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Mack the Stiff (Part Three)
"I will crush Enigma Rose"
Mack swears on his mother's tomb
"You know how this story goes
And it's ending with her doom"
Enigma doesn't quite agree
Listening once more to "Mack the Knife"
He's a sadist far as she can see
A pimp who'll pay with his life
They face off at high midnight
Brandishing their respective blades
Both hold up through an epic fight
That continues as darkness fades
Mack then finds his jackknife stuck
Caught in Enigma's leather
But she decides to grant him one last fuck
And they go down together
Enigma then gives Mack the coup de grace
That ends his long career
One last pause to kiss her cross
For whores now freed from fear.
Mack swears on his mother's tomb
"You know how this story goes
And it's ending with her doom"
Enigma doesn't quite agree
Listening once more to "Mack the Knife"
He's a sadist far as she can see
A pimp who'll pay with his life
They face off at high midnight
Brandishing their respective blades
Both hold up through an epic fight
That continues as darkness fades
Mack then finds his jackknife stuck
Caught in Enigma's leather
But she decides to grant him one last fuck
And they go down together
Enigma then gives Mack the coup de grace
That ends his long career
One last pause to kiss her cross
For whores now freed from fear.
Published 21st Sep 2015
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21st Sep 2015 7:47pm
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21st Sep 2015 8:52pm
21st Sep 2015 7:57pm
Sir Crow an Epic tale with one last fuck before Enigma strikes the death blow I love it!!!
with love Crim
with love Crim
21st Sep 2015 8:55pm
I'm glad you enjoyed Crim! Enigma will probably be back for more. Mack, on the other hand,....
21st Sep 2015 8:51pm
21st Sep 2015 8:56pm
22nd Sep 2015 1:37am
I saw it in my mind's eyes...the duel:)...nice one Crowfly...the guys who commented first pretty much summed up what I think of it.
I thought about trying to describe the duel (and the fuck, for that matter) in more detail, throwing in some gratuitous sex and violence. Maybe next time. Thanks Grace!
22nd Sep 2015 12:02pm
Oh Crow! I love your Mac pieces so. When
They both went down together
Chills.
Truely wonders at your mind doll. You are a talented, genius cat sweet.
🚬💋Jennifer
They both went down together
Chills.
Truely wonders at your mind doll. You are a talented, genius cat sweet.
🚬💋Jennifer
22nd Sep 2015 7:00pm
This is probably the last of the Macks since Enigma got the upper hand. He's a goner, but I imagine she'll be back for further fun and profit. I wish somebody would make a movie about Mack the Knife or a new version of Three Penny Opera. "Oh the shark has such white teeth..." Thanks Jennifer!
22nd Sep 2015 3:06pm
Welll........Mr. " Mackie-mack", one last attack--(just couldn't resist, now, could ya????) :p
truly enjoyed that ultimate Mistress-vs.-( the self-proclaimed) Master scene!
And so... the legend of ( the devilish) Enigma Rose lives on !!!
Slainte, Enigma Rose---and You, as well, Mo Chara!!!!!
truly enjoyed that ultimate Mistress-vs.-( the self-proclaimed) Master scene!
And so... the legend of ( the devilish) Enigma Rose lives on !!!
Slainte, Enigma Rose---and You, as well, Mo Chara!!!!!
22nd Sep 2015 7:07pm
She's making the world safe for hookers but has her own agendas, some involving a death wish, others some pretty aggressive sex. I'm glad you enjoyed this Enchantress. I thank you, and Enigma thanks you!
Anonymous
23rd Sep 2015 00:20am
Woohoo...\(' . ')/. . .Loved it!. . .xoxo, Devlin;)
24th Sep 2015 7:45pm
Anything with tomb or doom grabs & lures me, then you throw in epic Crow wit, humor, sex appeal.. *present*
It's very good to be back for part 3! and? still tense from reading slowly to end, w/nails squeezing palms ..
"They face off at high midnight
Brandishing their respective blades
Both hold up through an epic fight
That continues as darkness fades"
~you cud not have written a better set here.. kicking suspense up in
a *dun-duunnn*-comic-book-duel kind of way.. and it's on! in all ways.. fave*
"One last pause to kiss her cross
For whores now freed from fear."
~I can see your sexy-she going into 'vixened superherolette' mode now by descript..
hmm.. just think on it ..lol..
Was torn on who to cheer for bc I luv them both in your writes, as I'm sure gave you pause- hard call.. ;(
..but So much of a great movie in the mind!
apropos end of wicked grin, to go out with hot bang-- there *is no better way..;)
always a pleasure plus adventure on your page.. be well sweetie!
~d
It's very good to be back for part 3! and? still tense from reading slowly to end, w/nails squeezing palms ..
"They face off at high midnight
Brandishing their respective blades
Both hold up through an epic fight
That continues as darkness fades"
~you cud not have written a better set here.. kicking suspense up in
a *dun-duunnn*-comic-book-duel kind of way.. and it's on! in all ways.. fave*
"One last pause to kiss her cross
For whores now freed from fear."
~I can see your sexy-she going into 'vixened superherolette' mode now by descript..
hmm.. just think on it ..lol..
Was torn on who to cheer for bc I luv them both in your writes, as I'm sure gave you pause- hard call.. ;(
..but So much of a great movie in the mind!
apropos end of wicked grin, to go out with hot bang-- there *is no better way..;)
always a pleasure plus adventure on your page.. be well sweetie!
~d
26th Sep 2015 5:13am
Wow... this is not only a perfect ending, but hits waaaay close to home on a personal level. Not sure I shouldn't have seen it coming. Will be uneasy for weeks now...lol Great job with this whole story, Sir Crow. Very much enjoyed.
Michael
Michael
1st Oct 2015 7:17pm
Aahh, see now you have me
craving her! She is such a
Enigmatic Rose, my gosh she
tough & sensual, so passionate..
J'adore, j'adore
and this...
"Mack then finds his jackknife stuck
Caught in Enigma's leather
But she decides to grant him one last fuck
And they go down together
Enigma then gives Mack the coup de grace
That ends his long career
One last pause to kiss her cross
For whores now freed from fear."
A kill with a little bit of last rites &
mercy, oh goodness. Was on
the edge of my seat.. rocking
back- forth..cringing..almost
howl'd lol
Must return for more of your
gifts to us... Bowing
-Howlings
craving her! She is such a
Enigmatic Rose, my gosh she
tough & sensual, so passionate..
J'adore, j'adore
and this...
"Mack then finds his jackknife stuck
Caught in Enigma's leather
But she decides to grant him one last fuck
And they go down together
Enigma then gives Mack the coup de grace
That ends his long career
One last pause to kiss her cross
For whores now freed from fear."
A kill with a little bit of last rites &
mercy, oh goodness. Was on
the edge of my seat.. rocking
back- forth..cringing..almost
howl'd lol
Must return for more of your
gifts to us... Bowing
-Howlings
