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a tear drops
i am so all alone
you kicked the inside
of my brain
so hard
it made my heart break
my head shakes,my hands quiver
my eyes roll and my thoughts explode.
i want to be ok...
feel the sunshine and the warmth
but it's icy cold
inside is only shade
dark and frozen
i shiver to my toes
i'm so cold,so alone
i just want to go home.
you kicked the inside
of my brain
so hard
it made my heart break
my head shakes,my hands quiver
my eyes roll and my thoughts explode.
i want to be ok...
feel the sunshine and the warmth
but it's icy cold
inside is only shade
dark and frozen
i shiver to my toes
i'm so cold,so alone
i just want to go home.
Published 23rd Feb 2014
| Edited 30th Jul 2017
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23rd Feb 2014 1:30pm
Oh damn, like a slap in the face
with a brick, I felt this bro. Sad stuff...
with a brick, I felt this bro. Sad stuff...
23rd Feb 2014 4:21pm
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23rd Feb 2014 5:29pm
The best time to write Hashman. Keep on keeping on. Glad to make you smile. :)
23rd Feb 2014 5:43pm
23rd Feb 2014 6:13pm
Loneliness and despair are a faithful pair; feeling you here. Good read Hashman.
23rd Feb 2014 7:15pm
23rd Feb 2014 11:13pm
a personal piece
universally experienced,
I would imagine...a very
touching poem, Hash...
universally experienced,
I would imagine...a very
touching poem, Hash...
23rd Feb 2014 11:42pm
Anonymous
23rd Feb 2014 11:52pm
It effects every part of the body and the senses, turning inside out, well conveyed Mr. Hash.
24th Feb 2014 00:44am
24th Feb 2014 1:41am
I know this one brother. All the warmth I can muster I'm sending to you my friend. Thank you young man. Hang tough sunshine.
25th Feb 2014 00:54am
Anonymous
24th Feb 2014 4:28am
This I felt in my soul. Very sad piece with deep emotion. :(
25th Feb 2014 00:57am
27th Feb 2014 3:56pm
pluvious poetry penned in saline perfection. reading by the drop mister Hash.
28th Feb 2014 00:20am
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10th Mar 2014 9:15pm
The Blues is like being stuck in the rain, you get cold, wet and miserable. But, sooner or later the sun comes back out and friends show up with some warm smiles.
10th Mar 2014 10:50pm
