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Nibbling
Took a nibble
then a big bite
And I was sure as the day said goodbye
that the binds keeping him in my bed
would break as the sun in its final glow
whispered goodbye
have a glorious night
then a big bite
And I was sure as the day said goodbye
that the binds keeping him in my bed
would break as the sun in its final glow
whispered goodbye
have a glorious night
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Re: Nibbling
21st May 2015 1:17pm
I guess it all depends on whether you want to keep him bound or not. Bindings are useful and necessary tools but unbound...anything can happen. Nice write!
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re: Re: Nibbling
21st May 2015 6:40pm
Metaphorically be the wording when bound be used xD
not bound in the physical sense
not bound in the physical sense
Re: Nibbling
21st May 2015 1:35pm
Re: Nibbling
21st May 2015 4:38pm
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Not bad, please keep calm and carry on.
Yours merrily Infernus.
Not bad, please keep calm and carry on.
Yours merrily Infernus.
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re: Re: Nibbling
21st May 2015 6:42pm
Re: Nibbling
21st May 2015 10:45pm
Hmmm...
Rose, luv ~ :-*
Mayhap I'm not understanding you here, but if I am,'twould seem to me that with a prelude such as that, he might reconsider leaving your bed; think rather of settling in for an extended visitation... ;-*
Of course, I could be missing somewhat, luv. ;-p
I rather adore this tidbit of tantalization.
Rose, luv ~ :-*
Mayhap I'm not understanding you here, but if I am,'twould seem to me that with a prelude such as that, he might reconsider leaving your bed; think rather of settling in for an extended visitation... ;-*
Of course, I could be missing somewhat, luv. ;-p
I rather adore this tidbit of tantalization.
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22nd May 2015 4:37am
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21st May 2015 11:00pm
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22nd May 2015 4:38am