to breathe out soul to
make it through this..then suck it back in
too many memories
this really touched a bloody raw nerve within me, i had to breathe out soul to
make it through this..then suck it back in
too many memories
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Yes it's awful it's tragic too .... thanks for stopping by Sun, always a pleasure to see you on my page luv... Zazzles Xx
Re. Mothers Who Hate
7th Jun 2017 7:15pm
This strengthens my lack of belief in the humanity of mankind, generally speaking - I have no solution or hope that helps :-(
excellent thought provoking poem :-)
excellent thought provoking poem :-)
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7th Jun 2017 11:50pm
same David, the things people feed off of and or turn a back too makes no sense to me. And by the by do u say something? fearing that the child will get it worse once home for the embarrassment there horrible mother went through by saying something? It's a tiff call saddlery... Zazzles xxx
Re. Mothers Who Hate
7th Jun 2017 9:17pm
A heartbreaking and infuriating write, Jackie. Haters and those who turn a blind eye should be caned. I recommend a Harlan Ellison short story called "The Whimper of Whipped Dogs" that deals with this type of "innocent bystander" mentality. Fine work from you, meanwhile!
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And then some! people who abuse their children should not be allowed to have them ! its disgusting the way these children are shuffled around the system once in it too, more than half the foster parents are in for the money and are horrible people too.. idk its a crap shoot Crow... thanks for the visit honey-bear Xo Zazzles
Re. Mothers Who Hate
7th Jun 2017 11:54pm
beautiful Jackie it happens sadly way too often in this world..
I really like how you incorporated the blaring sounds of the city with the shocking images of the abusive mother..
it really accompanied the mood of the write perfectly..
love you lady..
xo Brenda
I really like how you incorporated the blaring sounds of the city with the shocking images of the abusive mother..
it really accompanied the mood of the write perfectly..
love you lady..
xo Brenda
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9th Jun 2017 2:29pm
Hi Brenda, yeah it was like I was on that bus too... glad you felt this... love Jackie xo
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Anonymous
8th Jun 2017 5:10am
My Dearest Jackie...too many turn a blind eye...and not only does the cycle continue because of such behavior,...but some life cycles are ended because of it...disturbing ink...well done!
Loves you sis
xoxo Tata
Loves you sis
xoxo Tata
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You know all to well Taryn being a 911 operator yourself. I just can't make any sense of this.
loves you too sis Jackie xoxox
loves you too sis Jackie xoxox
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10th Jun 2017 1:57pm
I see shit like this often in NYC
It's tragic that cunts like this had the audacity to reproduce
It's tragic that cunts like this had the audacity to reproduce
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14th Jul 2017 3:43pm
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I try and live in my own bubble because things like this makes me wanna be hero but it only makes it worse for the child In the end. The odds of making a stink actually helping, a child you may never see again is unlikely, more likely to cause more harm to the child for embarrassing her mother !
It’s a rough and tough call ..
It’s a rough and tough call ..