She Had To Go.....

BRAVO BRAVO Lady Rain.......luvin this one and you know why.....LOL!!! Enough is enough!! Great write...made me smile.....purple luv your way xo :)

hey purple princess, yes, I believe I do know why... :) Glad you like the ink, and took a smile from it...... xo  
#hugs

OMG Rain!  
I am thunderstruck! My heart bleeds and breathes for you sis...
This was so emotional for me it hit home. I know you chica almost 4 years babe
and trough your poetry you share I know you pretty well....
i love you lady chin up, better  to move on and live than stay and die,,,
Jackie xoxox

hey J! :) So thrilled at your excitement of how this related to you in a tiny way, not thrilled about the pain of course, but it's always a joy to get readers to feel your ink, no matter the emotion, though this ink is completely a figment of my wild imagination. You know how I get down... :)  Better add a disclaimer. Thanks sexy one and appreciate you listing her.... #Hugs

WOW is all  I'm sayin.. ffs u got chops...

Now you put another song in my head, Eric Clapton's "She's Gone", not to be mistaken for the tune by Hall and Oates.

Hey Ted, both songs, including H&Oates brings a great vibe to this ink. ;) Your musical references are always so spot on. Thank you hun!

Fictional perhaps, but there is truth in the story that everyone relates to... When sex is nothing more than a convenient replacement for masturbation because your hands are tired of the same old familiar lies, it's time to pack yer baggage and go...

JJ

Maybe a lot of folks can relate to this jj, doubt if everyone can. Though it is a damn shame that this is truth for so many. The inspiration for this ink was the movie ‘The Color Purple’. I couldn’t help but spin it with this era's mentality.. Thank you luv for reading... :)

A very picturesque narrative from one who I cosider a superior creative force.  Your ink always has such feeling and depth.  I suppose that's author always owns a piece of my heart and mind :-)

‘a superior creative force’? You’re too kind Archie, thank you! :) I channeled the inner spirit of Ms. Celie and her no love, desire, emotions for mister, while he pleasured himself’ and she just lays there in disgust, allowing him to…well….…you’ve seen the movie. Your last line…. so sweet! xo Thank you for listing her!

comes a time you gotta load up the old Dodge & drive away.
one of those rain-y night proverbs...

Love it John! :) Riding off in the dodge has such a vivid image, then a ford. Lol… Thank you so much!

At least she was flying out first class
Hopefully he's forgotten by the second glass of champagne
Intense rage

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Lol…maybe by the third glass, Poet. Hell, a whole bottle of champagne may be needed just because... :0
Thank you so much for stopping by, gotta catch-up on some of your ink in a few…

Mesmerizing, intriguing, so close and dense a piece, dear Rain. you're a wordsmith in the truest sense of a word ... xo

I share these sentiments rain. Every single word here--- I concur

Such a flattering response Chiyo! :) Humbled by this! Thank you lovely one, and I appreciate you keeping her.
Pen love~

…and I share the same response to you Wanderer. :) You’re much too kind! Thank you sir!

First class poem, very well done.

JT, happy you flew RainAir, glad the ride was smooth! :) Thank you for the visit…

may be fictional but it's fecking brilliant & damn spot on [take it from a girl who has laundered waaaaay too much cologne from her sheets]
makes a tad tearful, rainy lady, yup definitely got a lil something in my eye
love this
xo

*hands dancedoll a Kleenex*
We live, we learn, we grow, we evolve …we are not our choices, mistakes, or past transgressions. We are our strength and courage to get through them. I love the truth of your response sweet K! Thank you beautiful and happy you’re keeping her…. xo

Excellent ink Rain ...

So happy it is fictional ox

Hey there sweet Je! I’m a fictional kinda’ girl, often! ;) Thank you for stopping by with a little poetic-love. Appreciate ya!

Such a bitter-sweet , explicit expression of the all too frequent harsh side of  reality.....of a  relationship based on sexual pleasure....without the 'security' of commitment......a grand finale with all the First CLASS courage to let go.....and move on.....

( Yet...i cannot help thinking, that  for those who become involved in such [sad] couplings, there will invariably be those few pieces of ' excess baggage ' that can never be totally left behind............)

Rain, mo Chara....your piece impacts readers with a powerful, emotional punch! But, i am truly glad that it was NOT inspired by personal circumstances! xo

( Yet...i cannot help thinking, that  for those who become involved in such [sad] couplings, there will invariably be those few pieces of ' excess baggage ' that can never be totally left behind.......) <---- I love this, but I do feel anybody can shed ‘all’ excessive baggage, if they identify internally what made them initially embrace and hoard the unnecessary burdens. I heart you DarkE! :)  Always love your thought provoking comments and positive energy…. Thank you sweety!

She had to go…    
packed her grief and misery, first class,    

loved this beginning that signals a great journey ahead....love what you do!
TWIRL CURTSY BOW

“loved this beginning that signals a great journey ahead.”<--- That was the daylight I wanted many to see. Thank you for the ink-love Feen! :) Blows kiss and curtsy bow to ya….

nice, was glued to the hood of this journey conjured by your imagination...

Hey handsome, thankya!  :) Good seeing you and your sweet commentary….

I believe this could be applicable to either side! N yea felt it for sure my dear Rain :)

…absolutely Rich! :) Definitely relatable to anyone, regardless the gender…
Appreciate ya! #hugs

Ms. Rain,
 Real or not this piece is full of emotion. You really breathed life into this . Loved the perspective from which it was told. Could truly feel the emptiness in the act; as just going through the motions. Hoping that there was something more, but at the same time knowing there wasn't.
Then the realization that you will never have it with the person you are with. Then to face that truth and actually have the courage to leave.
Very real and touching piece. You, Miss Rain always find  a way to make an emotional connection between the reader and the ink.

Keith

Keith, I really love reading your comments. You always share  how the ink made you feel and that's so refreshing.  Just an adding positive flare to your poetic support and greatly appreciated. Most of what I write is 90% fictional, but I always find something real to give the ink a heartbeat, even if it's a faint one. Thank you darlin'!

My dearest Rain,
I can't help but compliment the soul and sensuous tones you always present so boldly. "I'm in love" , with your words, your phrases, your vibes, your pen.. Just lord have mercy ..
😍😍 You always leave me in awe and needing more!!!
Sending hugs and love right in your direction lovely

....lil' sis, your comments are beautiful, positive, charming, and inspiring, just like your personality! :)
 I smile each time you visit me. Thank you lovely one....xo

So THAT'S why she left me. Now it all makes perfectly good sense. I've said it before, but I love/hate how some of your poetry forces me to acknowledge that I have been THAT man at times in my life. You've had me close to calling certain women and apologizing after reading some of your pieces. That's how you get down Poetess, and it is lovely.

hey there good-looking, I think I also told you that I adore the love/hate relationship you have with my ink. I'm pleased to paint a shadow that mimic a reflection of old ways and tendencies. Makes you appreciate self-growth. :) Thanks hun, will be catching up to your work and a few others in a couple of days. Not in a mood to read poetry right now.... Pen Respect~

Yep.... Time to go indeed.. your insights  peels away the layers exposing the rotted fruit within. ... your pen pierces with such precision Rain. ..absolute in it's aim. .

hey Naajir, thanks luv! Inspired by the scene of Mister climbing on top of Ms. Celie doin' his business... (Color Purple)