behold the stars they shine

This is beautiful, Brenda. A breathtaking tale of survival.

thank you lovely lady for your thoughts on this write.. love Brenda

Amazing as always Crimsin.

  Dantalyon

thank you graciously dearest Dantalyon.. love Brenda

This is beautifully written. I love the optimism. Your strength and courage shines strong in this piece. The ability to come from the past and bad experiences. It is truly inspiring. I am definitely adding this one to my Reading List so I can read this again and again. Thanks for sharing something that seems so deeply personal.

thank you beautiful Eswaller your heart embracing and getting this write move me deeply.. love Crim

Felt like I was walking along with you. The poem was
that real to me.. An those stars shinning through you
being makes everything down to earth beautiful

thank you Jerry I'm trying to get out of the way and let them shine.. love you my friend.. xo Brenda

Your soul shines here

thank you dearest Tim :) love Brenda

When all else fails,
we can still look to the stars.
They shine beautifully, even in darkness.
This piece spoke to me, Crimsin, it shines on the page...

thank you beautiful Kasai the stars shine bright in you :) love Crim

poetry becomes part of the bright sky;
luminous, Crim...

thank you dearest John I love your comments.. xo Crim

Such a wonderful ink,  full of light!
Love this Crim...:)

thank you graciously dearest Poe.. love Crim

Lovely dark angel, that last stanza stole my breath.  Stars through your being indeed.  Beautifully written and deeply felt

thank you lovely one you still my breath with your shining soul :) love Crim

this poem really brightened up my day :-)

ehugs :-)

thank you David i'm so happy it did :) love Brenda

Transcendent work Crim, just what I need to read on this glum Sunday.

nothing special about my flesh
except the stars that shine
through my being

Those stars are like jewels on a queen, one to be beheld.  Love this!...    

thank you dearest Sir Crow you are such a kind soul :) love Crim

This one really spoke to me, I love that light and strong side of yours... it speaks of survival...

"so you will know my soul
as it was intended to be" > my favorite lines, it all comes down to that!

Love, Duende

thank you lovely Duende I can only aspire to this day by day revealing my soul as it was intended to be :) love Brenda

My Beautiful Girl...these lines blanket the reader right at the end...all things happen for a reason and it all starts with the Fates...come as you are...nothing more amazing as far as I'm concerned...deeply in love with this as I am with you...

I love you so very much!

Love Taryn xoxo

thank you my love you reach in and touch my heart every time with your compassion, beauty.. I love you so much precious soul :) love Brenda

Brenda.. awe struck.. simply beautiful, just like you.. love...










Dave

thank you Dave for such a beautiful comment.. I love you my brother.. xo Brenda