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Veil
Bereft be this blackened heart
Lifting the veil of discretion
singular be the note
minor to major
echoing
a lovers dance
taking
my prayers spoken
with you I dance
my veil once removed.
Lifting the veil of discretion
singular be the note
minor to major
echoing
a lovers dance
taking
my prayers spoken
with you I dance
my veil once removed.
Published 22nd May 2015
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22nd May 2015 1:20pm
I have found that if you cast the veil of bitterness aside you find a whole world of shiny new things awaiting.A dance is a good place to start. Very enjoyable read.
22nd May 2015 1:54pm
22nd May 2015 10:18pm
Very beautiful opening line, and ended with great clarity at the unveiling ;)
enjoyed!
~d
enjoyed!
~d
23rd May 2015 5:07am
