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Earthen Child
your poetry is magic
it kisses my skin
as a pure summer rain
*
transports me to the forests
hidden in the lush undergrowth
are imps and fairies
*
where the druid maidens dance
as the the boughs of the trees
bend in the wind keeping rhythm
with the beat of their hearts
*
your poetry is magic
it fills me with wonderment
brings back memories of my youth
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time spent living in a tree
where I dreamed
of living at one with nature
*
eating berries
drinking cream from wild goats
free from the confines of society
*
your poetry is magic
it finesses the soul
Earthen child you enchant
through your eyes I see
the great Goddess
*
I cavort in her shade
you poetry a redwood
in this sacred place
Written by
crimsin
(Unveiling)
Published 2nd Jan 2017
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Anonymous
2nd Jan 2017 10:47pm
Brenda.. this is totally beautiful.. i love it..
Dave
Dave
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2nd Jan 2017 11:15pm
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Anonymous
2nd Jan 2017 10:54pm
My Beautiful Brenda...such beauty and calming in this splendid ink...I especially loved these lines...so love it when you go "here"...to that place within you...I fall deeper each time...
"where the druid maidens dance
as the the boughs of the trees
bend in the wind keeping rhythm
with the beat of their hearts"
I can just see this so vividly and we know I love vivid, lol....
I love you so much
xoxo Taryn
"where the druid maidens dance
as the the boughs of the trees
bend in the wind keeping rhythm
with the beat of their hearts"
I can just see this so vividly and we know I love vivid, lol....
I love you so much
xoxo Taryn
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2nd Jan 2017 11:17pm
thank you my beautiful one so grateful you found this calming.. you know me so well while trying to bring other's peace I was myself seeking it.. I love you my dearest one :)
xo Brenda
xo Brenda
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Anonymous
2nd Jan 2017 11:58pm
Absolutely beautiful 💓
So many portions that I loved so very much.
Truly enchanting write, Crim.
So many portions that I loved so very much.
Truly enchanting write, Crim.
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3rd Jan 2017 5:06am
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3rd Jan 2017 5:21am
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We share the same dream, dear Crim
All I can say is: yòur poetry is magic!
Love, Duende
edit: forgot to mention that the picture is stunning and suits the poem so well!
All I can say is: yòur poetry is magic!
Love, Duende
edit: forgot to mention that the picture is stunning and suits the poem so well!
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3rd Jan 2017 5:26am
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3rd Jan 2017 7:06am
So amazing, Crim, taking us to simpler times,
touched by nature.
Very beautiful, as is the photo you chose...
touched by nature.
Very beautiful, as is the photo you chose...
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3rd Jan 2017 2:19pm
There is such an ethereal, graceful quality to this one that it makes one feel caressed. Your muse is as beautiful as you, Brenda. Words from the soul are the most beautiful. Very much enjoyed this one. Much love... :)
Willow
Willow
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7th Jan 2017 8:00am
thank you beautiful Willow i'm pleased this had such a gentle touch to it..
love Brenda :)
love Brenda :)
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4th Jan 2017 10:26pm
I'm delighted with these enchanting lines, Crim. You're aware of Nature's magical properties and celebrate them. Wish I could join you in that redwood's shade!
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7th Jan 2017 8:03am
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This is a great write Crim :) I like you how you like to be in touch with nature and all of its glory, rather than be attached to the confines of society. I can relate to that big time. There's nothing like spending time in the forest to connect to the spirit of the earth.
Thanks for sharing this piece, I really enjoyed reading it👍
Sincerely,
Mike
Thanks for sharing this piece, I really enjoyed reading it👍
Sincerely,
Mike
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Anonymous
5th Jan 2017 3:44pm
how gorgeous, beautiful one
the tones herein are striking
xo
the tones herein are striking
xo
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7th Jan 2017 8:04am
thank you beautiful one for being here and showing me love..
I love you lady..
xo Brenda
I love you lady..
xo Brenda
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6th Jan 2017 3:03pm
sounds like a beautiful place - If I could go there, I wouldn't come back :-)
excellent ink :-)
excellent ink :-)
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7th Jan 2017 8:06am
thank you David though there is such a place it's right here in this sacred place I escape there with poetry and you can too :)
love Brenda
love Brenda
Bonjour, bonjour
7th Jan 2017 6:35pm
You have given me so much peace
here. I am depicted speechless.
I have missed you, my ladyloves
so so much. So' I'm stealing hugs
and kisses.
Muwahs
-Howlings
here. I am depicted speechless.
I have missed you, my ladyloves
so so much. So' I'm stealing hugs
and kisses.
Muwahs
-Howlings
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7th Jan 2017 8:33pm