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For You My Friend
I don't usually show
the vulnerable side to me
preferring to put on the bitch, the hard
you make me want to be a better person
tears don't stain my face
I keep the pain close to my chest
still something in you
calls forth the softness of my soul
the need to comfort
where I feel helpless and out of control
I want to kiss each scar with gentle lips
willing the Goddess to give me a healing balm
I feel a tenderness for you
no words can express
you're beautiful in my eyes
in all your diverse moods
they mirror something in me
something tangible
I can wrap myself in
embracing my soul and yours
if you will allow it
trust is an issue with me as well
though I see through to the real you
loving what I see
please hear my plea
come to me on this evening
if you need me
I'm here willing to listen
soft of heart
my own battle wounds apparent
through the life I've lived
you'll find understanding here
written with love
your friend
the vulnerable side to me
preferring to put on the bitch, the hard
you make me want to be a better person
tears don't stain my face
I keep the pain close to my chest
still something in you
calls forth the softness of my soul
the need to comfort
where I feel helpless and out of control
I want to kiss each scar with gentle lips
willing the Goddess to give me a healing balm
I feel a tenderness for you
no words can express
you're beautiful in my eyes
in all your diverse moods
they mirror something in me
something tangible
I can wrap myself in
embracing my soul and yours
if you will allow it
trust is an issue with me as well
though I see through to the real you
loving what I see
please hear my plea
come to me on this evening
if you need me
I'm here willing to listen
soft of heart
my own battle wounds apparent
through the life I've lived
you'll find understanding here
written with love
your friend
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Re: Vulnerable
I like this side of you, and I'm not surprised to find it. The moods mirror something tangible. That's something that's hard to say and you say it very well. The more vulnerable Lady Crim side is as delightful as the darker.
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11th Jan 2015 5:01am
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11th Jan 2015 4:44am
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11th Jan 2015 5:02am
thank you Sir Poet but then you knew my soft side was there all the time I think :) with love Brenda
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11th Jan 2015 5:17am
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11th Jan 2015 5:35am
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11th Jan 2015 7:27am
Love this write Crim - it seems to echo my current predicament and dilemma. This reaching out with compassion is simply gorgeous - exactly what the world seems to need right now.
Tick!
Tick!
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11th Jan 2015 7:38am
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Anonymous
11th Jan 2015 7:50am
This is sad but i loved it very much.
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11th Jan 2015 8:01am
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11th Jan 2015 8:43am
Wow! I could listen to you forever.....
u are beautiful Crim, you really really are.
wow this was is tender, so real..
it kills me in a good way a painfully good way.
love from y heart
Jackie xoxox
u are beautiful Crim, you really really are.
wow this was is tender, so real..
it kills me in a good way a painfully good way.
love from y heart
Jackie xoxox
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11th Jan 2015 6:45pm
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11th Jan 2015 8:58am
words fail to express just how much i love this piece of yours Brenda. it truly captures the deep affection i have for a close friend & favourite muse of mine.
a wonderful read, lovely lady
a wonderful read, lovely lady
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11th Jan 2015 6:46pm
thank you beautiful one for getting this write and the lovely comment :) with love Brenda
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Anonymous
11th Jan 2015 10:34am
This is so beautiful, pure and sweet, I really love this part of u as I love them all. Any friend would be so very touched by these words, I won't be presumptuous and think they were for me but I will say reading them made me feel comfort and love. Such loving ink my beautiful sister x
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11th Jan 2015 6:48pm
thank you lovely one you both inspired this write in different ways with love Brenda :)
Re: For You My Friend
11th Jan 2015 11:30am
Brenda this is an awe-inspiring
Write coming from the Mind of
a very Talented Writer and Wonderful
Soul.
You can Express Yourself in this
way just as Well and as easily as
You do the Darker and Sexual
Scribes You Share with Us all here.
Breathtaking... Pan
Write coming from the Mind of
a very Talented Writer and Wonderful
Soul.
You can Express Yourself in this
way just as Well and as easily as
You do the Darker and Sexual
Scribes You Share with Us all here.
Breathtaking... Pan
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11th Jan 2015 6:49pm
thank you Pan for such a gracious beautiful comment touching my heart and soul today :) with love Brenda
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Anonymous
11th Jan 2015 12:01pm
I've always loved this side of you, but it is the depth of all your sides that combine to make the wonderful you!
This has such depth and beauty and even the vulnerability is sewn with strength and experience.
To still allow ourselves to be open, touched, to touch, is to live and win.
Excellent ink, Brenda
Hugs x0
This has such depth and beauty and even the vulnerability is sewn with strength and experience.
To still allow ourselves to be open, touched, to touch, is to live and win.
Excellent ink, Brenda
Hugs x0
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11th Jan 2015 6:50pm
thank you Miki for embracing all sides of me.. love you kind lady :) with love Brenda
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Anonymous
11th Jan 2015 12:29pm
there are always two sides to a woman. i don't care what she says. you have proven that your two sides are equally beautiful and worth knowing and loving. spectacular write!
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11th Jan 2015 6:51pm
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11th Jan 2015 1:41pm
Rare when you get yourself into the mode of
being soft, tender, n sincerely vulnerable n
becuz I know you are far more often really
this way (Ssshhh! :) )... I must say I want so
much more!! Touchin me to my soul, YOU
Poetess... :)
being soft, tender, n sincerely vulnerable n
becuz I know you are far more often really
this way (Ssshhh! :) )... I must say I want so
much more!! Touchin me to my soul, YOU
Poetess... :)
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11th Jan 2015 6:52pm
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11th Jan 2015 5:39pm
Your heart is beautiful and loving we are very lucky to read this hopefully we will get to see more of it in the near future
Keep up the good work crim so beautiful
Keep up the good work crim so beautiful
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11th Jan 2015 6:53pm
thank you Waterviolet I will try and be more fearless and open up more :) with love Crim
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12th Jan 2015 00:24am
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12th Jan 2015 3:12pm
Coming to you is easy, a daring act that anyone would forge along. Your tenderness is a healing kiss. Truly a special creation. We all kneel to your presence. Much love this - blue angel ❤
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12th Jan 2015 8:47pm
thank you most graciously beautiful Angel I am humbled by your comment with love Crim :)
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Re: For You My Friend
15th Jan 2015 11:06am
Quite a brilliant verse you have penned! I think even a friend who has vanished into shadows unseen can perceive the light shining from the love in these lines...
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15th Jan 2015 4:44pm
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Anonymous
17th Jan 2015 2:32am
Sexy Crim......written with luv is right......you're so paasionate.....Luv this!! Great honor to your friend....xo :)
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25th Jan 2015 7:17am
" I want to kiss each scar with gentle lips " .... Thank you for reminding me of pain and love .
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25th Jan 2015 5:15pm