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And she ALWAYS 'gets' me...
I held her
precious face
in my hands
Gently, I kiss her forehead,
as bright brown eyes stare back
Giggling am I inside
when I notice a stern look
(yes I’m having a love attack)...
She
embraces me as
she says I love you,
and I return the sentiment
Then sarcastically I implore furthermore,
“are you sure?” and up, and down her head went...
Then as we separate
from our embrace and retire
back to our previous tasks
Two steps was all
I’d take, when her voice
spoke up, and she decided to ask
“Dad, don’t you know?”
as her face emitted that ‘glow...'
she continued on,
“Just because I get angry with you
it don’t mean I don’t love you..."
and at that my heart leapt to the sky!
then I whispered, to the 'big guy'
“Thank you” once again
for sending me
my little heart so true...
~although a few years old, decided
to post this...it's an exchange between my
lil girl n I...moments AFTER I scolded her
for misbehaving because she didnt get her
way about something she wanted lol...
precious face
in my hands
Gently, I kiss her forehead,
as bright brown eyes stare back
Giggling am I inside
when I notice a stern look
(yes I’m having a love attack)...
She
embraces me as
she says I love you,
and I return the sentiment
Then sarcastically I implore furthermore,
“are you sure?” and up, and down her head went...
Then as we separate
from our embrace and retire
back to our previous tasks
Two steps was all
I’d take, when her voice
spoke up, and she decided to ask
“Dad, don’t you know?”
as her face emitted that ‘glow...'
she continued on,
“Just because I get angry with you
it don’t mean I don’t love you..."
and at that my heart leapt to the sky!
then I whispered, to the 'big guy'
“Thank you” once again
for sending me
my little heart so true...
~although a few years old, decided
to post this...it's an exchange between my
lil girl n I...moments AFTER I scolded her
for misbehaving because she didnt get her
way about something she wanted lol...
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Re: And she ALWAYS 'gets' me...
26th Aug 2013 11:36am
awww its so sweet. Beautiful gestures !! A Girl always remains a princess to her father :)
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26th Aug 2013 12:37pm
Thank you my dear friend! N yea she's definitely that to me! lol
Appreciate you so much
Appreciate you so much
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26th Aug 2013 11:41am
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26th Aug 2013 12:41pm
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26th Aug 2013 12:43pm
This is beautiful!
My youngest always comes to me and says "Mommy, I am sooo sorry for not listening to you, you are my whole heart and make me super happy"....gets me every time :)
Great piece
My youngest always comes to me and says "Mommy, I am sooo sorry for not listening to you, you are my whole heart and make me super happy"....gets me every time :)
Great piece
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26th Aug 2013 1:10pm
Aaaawwww that would melt me too! blessed you are my dear sweet friend, n I thank you for commenting n sharing a lil piece of ur life with me. :)
Re: And she ALWAYS 'gets' me...
26th Aug 2013 12:49pm
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26th Aug 2013 1:13pm
Thanks bro! Yea, I know that feeling, funny thing too
I Always thought I could tough with my child, but really
anytime I tried, she will just give me the 'eyes' n I'm DONE! lol
never mind how she can repeat my 'life lessons' back to me lol
Appreciate u much sir :)
I Always thought I could tough with my child, but really
anytime I tried, she will just give me the 'eyes' n I'm DONE! lol
never mind how she can repeat my 'life lessons' back to me lol
Appreciate u much sir :)
Re: And she ALWAYS 'gets' me...
26th Aug 2013 1:53pm
awww those precious moments are the sweetest thing! Very Lovely Write!!
"then I whispered, to the 'big guy'
“Thank you” once again
for sending me
my little heart so true"
this part echos my feelings for my babies couldnt help but smile cause it made me think of this quote "Making the decision to have a child is momentous. It is to decide forever to have your heart go walking around outside your body.” by Elizabeth Stone
"then I whispered, to the 'big guy'
“Thank you” once again
for sending me
my little heart so true"
this part echos my feelings for my babies couldnt help but smile cause it made me think of this quote "Making the decision to have a child is momentous. It is to decide forever to have your heart go walking around outside your body.” by Elizabeth Stone
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26th Aug 2013 6:52pm
Thank you my dear, I really love your support n truly love that quote! I am moved n I adore you much :)
Re: And she ALWAYS 'gets' me...
26th Aug 2013 4:29pm
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26th Aug 2013 7:20pm
Yup guilty! lol I'm a marshmellow when it comes to her, but hey I'm trying to get harder! lol thank u my sweet gypsy lady :)
Re: And she ALWAYS 'gets' me...
26th Aug 2013 4:52pm
As a mommy to a very precocious toddler, this made me smile from ear to ear.
Gorgeous ink Poe.
Gorgeous ink Poe.
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26th Aug 2013 7:26pm
I bet ur lil one worships you too! so sweet to hear how it made you smile, thank you my friend I appreciate you :)
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26th Aug 2013 5:00pm
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26th Aug 2013 7:15pm
Awe! Thank you for sharing such a sweet encounter. After our little 'arguments' those are my favorite times with my daughter because they're moments like these
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26th Aug 2013 8:19pm
Aaaawww why thank you! u have me smiling so big
right now, appreciate ur thoughts n comment n I will repay the favor soon :)
right now, appreciate ur thoughts n comment n I will repay the favor soon :)
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Anonymous
26th Aug 2013 8:45pm
Just beautiful...such innocence
sometimes between a child and
parent, and I have said that to my
daughter, "just because I get mad
at you doesn't mean I don't love you,
I will always love you no matter what."
Her and I still share those precious
little moments together even though
she is now 16, she's always my boo;)
sometimes between a child and
parent, and I have said that to my
daughter, "just because I get mad
at you doesn't mean I don't love you,
I will always love you no matter what."
Her and I still share those precious
little moments together even though
she is now 16, she's always my boo;)
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27th Aug 2013 2:02am
Yup I agree, my lol one is now 13 n STILL my lil one as far as I'm concerned even though she's nearly my height n she's the top martial artist in her school lol
Thank u so much my dear friend, appreciate u :)
Thank u so much my dear friend, appreciate u :)
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Anonymous
27th Aug 2013 1:17am
I always love the poems you write about your girl - you really come alive talking about her.
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27th Aug 2013 2:03am
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29th Aug 2013 5:50am
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29th Aug 2013 4:35pm
"Lil girl" can be construed in at least two ways so this becomes a wonderful mystery! Either way it suggests the power of a connection between two people. A rich write!
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29th Aug 2013 6:59pm
Yes you make a valid point, but I assure you-this lil girl? Is my sweet, wonderful. Smart, funny, talented n beautiful DAUGHTER :) thank u so much my man,appreciate your support :)
Re: And she ALWAYS 'gets' me...
29th Aug 2013 7:50pm
Thanks for the explanation. I readily admit to finding wrong meaning, which is why I like to ask questions. As I mentioned to another poet for the longest time I thought "Mary Jane" by Rick James was a girlfriend. My brother who is 11 years older bought me the cassette but never filled me in on the true nature of the tune!
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30th Aug 2013 2:26am
No problem, n as I'm retail you know... ALL art is subjective so people will form their own interpretations most times...as for RJ's jam I knew it was that, once I turned 16 lol
Re: And she ALWAYS 'gets' me...
31st Aug 2013 3:34pm
Poe, that's simply beautiful! I like you even more than before if that's possible :-)!
Chi
Chi
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31st Aug 2013 8:15pm
aaaaawwwww now that just makes me swoon! lol
Thank you so very much my dear sweetheart! Truly it's appreciated always :)
Thank you so very much my dear sweetheart! Truly it's appreciated always :)
Re: And she ALWAYS 'gets' me...
7th Sep 2013 2:41pm
Hold precious the moments as they disappear all to quickly / very touching
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7th Sep 2013 2:58pm
Oh trust n believe I know! lol thank you for this sweet comment
n the fav. Add, I truly appreciate it :)
n the fav. Add, I truly appreciate it :)