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Carnal Lust
Bewitched with carnal lust
twisting in the wind
feeding off your seminal verse
so salty and creamy
licking, tasting
my body writhing with desire
pussy pulsating
with each pounding
brutal assault
your words wielded like a cat o' nine tails
heavy handed whipping my naked flesh
you've conjured and your demons answered
burning and scorching my flesh
flayed, tortured
my mind and body reel
I seek to sip inspiration
from your heady, angry cock
plunge it deep in my throat
fuck the masochistic slut in me
until I shut the hell up
like a good whore should
twisting in the wind
feeding off your seminal verse
so salty and creamy
licking, tasting
my body writhing with desire
pussy pulsating
with each pounding
brutal assault
your words wielded like a cat o' nine tails
heavy handed whipping my naked flesh
you've conjured and your demons answered
burning and scorching my flesh
flayed, tortured
my mind and body reel
I seek to sip inspiration
from your heady, angry cock
plunge it deep in my throat
fuck the masochistic slut in me
until I shut the hell up
like a good whore should
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9th Jan 2015 6:36pm
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Anonymous
9th Jan 2015 6:51pm
Crim,
A heady foam you've added to this shot of hot lust! Enjoyed!!!
tornado
A heady foam you've added to this shot of hot lust! Enjoyed!!!
tornado
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Re: Carnal Lust
9th Jan 2015 7:01pm
Raw, primal, passionate. Very hot. I strongly relate to the first stanza. The twisting in the wind feeling. Great write!
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10th Jan 2015 5:42pm
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Anonymous
9th Jan 2015 7:02pm
Wow! Beautiful lady your delicious mind always turns me on..giggle.
Excellent erotic ink sweetie 😜
Excellent erotic ink sweetie 😜
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10th Jan 2015 5:42pm
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9th Jan 2015 7:27pm
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re: Re: Carnal Lust
10th Jan 2015 5:43pm
thank you lovely lady though you are a fantastic erotic writer :) with love Crim
Anonymous
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10th Jan 2015 6:00pm
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Re: Carnal Lust
10th Jan 2015 00:13am
Perfect title for a perfectly raw, blazing fuckable piece of
...ink lol...
...ink lol...
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Anonymous
10th Jan 2015 1:32am
oh yeah that sexy hot and made me .. emm
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12th Jan 2015 1:45pm
Brutal desires unfurl delicately from your steamy ink! A nice slice of choking allure. - blue angel ;)
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