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Don't Cry For Me
I heard you praying in purlieu of my light,
while aghast filled your lungs before I...
took my last breath.
….and I know it created a void within a heart-
gravely wounded by the pain of me leaving my
earthly dwelling, causing a numbness
that has desensitized you with sadness,
making your steps hollow.
Please don’t cry for me.
I’ve lived a good life in vitality and in longevity,
rooted in the passage of scriptures.
My lovely bones rest in a new domicile
in a Calvary box that was never meant to contain me~
*because I’m not there.*
I’m basking eternally in majestic splendor of angelic beauty
not known to the living.
My health is restored and there’s a hymn in my spirit
and if you would just listen ….listen in quiet solitude;
you can still hear the familiar sound of my voice.
If you would just find peace in your slumber;
you can still see my face and kiss my cheek in your dreams,
or re-experience my laughter through déjà vu figments
from the million memories I left behind.
If you would just walk outside…
you’ll find me in the warm breeze that bathe you in comfort,
or the cold chill that swathe you in calm benevolent,
or the rain that drench your skin in remembrance of me.
If …you… would… just… breathe…
you would discover that...
I'm your air,
…and not even death can change that.
Rain~
(In Loving Memory Of A Friend’s Mom)
https://youtu.be/QFUSP9_IOkM
Written by
rain1courtel
(RainC)
Published 17th Feb 2016
| Edited 1st Apr 2016
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Re. Don't Cry For Me
17th Feb 2016 2:20am
What loving tender words of comfort for a heart broken with the loss of someone so special. No better way to honor someone than to recall the special moments and the wonderful way that they made you feel. This was beautifully done as alway my lovely Rain.
Keith
Keith
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Re: Re. Don't Cry For Me
17th Feb 2016 2:27am
hey Keith, thank you so much hon. I can't imagine losing my mama, but I do ache with him, I really do. Appreciate your kind words....
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17th Feb 2016 4:52am
Thank you for the sweet words Lady T! Actually, I've never met her..... Wait, I take that back, I've met her through the eyes of her son, through conversations of her works, good deeds, her personality, spirit, and how amazing she was. His love for her was so powerful that I could feel her through him….if that makes sense.
Re. Don't Cry For Me
17th Feb 2016 2:57am
I can relate personally. Next week will be 3 years since my mom passed. Very touching, beautiful thoughts to remind that love never dies... jj
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Oh JJ, I do remember the loss of your mom; may she Rest In Peace. I recall your journey of taking care of her up until she passed and I also remember your struggles during the aftermath. Truly it was during a time where your will to survive and your endurance was tested. The strength of you shined center-stage. xoxo
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Re. Don't Cry For Me
17th Feb 2016 5:39am
Very beautiful tribute this is Rain. .. I'm sure your friend is deeply honored. .. such a lovely gesture from you to write this for her...
Much respect
And my deepest condolences
Naaj
Much respect
And my deepest condolences
Naaj
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18th Feb 2016 4:28am
Thanks Naajir for your words of comfort shifted towards him, I can only hope it made him smile….
Re. Don't Cry For Me
17th Feb 2016 6:27am
"If you would just breathe you would discover I am your air"
Phenomenal
Great and genuine - all
Phenomenal
Great and genuine - all
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18th Feb 2016 4:30am
I do believe she's everywhere, a presence of peace. Thankya kindly Whale…
Re. Don't Cry For Me
17th Feb 2016 10:38am
I loved every word of this beautiful tribute Rain but, written in the first person, you gave me quite a scare dear girl. That your light and love shines through your poetry is a wonderful thing to behold.
Love,
T
Love,
T
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18th Feb 2016 4:32am
Thanks so much funnyman! I wanted to give him a message from her.... words that speak, "it is well with my soul". Appreciate the kind words sweety….
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Re. Don't Cry For Me
17th Feb 2016 11:04pm
beautiful poetry. you include joy & wisdom here,
all that heaven allows...
all that heaven allows...
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18th Feb 2016 1:34am
So sweet of you to give of your beautiful heart n' share your talent
with such a wonderful tribute to
a friend's loss. Like you, I don't even want to think of this loss. Already loss my Dad, so I can really relate to this pain. outstanding spill
with such a wonderful tribute to
a friend's loss. Like you, I don't even want to think of this loss. Already loss my Dad, so I can really relate to this pain. outstanding spill
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18th Feb 2016 4:38am
Hey Rich, thank you hon. I too buried my father years ago, though the loss of a mom cuts deeper, I’m sure. Just wanted my friend to know I’m there with him mentally, emotionally and spiritually...
Re. Don't Cry For Me
18th Feb 2016 1:07pm
Your words were more than comforting, they were gracefully placed into the hearts of those who know the familiar pain of losing a loved one. Big sis, You are a Queen in every sense of the word. Your strength, and personality always reach through the pages and touch me. My sincerest condolences for the loss of your, and your friends loved ones. There is undoubtedly a calming and soothing presence in this Amazing piece.
❤️
❤️
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18th Feb 2016 8:56pm
Winter, this was a beautiful statement hun! I hope my friend finds comfort in your words and the many other poets who have shown support of this ink. This is indeed a sad time for him and I can only pray that there's a small amount of solace within my homage. Thanks sweety!
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24th Feb 2016 3:57pm
".....Don't cry for me
Don't shed a tear
The time I shared with you will always be
And when I'm gone, please carry on
Don't cry for me" CeCe Winan
I am just now able to float above life's waters but I am breathing. I thank you for this, more than life to me right now. I Love You xoxoxoxo
Don't shed a tear
The time I shared with you will always be
And when I'm gone, please carry on
Don't cry for me" CeCe Winan
I am just now able to float above life's waters but I am breathing. I thank you for this, more than life to me right now. I Love You xoxoxoxo
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