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Their Various Gods
He won't have her mewling
Whines picked up by his pointed ears
Her groveling a pure disgrace
He prefers her to submit with dignity
A quiet trust in his godhead
His ability to catch the flying barbs
She now simply lives to serve
Acquiescence dropping to her knees
Satisfaction with her lips and tongue
She swallows his ambrosia and thrives
He ululates in his foreign tongue
Calling on their various gods
Each delighted to see such sport
They dispense their manna, dripping pearls
And all is well tonight.
Art by Bruno Wagner
Whines picked up by his pointed ears
Her groveling a pure disgrace
He prefers her to submit with dignity
A quiet trust in his godhead
His ability to catch the flying barbs
She now simply lives to serve
Acquiescence dropping to her knees
Satisfaction with her lips and tongue
She swallows his ambrosia and thrives
He ululates in his foreign tongue
Calling on their various gods
Each delighted to see such sport
They dispense their manna, dripping pearls
And all is well tonight.
Art by Bruno Wagner
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Re. Their Various Gods
20th Apr 2017 10:38pm
Praise-Worthy Ink Sir Crow!!!
Erotic-Wit, Your Wording choice flows as well as defies the norm!!!
Erotic-Wit, Your Wording choice flows as well as defies the norm!!!
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23rd Apr 2017 8:49pm
Sometimes I wonder if I'm too concerned with flow, rhyme and rhythm. It's the content that counts, of course. If it's expressed with some finesse all the better, as long as it's in service to the theme and not a gimmick. I often feel guilty of gimmickry, using too much alliteration and such. I'm working on it... Thank you Soul!
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25th Apr 2017 3:32am
Shit we all do it Crow...Buddy if we didn't constantly question ourselves...we'd never better....Always Flow,Always point-Never sell Yourself short!!!!
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20th Apr 2017 11:23pm
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23rd Apr 2017 8:51pm
Thanks Josh. I tend to live in a fantasy world but I can get away with it here. There are limits, of course...
Re. Their Various Gods
20th Apr 2017 11:34pm
Sir Crow, I appreciate your adding to my vocabulary with the awesome "ululates." Bravo!
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23rd Apr 2017 8:53pm
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23rd Apr 2017 8:59pm
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Anonymous
21st Apr 2017 9:54pm
Oh, how the Gods
fornicate ...
stunning imagery, Sir Crow
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23rd Apr 2017 9:02pm
If you hear the sound of thunder, that's what they're up to. One theory anyway. Thanks Devlin!
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Anonymous
22nd Apr 2017 9:39pm
Oooohell yes my crowfly..
Fucking love it
Fucking love it
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23rd Apr 2017 9:03pm