Smoking Is A lot like Fucking

Fiercely flicking my zippo after a sultry addictive read.. and I don't think I've ever *not smoked after luvins.
*wicked sighs to what you feed my brain here!
"sometimes it comes on strong  
overwhelming making me dizzy  
then weak in the knees"  
~
"other times it enters nice and slow  
a lover taking his time  
bringing you to ecstasy "
~jeezes of impalement! if I didn't already.. I'd start puffing after your intoxicating comparison..
love this velvet-heady mix of sweet tobacco love- Crim de la crème style. well captured, m'beauty!
mwahs
~d

lovely d~ I love your fantastic comments they make my day thank you beautiful :)   with love Crim

'it's how I like my cigarettes  
it's how I like my men'

Excellently stated, Miss Crim. . .This simply ties up your entire poem. . .Enjoyed how you incorporated the art of cigarette smoking w/men. . .Brilliant!. . .xoxo, Devlin;)

thank you Lady Devlin for a great comment :)

with love Crim

I'd like to see those pouty lips

you make me blush Poet though I'm afraid my lips aren't as luscious as yours ;)

thank you for visiting my pages..

with love Brenda

Flattery will get you everywhere ....

Hot damn Brenda; it seems as though You're
feeling good this evening. I can almost feel a
vibe of relaxation through the lines in Your
scribe.

I like the connection that You make between
smoking and Love-making; well that and oral
also.

I like to relate my sexuality with my drinking
whiskey though.  Enjoyed this smoothly... maybe I'll have a drag now >;-)

  Dantalian

ah Dantalian a fine whiskey is fantastic too..

yes I'm in a relaxed mood thank you for picking up on that and for an awesome comments :)

with love Brenda

Brenda, you are simply brilliant.. with love..


Dave

thank you Dave you always make me smile :)

with love Brenda

Yes true Brenda,  smoking and screwing are a lot alike. Very cool.

thank you kindly lovely Shauna :)

with love Brenda

I tend to roll my own -
and can I quickly point out
that I'm referring to
my cigarettes...

your comment made me giggle Paul so clever you are point taken :)

with love Crim

Yeah baby, lighting one for this. I like smoking during masturbation. Id smoke during sex, but most men consider it a fire hazzard.

Red 100s please. Full strength and long. 🚬💋

Lu ya
J

you made me giggle too with you comment during masturbation hmm i'll have to try that ;)

thank you lovely Jennifer for making me smile :)

love you too Brenda

thank you Gabriel your visits and thoughts are always cherished :)

with love Crim

"Rich and bold," huh?  That kind of narrows the field.  I never thought of smoking quite in these terms, but I'll try a variation on this the next time I light up one of my Pall Malls.  I'll be tasting something a bit different.  Got a light, Crim?

rich and bold as in the flavor of cum and cigarettes Sir Crow a man doesn't have to be rich to entice me :)

thank you for visiting me and leaving a great comment..

with love Crim

dangerous poetry. lines that burn smooth & steady...

thank you John you made me smile :)

with love Crim

Setting all things ablaze here Dear Crim!!!
You have been on a Writing roll Kiddo- Delicate or Rough - You have the abilities to kick out the jams!!!

thank you dear Soul for saying so made me smile :)

with love Crim

Whoa, never read anything so RAW!!! But I love it just for what it is and how it makes me feel. Pure B-E-A-U-T-Y Crim. My skulls and I thank you for the powerful read.

thank you for such a fantastic comment making me smile wide :) also welcome to the Underground i'm looking forward to reading you :)   with love and respect Crim

Fantastic poem Crimsin. Very detailed and open it makes it easy to be in the poem but at least I don't like smoking cigarettes but give a nice cigar and I'm there

thank you kindly Sir with love Crimsin :)

I quit smoking when I was 20 and now I absolutely abhor smoking...the smell of fresh smoke, the stench of stale smoke...literally makes me ill.

Yet somehow you made smoking so alluring in this piece!

Makes me kinda jones.

thank you but you're better off without it :)

with love Crim

Damn this is effin sexy, your verses blow beautiful smoke rings around my senses. Reminds me of how sensational it feels when he thumps his ashes in the small of your back while sliding in deep. or when he teases your nipples with the red hot cherry. Sex and cigs go hand in hand. Brilliant ink, Dear Crimsin!!

thank you for such a sexy and fantastic comment lovely Angel :)

with love Crimisn

it's like taking a drag off a cock    
tickling the back of the throat    
as it glides past my pouty lips    


Talk about  visual effects!
Crim my darling I loved this!!!
Write on sister!!!!
love Zazzles xoxoxoxoxox

thank you beautiful lady for making me smile wide this morning :)

with love Crim

Though poem two years old (and not smoker myself) could not help wanting to read for an explanation of the title. Favourite lines (could visualise the post coital scene):

smoking after fucking      
the best smoke      
after he enters you      

thank you dearest Solomon for the sharing your thoughts & the visit..

love Crim