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Prognosis
Trying to eliminate the static cling
The remnants of some pain
Who knows what the past will bring
And what color the stain
They tell him that the x-rays clean
No sign of crumbling dice
Those jaded bones may yet convene
Listening to the best advice
But even this sounds like some insult
The prognosis tough to swallow
"But wait," they say, "we will consult"
Their words becoming hollow
Still waiting here as darkness falls
The future turning black
Still waiting as the healing stalls
But there's no turning back.
The remnants of some pain
Who knows what the past will bring
And what color the stain
They tell him that the x-rays clean
No sign of crumbling dice
Those jaded bones may yet convene
Listening to the best advice
But even this sounds like some insult
The prognosis tough to swallow
"But wait," they say, "we will consult"
Their words becoming hollow
Still waiting here as darkness falls
The future turning black
Still waiting as the healing stalls
But there's no turning back.
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Re: Prognosis
21st Dec 2014 4:23pm
Merely shadows of what could be, so don't yet fear the oncoming darkness. It may never come. Chin up. Good read nevertheless, Crowfly.
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21st Dec 2014 4:25pm
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21st Dec 2014 4:59pm
sending love and encouragement your way that it will be a clean slate of health Crowfly with love Crim
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21st Dec 2014 8:27pm
"They tell him that the x-rays clean
No sign of crumbling dice"
- Your life's chances of success or failure, trotted out in cold statistics. Clinicians blunted humane disconnect from having too many conversations of this tone.
Although I barely know you crowfly, I wish you the very best.
No sign of crumbling dice"
- Your life's chances of success or failure, trotted out in cold statistics. Clinicians blunted humane disconnect from having too many conversations of this tone.
Although I barely know you crowfly, I wish you the very best.
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re: Re: Prognosis
21st Dec 2014 9:23pm
Thanks, Frank. I realize that doctors have to retain some level of detachment in order to remain effective. It's just that sometimes the treatment itself just doesn't work for whatever reasons, and the patient's outlook can become bleak. Blaming anyone is often pointless. Just the luck of the dice.
This is what I keep telling myself anyway. I just wish I could stay rational.
This is what I keep telling myself anyway. I just wish I could stay rational.
Re: Prognosis
22nd Dec 2014 2:21am
Crow, mo chara,
Intense ink--indeed! i can so surely feel all the fear and the pain within this piece.
i realize that we are only beginning to become acquainted, but please know that i will be keeping you in my thoughts...
And... sending you positive energy, along with some heart-shine....to help you through the Dark...to light your pathway to Hope.
Try to stay strong!
Sioch`ain leat !
Intense ink--indeed! i can so surely feel all the fear and the pain within this piece.
i realize that we are only beginning to become acquainted, but please know that i will be keeping you in my thoughts...
And... sending you positive energy, along with some heart-shine....to help you through the Dark...to light your pathway to Hope.
Try to stay strong!
Sioch`ain leat !
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Anonymous
22nd Dec 2014 10:23am
So sad to read these words..I hope with all my being that you are ok..if u ever want to talk about health issues I may be able to relate, I have some under the carpet with the dust.. Major hugs for u my dear Sir Crow..beautiful ink
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22nd Dec 2014 11:30am
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22nd Dec 2014 5:31pm
i had a serious health scare earlier this year & this really resonates
peace, light & healing energy to you, crowfly
peace, light & healing energy to you, crowfly
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