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Lovers An Thieves
Just a rough draft for something that was bouncing round in my head, bear with me hehehe ... o.0
Blues rock, played Strong and slowly
E G D Dsus4 A Asus4
I… I’m just a poor boy, born simple an free
Falling for your kisses, soft an sweet
But before we move on, I need to know that you belong to me
Lord; I learned my lessons, and worn my scars
What kind of promises can be made, between lovers and thieves,
Knew a girl, who’s in love with me,
Lord I knew a girl; She had to set me free,
And I left her Lonely, scornful, broken an blue,
She left me bitter, angry, jealous and rude,
And by the time… It was through… Lord I seen… What love can do
Lovin can break the heart of anyone gentle and true,
Oh my Lord, how I wear my scars,,, but darlin your face gets you where you are
And I know,,, that I’m rushing, But I need to know,
I need to know, what’s really going on deep down below
I know what you really are, baby you’re the daughter of lovers and thieves
You have what it takes, to make a poor mans heart break
All around you, men are falling down
My senses got me tripped, Lord; my heart is a breaking,
All I need to know, is, where I am with you
And I’ll sing any song you want me too,
Lord I know that I can never tell you No,
Oh my Lord how easily you wear my soul
I need to know I belong to you, and I need to know who you really are
Lord, the daughter of lovers and thieves
Blues rock, played Strong and slowly
E G D Dsus4 A Asus4
I… I’m just a poor boy, born simple an free
Falling for your kisses, soft an sweet
But before we move on, I need to know that you belong to me
Lord; I learned my lessons, and worn my scars
What kind of promises can be made, between lovers and thieves,
Knew a girl, who’s in love with me,
Lord I knew a girl; She had to set me free,
And I left her Lonely, scornful, broken an blue,
She left me bitter, angry, jealous and rude,
And by the time… It was through… Lord I seen… What love can do
Lovin can break the heart of anyone gentle and true,
Oh my Lord, how I wear my scars,,, but darlin your face gets you where you are
And I know,,, that I’m rushing, But I need to know,
I need to know, what’s really going on deep down below
I know what you really are, baby you’re the daughter of lovers and thieves
You have what it takes, to make a poor mans heart break
All around you, men are falling down
My senses got me tripped, Lord; my heart is a breaking,
All I need to know, is, where I am with you
And I’ll sing any song you want me too,
Lord I know that I can never tell you No,
Oh my Lord how easily you wear my soul
I need to know I belong to you, and I need to know who you really are
Lord, the daughter of lovers and thieves
Published 30th Jan 2014
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30th Jan 2014 12:54pm
I'd love to hear this sung. Do you sing what you write? Or does someone else?
I know you said it's a draft, but I still enjoyed it as it is.
I know you said it's a draft, but I still enjoyed it as it is.
1st Feb 2014 2:05am
Hello friend; Yes, sing what writes, an plays the acoustic guitar when playin it; however, do not have the resources to record myself playin it right now, an also, have a EXTREME nervousness about playin in front of others hehehe, but, will soon enough get some of these songs down on video, Thank you my friend: Eddie
26th Mar 2014 4:34pm
Sounds like a man who knows how to sing the blues. Really quite lovely and I'm with BloodyTears, I would love to hear this set to music. Be careful of letting someone "wear your soul"
