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In the Night
Wind carries the smell of rain, lightning in distant skies briefly brighten night
Crackling feel of what’s to come, anticipation of carnal delight
Angels and Demons begin their war; the Heaven’s begin to weep
Two lovers meet for warmth in welcome arms; this night there will be no sleep
The storm begins to rage outside, rumbling thunder and lightning flash
On a bed surrounded by windows, two bodies tumble, artful tongues clash
With fevered hands they undress, each flash revealing another trail to blaze
With velvet touches igniting a sexual longing within each other’s gaze
Howling winds and rains pour down, the “Devil beats his wife”
He slowly worships every curve, then rests on her entrance to life
With no words said he sings a song, but yet uses his heavenly tongue
A trembling over takes her as she reaches peak, he hardens with what he’s done.
With lightening rod, he repeatedly stakes his claim, hot mouths searing skin
Her legs wrap around his waist, greedy hands hold tight, pulling him deeper in.
She feels his warmth spread inside as she maneuvers herself to ride
With wild abandonment they dance loves dance upon the rising tide
The waves wash over them thru the night; again and again they enjoy the sexual play
Finally satisfied, dawn light breaks, the dark clouds are blown away
Spent, they rest in exhausted, blissful, contented embrace
Both glowing in aftermath of the storm; each having finished the other’s race.
Crackling feel of what’s to come, anticipation of carnal delight
Angels and Demons begin their war; the Heaven’s begin to weep
Two lovers meet for warmth in welcome arms; this night there will be no sleep
The storm begins to rage outside, rumbling thunder and lightning flash
On a bed surrounded by windows, two bodies tumble, artful tongues clash
With fevered hands they undress, each flash revealing another trail to blaze
With velvet touches igniting a sexual longing within each other’s gaze
Howling winds and rains pour down, the “Devil beats his wife”
He slowly worships every curve, then rests on her entrance to life
With no words said he sings a song, but yet uses his heavenly tongue
A trembling over takes her as she reaches peak, he hardens with what he’s done.
With lightening rod, he repeatedly stakes his claim, hot mouths searing skin
Her legs wrap around his waist, greedy hands hold tight, pulling him deeper in.
She feels his warmth spread inside as she maneuvers herself to ride
With wild abandonment they dance loves dance upon the rising tide
The waves wash over them thru the night; again and again they enjoy the sexual play
Finally satisfied, dawn light breaks, the dark clouds are blown away
Spent, they rest in exhausted, blissful, contented embrace
Both glowing in aftermath of the storm; each having finished the other’s race.
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Re: In the Night
11th Apr 2014 4:01pm
Wow! This is so visual not only do I see it but feel it thru me. Beautiful eloquent sexy write, enjoyed this piece. RL for me. Xo :)
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re: Re: In the Night
11th Apr 2014 4:05pm
Lovely Flower!! You are too kind with your comments.. I love that you enjoyed this.. and I most sincerely thank you for the RL add.. hugs and love to you!! xoxo domore
Re: In the Night
11th Apr 2014 4:16pm
re: Re: In the Night
11th Apr 2014 4:38pm
Crim, Thank you my strong friend!! I'm thrilled it delighted!! You honor me with your words :) with love and respect.. xoxo domore
Re: In the Night
11th Apr 2014 4:24pm
re: Re: In the Night
11th Apr 2014 4:41pm
Lovely yw... I am happy to provide a lil feast for you :) Thank you for the read and the comment.. with deepest respect.. xoxo domore
Re: In the Night
11th Apr 2014 4:49pm
Gave me chills reading this amazing piece of writing.
Only a woman of passion could write so eloquently. That woman is you...
Beautifully done
xx
Only a woman of passion could write so eloquently. That woman is you...
Beautifully done
xx
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re: Re: In the Night
11th Apr 2014 5:08pm
Dearest Poet.. Thank you for your words.. you never fail to encourage while at same time provide a blush to my cheeks.. with deepest respect.. xoxo domore
Re: In the Night
Mmmmmmmy goodness left me feeling deeply ravenous!!
How I'd love to be 'spent' in such a manner lol
Whew, *wipes drool from mouth* lol
How I'd love to be 'spent' in such a manner lol
Whew, *wipes drool from mouth* lol
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re: Re: In the Night
11th Apr 2014 9:55pm
:) Mr P... I agree with sentiment on being "spent" in such a way :) I'd be prayin for Thunderstorms!! Thank you for the read and the comment :) with respect.. domore
Re: In the Night
12th Apr 2014 8:01am
this was totally captivating...i felt like a peeping tom peeking into their window...vivid, sensual and beautifully crafted..enjoyed!!
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re: Re: In the Night
13th Apr 2014 1:11pm
:) Thank you poeticDesire I appreciate the read and the wonderful comment. with humility and respect xoxo domore
Re: In the Night
Anonymous
13th Apr 2014 6:30pm
Mesmerizing and expertly written. :]

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re: Re: In the Night
14th Apr 2014 5:36am
Thank you Brittany :) you warm my heart with your words :) with respect xoxo domore
Re: In the Night
Sensual, dramatic, the violence of the storm outdoors parallels the lovemaking indoors. Favourite lines:
''With fevered hands they undress, each flash revealing another trail to blaze'' (note potential double-entendre in 'flash')
''He slowly worships every curve, then rests on her entrance to life'' (which may inspire married male readers on those lines, that came to my mind:
When I am next abed with my wife
I shall rest at her entrance to life.)
''With fevered hands they undress, each flash revealing another trail to blaze'' (note potential double-entendre in 'flash')
''He slowly worships every curve, then rests on her entrance to life'' (which may inspire married male readers on those lines, that came to my mind:
When I am next abed with my wife
I shall rest at her entrance to life.)
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re: Re: In the Night
19th May 2014 6:19am
Solomon_Song :) you definitely got what I was going for with this :) thank you very much for the read and comment... with much respect..domore
Re: In the Night
30th May 2014 7:34pm
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30th May 2014 7:45pm
Thank you xmar82 :) you are spoiling me today with your gracious comments :) I am pleased that you enjoyed this write.. with respect..domore