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I Give Up
I finally took my final breath
And gave up on your shit
I finally embrace my death
And on my grave you shall spit
Broken and beaten
The way you like to see me
You are a mischievous cretin
This is how I go, a perfect end for me
Why did I trust you from the beginning
I sadly ask myself
My vitals signs are waning
And now I drift to Hell
For love this all was done
I’m a miserable, failing clod
And as I lay I see the Sun
Starting to evaporate my blood
I give up on everything,
And slowly drift away
I will say you were truly alluring,
Until my final day
And gave up on your shit
I finally embrace my death
And on my grave you shall spit
Broken and beaten
The way you like to see me
You are a mischievous cretin
This is how I go, a perfect end for me
Why did I trust you from the beginning
I sadly ask myself
My vitals signs are waning
And now I drift to Hell
For love this all was done
I’m a miserable, failing clod
And as I lay I see the Sun
Starting to evaporate my blood
I give up on everything,
And slowly drift away
I will say you were truly alluring,
Until my final day
Published 12th Nov 2016
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13th Nov 2016 00:19am
I love the ending,
You were truly alluring ,
until my final day
It's just perfect and so trag if too :( to feel the only way to escape someone is death. All too true though when someone has a tight deep bond to you. I feel helpless in this but also strength. I like it
You were truly alluring ,
until my final day
It's just perfect and so trag if too :( to feel the only way to escape someone is death. All too true though when someone has a tight deep bond to you. I feel helpless in this but also strength. I like it
13th Nov 2016 1:38am
