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Spilling Nightshades
Draining soul-veins of caustic lye,
one flowered vomit at a time~
Guts are laced on Nightshaded wine,
blood-petals and injured moonlight.
Tracing scarred roses .. deep inside,
raw tinctures burn through silken pride.
Eyes streak silver.. freshly cut thyme~
spillage erupts.. from throat to lip lines..
vexed puddle leaks.. dark messy shine.
Slick drops to soil.. A purging spell~
..salted 'baby's breath' fated pale..
..lily-tipped scorn.. too-lewd bluebells..
..'angel's trumpet' in wingless wail..
..crushed hemlock stems untwining 'selves..
..bleeding hearts in shattered star-fell..
Craven thorn roots top liquid pile
expelling shadows.. fables.. trials..
Peaceful fever sparketh witchfire~
cleansing by flame, stagnant desire.
..toes curl bare ..near blooming ash pyre..
..an everspill of binds and briars.
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Re. Spilling Nightshades
24th Sep 2015 6:13am
Ohhh huuuney be witch me with your brew.
To taste a moment of you...magic
" dark messy shine. "
In three words eclipse me like no other. Sweet, happy you are here.
Love you like no other.
Great piece T! So fuckin good to seeya!
💋Jennifer
To taste a moment of you...magic
" dark messy shine. "
In three words eclipse me like no other. Sweet, happy you are here.
Love you like no other.
Great piece T! So fuckin good to seeya!
💋Jennifer
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Re: Re. Spilling Nightshades
25th Sep 2015 2:51am
Awwes.. I missed you too creampuff! has been a battle of Will [endless] plus
crap fer internet lately.. lol.
but? I am stubborn & lovin sweet hell on you fer the read. means soo much
to share a purifying moment.. was much needed.. sendin u *sugar on ur dreams..
ty fer always just 'being' lil darlin..
mwahs *insanely..
~d
crap fer internet lately.. lol.
but? I am stubborn & lovin sweet hell on you fer the read. means soo much
to share a purifying moment.. was much needed.. sendin u *sugar on ur dreams..
ty fer always just 'being' lil darlin..
mwahs *insanely..
~d
Re. Spilling Nightshades
Anonymous
24th Sep 2015 6:17am
'one flowered vomit at a time~'
. . .oh my. . .*blush*
. . .oh my. . .*blush*
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Re: Re. Spilling Nightshades
25th Sep 2015 6:58am
omg Lady Dev.. you enchantress by blush!
pls do pardon.. when purge is needed.. I've learned it must almost *always be
messy to yknw, *count..;) eg.
.. I shoulda warning-labeled this maybe.. *no snacks while readin, soul purge in progress* .
humbled always to see you & will be catchin up over next days..
you are all class m'lady! much luvz
~d
pls do pardon.. when purge is needed.. I've learned it must almost *always be
messy to yknw, *count..;) eg.
.. I shoulda warning-labeled this maybe.. *no snacks while readin, soul purge in progress* .
humbled always to see you & will be catchin up over next days..
you are all class m'lady! much luvz
~d
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Re: Re. Spilling Nightshades
25th Sep 2015 3:35pm
Sweet SissyOFK.. *face kisses* fer your tender maulins.. very much feel 'drained anew'..
was so glad to settle my pieces & hope it 'shatters back together where I want it to..
.. and 'bout that squirmy wingless angel? [guilty look].. um yes, well, it had it coming! hmpft!..
and plus it wasn't wearin' our specified green, so, yes, handled.. ;) haa
lovin lil CS's on your Faerie stuffs everly sissy..
could Not do w/out your healing magicks..ever!
~d...the flower abusing half ;)
was so glad to settle my pieces & hope it 'shatters back together where I want it to..
.. and 'bout that squirmy wingless angel? [guilty look].. um yes, well, it had it coming! hmpft!..
and plus it wasn't wearin' our specified green, so, yes, handled.. ;) haa
lovin lil CS's on your Faerie stuffs everly sissy..
could Not do w/out your healing magicks..ever!
~d...the flower abusing half ;)
Re. Spilling Nightshades
Anonymous
24th Sep 2015 8:11am
Lovely writings!
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Re: Re. Spilling Nightshades
25th Sep 2015 3:45pm
My sweetest thanx fer your time.. it is always appreciated..
wishing you a lovely day, as I smile to see you here!
~d
wishing you a lovely day, as I smile to see you here!
~d
Re. Spilling Nightshades
First, hi and hugs > have missed your presence.
Such a beautiful write. Spellbound as always.
I hope what ever ails you> heart or body > is purged
from you beautiful one. I see hope in the ending. No better way to start
the day than a good read>warm wishes for the best to you.
Keith
Such a beautiful write. Spellbound as always.
I hope what ever ails you> heart or body > is purged
from you beautiful one. I see hope in the ending. No better way to start
the day than a good read>warm wishes for the best to you.
Keith
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Re: Re. Spilling Nightshades
25th Sep 2015 5:05pm
Awwe, you are getting my mushy moods goin Keith.. missed you too misters!
spiritual peace came with this one but it gave me muse & flower fits.. lol. days of them..
Adores you and sendin huggs fer taking time on me dears. I will be around asap..
to be gone days seems to take a few more catching up. a giggle fact to be sure ;)
hv a shinin day.. she sez.. in curtsy
~d
spiritual peace came with this one but it gave me muse & flower fits.. lol. days of them..
Adores you and sendin huggs fer taking time on me dears. I will be around asap..
to be gone days seems to take a few more catching up. a giggle fact to be sure ;)
hv a shinin day.. she sez.. in curtsy
~d
Re. Spilling Nightshades
24th Sep 2015 1:24pm
ooooh that opening li[n]e cuts like a knife, sister mine. cuntycleverness. boom!
it's so good seeing you write again
#ninjakittypounce&snuggles
^^^^^
is for the missings of mah sissy & her pens
*
someone needs to bring "craven" back ltm [i love that word] & uncouth & loins lol anyhooooooos
you're from another era, ain't ya? too good for our time, too good indeed...
"Guts are laced on Nightshaded wine,
blood-petals and injured moonlight.
Tracing scarred roses .. deep inside,
tinctures burn raw through silken pride.
Eyes streak silver.. freshly cut thyme~
spillage erupts.. from throat to lip lines..
vexed puddle leaks.. dark messy shine."
^^^^^
ja, had to stop or i'd copy-pasta the entire thing lulz
you found guts for the gutless [?] brava, does your brilliance know no bounds
... this is flawless. your wordplay, the rhythm, the emotions that pound nails to palm... oh godess, darling, i am enamored & in awe.
if you've not heard theatre of tragedy, you must, reading you reminds me of them always
loves you to snippets of paper snowflakes
xoxoxoxoxoxox
^^^^
extras because
mwahsmwahs
it's so good seeing you write again
#ninjakittypounce&snuggles
^^^^^
is for the missings of mah sissy & her pens
*
someone needs to bring "craven" back ltm [i love that word] & uncouth & loins lol anyhooooooos
you're from another era, ain't ya? too good for our time, too good indeed...
"Guts are laced on Nightshaded wine,
blood-petals and injured moonlight.
Tracing scarred roses .. deep inside,
tinctures burn raw through silken pride.
Eyes streak silver.. freshly cut thyme~
spillage erupts.. from throat to lip lines..
vexed puddle leaks.. dark messy shine."
^^^^^
ja, had to stop or i'd copy-pasta the entire thing lulz
you found guts for the gutless [?] brava, does your brilliance know no bounds
... this is flawless. your wordplay, the rhythm, the emotions that pound nails to palm... oh godess, darling, i am enamored & in awe.
if you've not heard theatre of tragedy, you must, reading you reminds me of them always
loves you to snippets of paper snowflakes
xoxoxoxoxoxox
^^^^
extras because
mwahsmwahs
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Re: Re. Spilling Nightshades
25th Sep 2015 6:00pm
you are killin me in grin minxy sister K! omff.. I missed you! *cuddle maulin u ..viciously.
my boom is at your service darlin one, in everly fashions.. soo needed ur giggles.*mwah
I do agrees those classics shud be kept in play.. at all cost & by savage hackery..;)
luvz knowin u get my need to lick those flavored words.. uncouth & loins.. rofl .. but no
vein tho?.. I mite pout ;( haa. or add craven kink sumwhere..oh -you inspire again!
your snippets sing to my heart sister-mine..
squishy everkissin ur toes m'doll!
~d
my boom is at your service darlin one, in everly fashions.. soo needed ur giggles.*mwah
I do agrees those classics shud be kept in play.. at all cost & by savage hackery..;)
luvz knowin u get my need to lick those flavored words.. uncouth & loins.. rofl .. but no
vein tho?.. I mite pout ;( haa. or add craven kink sumwhere..oh -you inspire again!
your snippets sing to my heart sister-mine..
squishy everkissin ur toes m'doll!
~d
Re. Spilling Nightshades
24th Sep 2015 1:48pm
where does one "go from here"?
usually "there"........be it anywhere
usually "there"........be it anywhere
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Re: Re. Spilling Nightshades
25th Sep 2015 6:04pm
Yeps..there & there.. by & bye..you know & I know you do.. ;)
soo good to see you, Sirz o D..
my cali mountain has been givin me fits but I'm backed by giggle..
cherish you misters.. hughug
~d
soo good to see you, Sirz o D..
my cali mountain has been givin me fits but I'm backed by giggle..
cherish you misters.. hughug
~d
Re. Spilling Nightshades
24th Sep 2015 3:28pm
lovely d~ where do I start so in awe of your strong yet vulnerable brew..
"Tracing scarred roses .. deep inside,
tinctures burn raw through silken pride.
Eyes streak silver.. freshly cut thyme~
spillage erupts.. from throat to lip lines..
vexed puddle leaks.. dark messy shine"
feeling you one this beautiful held me spellbound..
"Craven thorn roots top liquid pile
expelling shadows.. fables.. trials..
Peaceful fever sparketh witchfire~ "
magically cleansing yourself of all that ails you so brilliant..
under your spell lovely lady..
love Brenda
"Tracing scarred roses .. deep inside,
tinctures burn raw through silken pride.
Eyes streak silver.. freshly cut thyme~
spillage erupts.. from throat to lip lines..
vexed puddle leaks.. dark messy shine"
feeling you one this beautiful held me spellbound..
"Craven thorn roots top liquid pile
expelling shadows.. fables.. trials..
Peaceful fever sparketh witchfire~ "
magically cleansing yourself of all that ails you so brilliant..
under your spell lovely lady..
love Brenda
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Re: Re. Spilling Nightshades
25th Sep 2015 6:14pm
You are a sweetness that my mornin needed Crimcrim.. *snuggles of ty
the mess of purge.. and oh, the cleanup after.. a'grzz everytm.;)
loves you Brenda.. you warm & balm my spirit m'ladyluv!
~d
the mess of purge.. and oh, the cleanup after.. a'grzz everytm.;)
loves you Brenda.. you warm & balm my spirit m'ladyluv!
~d
Re. Spilling Nightshades
24th Sep 2015 4:00pm
What an incantation you have designed here, Dark. I could hear the drums in the background to the rhythm of the syllables on every line! A black cauldron with boiling liquid while all those around chant your words.
".lily-tipped scorn.. too-lewd bluebells..
..'angel's trumpet' in wingless wail..
..crushed hemlock stems untwining 'selves..
..bleeding hearts in shattered star-fell.. "
Your words are, at the same time magical, heartfelt and tragic. As if you were calling out the inner Self to come forth and bless you with its wisdom. Love this piece!!
".lily-tipped scorn.. too-lewd bluebells..
..'angel's trumpet' in wingless wail..
..crushed hemlock stems untwining 'selves..
..bleeding hearts in shattered star-fell.. "
Your words are, at the same time magical, heartfelt and tragic. As if you were calling out the inner Self to come forth and bless you with its wisdom. Love this piece!!
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Re: Re. Spilling Nightshades
25th Sep 2015 6:28pm
Gotsa hv drums in there major darlin.. invoke & evoke, then spill it.. yes? ;)
Spirit needs a day off sumtimes & mine took dayssss.. lol.. but got the calm
bk & reigning in the muse.. o the horrors of my tragic stubborn. teehee
luvz havin you here..hope u hv good wknd hrs!
evercurtsies & ty's,
~d
Spirit needs a day off sumtimes & mine took dayssss.. lol.. but got the calm
bk & reigning in the muse.. o the horrors of my tragic stubborn. teehee
luvz havin you here..hope u hv good wknd hrs!
evercurtsies & ty's,
~d
Re. Spilling Nightshades
Anonymous
24th Sep 2015 4:17pm
Okay. The spewing of internal vomit is alive and well withing the lines of THIS fantastic poetical endeavor, dark.
When you purge, you friggin' purge, and more power to ya.
There are so many outta sight lines in phrases within the confines of this poem, that to list them all I would have to lift and post the whole poem, it is THAT energetically profound. Just know that this is excellent and hopefully this purging poem will have a beneficial effect upon you.
When you purge, you friggin' purge, and more power to ya.
There are so many outta sight lines in phrases within the confines of this poem, that to list them all I would have to lift and post the whole poem, it is THAT energetically profound. Just know that this is excellent and hopefully this purging poem will have a beneficial effect upon you.
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Re: Re. Spilling Nightshades
25th Sep 2015 6:34pm
Omfg ..I am in such grin.. that vomit line was so iffy & did try hard to soften it
but.. lol.. yes.. was good purge.. feel like I need a dainty napkin of lace to dab
my lips after this one Jerry!.. to regain my graces n all. haa
You are so sweet with reply and I shall be at my catchin up all wknd.. need my
fix of wit & will be around soon misters.. cherish you m'friend..hugs
~d
but.. lol.. yes.. was good purge.. feel like I need a dainty napkin of lace to dab
my lips after this one Jerry!.. to regain my graces n all. haa
You are so sweet with reply and I shall be at my catchin up all wknd.. need my
fix of wit & will be around soon misters.. cherish you m'friend..hugs
~d
Re. Spilling Nightshades
24th Sep 2015 5:44pm
This is magic Darksighs! Some of it's funny, some just flat out fantastique. A few of the lines remind me of the witches words in "Macbeth" minus the prophecy.
"Draining soul-veins of caustic lye,
one flowered vomit at a time~
Guts are laced on Nightshaded wine,"
Off to a gruesome start, but it's also funny and intoxicating with deadly nightshade added to the Amontillado.
"Slick drops to soil.. A purging spell~
..salted 'baby's breath' fated pale..
..lily-tipped scorn.. too-lewd bluebells..
..'angel's trumpet' in wingless wail..
..crushed hemlock stems untwining 'selves.."
"Fire burn and cauldron bubble." Here's where I get a flashback to "Macbeth," but you're casting a spell to relieve your creative doldrums, I believe. You left out the lizard's leg and owlet's wing.
" Peaceful fever sparketh witchfire~
cleansing by flame, stagnant desire."
Gorgeous! Your style is lightly archaic and has an almost musical lilt that would carry if read aloud. Excellent write Darksighs, one of your best. Your spell worked. "Stars, hide thy fires. Let not light see my black and deep desires."
"Draining soul-veins of caustic lye,
one flowered vomit at a time~
Guts are laced on Nightshaded wine,"
Off to a gruesome start, but it's also funny and intoxicating with deadly nightshade added to the Amontillado.
"Slick drops to soil.. A purging spell~
..salted 'baby's breath' fated pale..
..lily-tipped scorn.. too-lewd bluebells..
..'angel's trumpet' in wingless wail..
..crushed hemlock stems untwining 'selves.."
"Fire burn and cauldron bubble." Here's where I get a flashback to "Macbeth," but you're casting a spell to relieve your creative doldrums, I believe. You left out the lizard's leg and owlet's wing.
" Peaceful fever sparketh witchfire~
cleansing by flame, stagnant desire."
Gorgeous! Your style is lightly archaic and has an almost musical lilt that would carry if read aloud. Excellent write Darksighs, one of your best. Your spell worked. "Stars, hide thy fires. Let not light see my black and deep desires."
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Re: Re. Spilling Nightshades
25th Sep 2015 6:47pm
Sweet hellos Sir Crow..
You got the funnies in here & knew you wud!.. tyty..gave me many smirks to write this one
and blend every damn woe into a purge by poison.. almost significant to rid toxin by toxin..
I am humbled by such comparisons & adore you endless fer takin the time.. what goes on
in my minds magick circle can get gruesome, but soo worth the healing at end..plus I try to
add sum shine to soften.. we will see how that works I s'pose.. eeeks to muses!
enjoy ur wknd dear man..
~d
You got the funnies in here & knew you wud!.. tyty..gave me many smirks to write this one
and blend every damn woe into a purge by poison.. almost significant to rid toxin by toxin..
I am humbled by such comparisons & adore you endless fer takin the time.. what goes on
in my minds magick circle can get gruesome, but soo worth the healing at end..plus I try to
add sum shine to soften.. we will see how that works I s'pose.. eeeks to muses!
enjoy ur wknd dear man..
~d
Re. Spilling Nightshades
24th Sep 2015 6:07pm
Re: Re. Spilling Nightshades
25th Sep 2015 6:51pm
Appreciate ur presence Mistah Magics.. evergood to see you!
purge dun & now to the catchin up.. lol.
ty fer support & smile m'friend.. hope ur wknd is amazing ;)
~d
purge dun & now to the catchin up.. lol.
ty fer support & smile m'friend.. hope ur wknd is amazing ;)
~d
Re. Spilling Nightshades
24th Sep 2015 10:08pm
Re: Re. Spilling Nightshades
25th Sep 2015 11:22pm
My thankins & well wishes sweetie..
I very much appreciate your time and read!
best wknd to you,
~d
I very much appreciate your time and read!
best wknd to you,
~d
Re. Spilling Nightshades
24th Sep 2015 10:37pm
Re: Re. Spilling Nightshades
25th Sep 2015 11:35pm
Lovely lady.. my eve has sweetened to have your time.. tyty.
hope ur wknd blazes the sky darlin ;)
huggs of 'missed u'
~d
hope ur wknd blazes the sky darlin ;)
huggs of 'missed u'
~d
Re. Spilling Nightshades
24th Sep 2015 10:46pm
This is delicious...It has so much poetic power I feel drained,thank you.
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Re: Re. Spilling Nightshades
25th Sep 2015 11:41pm
you are a rare lovely misters.. ty. purge can be dun or forced & I did a lil of both.. lmsao
humbled truly, fer ur own ease as well ;)
shiny wknd wishes.. wif dark sparkles o'course
~d
humbled truly, fer ur own ease as well ;)
shiny wknd wishes.. wif dark sparkles o'course
~d
Re. Spilling Nightshades
25th Sep 2015 00:23am
Absolutely mesmorizing piece loved it . Always great work from you this one was very attention grabbing great imagery .. loved it hugs
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Re: Re. Spilling Nightshades
25th Sep 2015 11:44pm
Sweet hellos lil darlin! geezes.. luv seein u around my parts..
ty fer digesting this one.. was long time coming ;) always appreciate ur time..
loves n hug
~d
ty fer digesting this one.. was long time coming ;) always appreciate ur time..
loves n hug
~d
Re. Spilling Nightshades
25th Sep 2015 3:31am
Re: Re. Spilling Nightshades
25th Sep 2015 11:48pm
my comp was roughly mixed.. you always do see all and I giggle to know it SirJ..
ty fer taking time on me m'dears. warm smiles to your wknd hrs!
low curtsies,
~d
ty fer taking time on me m'dears. warm smiles to your wknd hrs!
low curtsies,
~d
Re. Spilling Nightshades
25th Sep 2015 10:08am
This is like a mini biopic to who
"Darksighs" is...like Shadoe said, it's flawless!! brava my dear, *standing ovation n cheering loudly*
lol
"Darksighs" is...like Shadoe said, it's flawless!! brava my dear, *standing ovation n cheering loudly*
lol
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Re: Re. Spilling Nightshades
26th Sep 2015 00:04am
omfg.. u grinned me.. hv me remembering a gorgeous lil rat I stole/rescued frm bio class
in grade sch at mention of bio-anything.. haa's are needed, m'dearest & 'preciated!
sweetly thankin you fer ur presence & cheers. raise a wknd havoc & then tell me of it..'tays..;)
hughug
~d
in grade sch at mention of bio-anything.. haa's are needed, m'dearest & 'preciated!
sweetly thankin you fer ur presence & cheers. raise a wknd havoc & then tell me of it..'tays..;)
hughug
~d
Re. Spilling Nightshades
26th Sep 2015 4:43am
Ahh yes, dark and beautiful as always, love the imagery of "injured moonlight" very nice. Another amazing write by an amazing poet:)
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Re: Re. Spilling Nightshades
27th Sep 2015 10:27pm
My thankins misters poet.. ever~awesome to see you here..
sendin smiles to your hours fer time taken, ty...;)
tahs & be well!
~d
sendin smiles to your hours fer time taken, ty...;)
tahs & be well!
~d