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You gonna call me
You gonna call me Daddy
When I...
I remove my belt
Lay you down, naked
n' write with tongue
all over your body,
how the name is spelt
You gonna call me Daddy
When you feel
Feel the sensations
of being savored
in all manner of ways
fingers, plying n' prying
into orifices, thrilling
my meat deep drilling
will truly amaze
Gaze out into wonder
by the spell you've fallen under
any inhibitions, have gone asunder
You gonna call me Daddy
As you feel
Feel the pulsing of your clit
it throbs with pleasures
so pleasing, the slit starts
to spit, hiss like a snake
the thick of me you take
in n' swallow, buried in your treasure
as we thrust n cuss in ecstatic
erratic tones, deeper I bury my bone
as you call for your 'maker'
to carry you home
You gonna call me Daddy
Because the bodies colliding
produces more than heat
the sweat you get is more
than work, you shout
"It's CUMMIN! OOooowww...
so intense now, you're not making sense...
I sense this it, taking you
over the top, ass licked, again I stick
the big stick meeting the very depths
of your well, I feel your spring's
sprung a leak, two hands gripping ass cheeks,
you struggling to speak
buttering my swollen meat
cream my expectation to greet
got baby all soaked in her seat...
So... speak, silence breaks
as orgasmic cataclysmically peaks
What you gonna call me..??
When I...
I remove my belt
Lay you down, naked
n' write with tongue
all over your body,
how the name is spelt
You gonna call me Daddy
When you feel
Feel the sensations
of being savored
in all manner of ways
fingers, plying n' prying
into orifices, thrilling
my meat deep drilling
will truly amaze
Gaze out into wonder
by the spell you've fallen under
any inhibitions, have gone asunder
You gonna call me Daddy
As you feel
Feel the pulsing of your clit
it throbs with pleasures
so pleasing, the slit starts
to spit, hiss like a snake
the thick of me you take
in n' swallow, buried in your treasure
as we thrust n cuss in ecstatic
erratic tones, deeper I bury my bone
as you call for your 'maker'
to carry you home
You gonna call me Daddy
Because the bodies colliding
produces more than heat
the sweat you get is more
than work, you shout
"It's CUMMIN! OOooowww...
so intense now, you're not making sense...
I sense this it, taking you
over the top, ass licked, again I stick
the big stick meeting the very depths
of your well, I feel your spring's
sprung a leak, two hands gripping ass cheeks,
you struggling to speak
buttering my swollen meat
cream my expectation to greet
got baby all soaked in her seat...
So... speak, silence breaks
as orgasmic cataclysmically peaks
What you gonna call me..??
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Re: You gonna call me
27th Aug 2013 12:02pm
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27th Aug 2013 3:43pm
Re: You gonna call me
27th Aug 2013 4:08pm
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27th Aug 2013 4:12pm
lmao thanks, is that a 'cross eyed' expression? l.o.l. n yea, sorry bout the 'public' note, but i have no other way of letting u know... thank you my sweetness i treasure ur support always :)
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27th Aug 2013 4:16pm
This >.< is my cross eyed look lolz
public note was fine, confirmed that I need to mail a little durban poison up north
public note was fine, confirmed that I need to mail a little durban poison up north
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re: re: re: Re: You gonna call me
27th Aug 2013 4:24pm
lmao well i thought >.< was ur frustrated look! l.o.l. this is faaaarrrr too complicated for my tiny brain to absorb! l.o.l. n yay! send! send! l.o.l.
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27th Aug 2013 4:59pm
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re: Re: You gonna call me
27th Aug 2013 6:43pm
Hey I try bro! lol seriously though, I appreciate your support n thoughts n I'm happy you enjoyed this piece :)
Re: You gonna call me
Ohhh Daddy! Smack it, spank it, ruuub it down! Hold it now, hold that sh*t!hahahaha You sooo nasty big daddy!
Red
Red
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re: Re: You gonna call me
27th Aug 2013 6:51pm
Lmao!! U nearly killed me with this comment! I was drinking
water n choked like crazy lol... thank you Red, pleased you enjoyed n love the funny, just make sure u ask me
to read with caution next time deal? lol appreciatd u always :)
water n choked like crazy lol... thank you Red, pleased you enjoyed n love the funny, just make sure u ask me
to read with caution next time deal? lol appreciatd u always :)
Re: You gonna call me
Anonymous
27th Aug 2013 9:09pm
Mmmm, soaked in the seat is right... wiggling a little too...
... Daddy, lol
... Daddy, lol

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re: Re: You gonna call me
27th Aug 2013 11:54pm
Yes!! Yes yes! lol thank you mami! lol
Truly appreciate ur support always :)
Truly appreciate ur support always :)
Re: You gonna call me
27th Aug 2013 9:41pm
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7th Sep 2013 1:14am
Wow! Lol I'm sorry I missed this amazing comment my sweetness! Forgive me? Thank u so much!
Re: You gonna call me
Anonymous
27th Aug 2013 10:12pm
I like the poem but I do not understand
the word DADDY used in the sexual sense...
To me - it sounds incestuous...but that
is only my opinion and interpretation...
I would never call a lover DADDY
but I would probably call him "pussycat"
as that is the warmest term of endearment
I give.....
the word DADDY used in the sexual sense...
To me - it sounds incestuous...but that
is only my opinion and interpretation...
I would never call a lover DADDY
but I would probably call him "pussycat"
as that is the warmest term of endearment
I give.....

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re: Re: You gonna call me
29th Aug 2013 11:06am
It would be impossible to INCEST when the other involved has absolutely no blood relation, or any legal ties to you i.e... step, inlaw and whatever... as for not understanding it's a term like my others that's according to one's taste, some like, some don't lol... Appreciate your thoughts n support always.
P.S. "I'd call them, PUSSYCAT!? Lol THAT sounds worse to me lol
P.S. "I'd call them, PUSSYCAT!? Lol THAT sounds worse to me lol
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Anonymous
29th Aug 2013 2:04pm
What is wrong with PUSSYCAT?
meow.............hissssssssssssssssssssssssss
meow.....
meow.............hissssssssssssssssssssssssss
meow.....

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29th Aug 2013 2:22pm
Lmao nothing if You're being the pussy cat! whoof! Whoof! lol
C'mere, mmmmmmmmm lol
C'mere, mmmmmmmmm lol
Re: You gonna call me
28th Aug 2013 00:00am
Damn brother, you got the ladies hot and bothered on this. A steamy erotica that leaves you speechless, but enough to say,"who's your daddy." Great job!
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re: Re: You gonna call me
29th Aug 2013 11:08am
Lmao love ur comment n you had me rolling bro!
No I was just doing what I do, imaging n writing out the thoughts that Dance around in the ole noggin lol...
Thanks a ton for the laugh n support :)
No I was just doing what I do, imaging n writing out the thoughts that Dance around in the ole noggin lol...
Thanks a ton for the laugh n support :)
Re: You gonna call me
28th Aug 2013 2:35am
re: Re: You gonna call me
29th Aug 2013 11:11am
Interesting... Sounds like you were both hot n cold lol
jk... Truly appreciate your sweet comment n always you for your support my dear :)
jk... Truly appreciate your sweet comment n always you for your support my dear :)
Re: You gonna call me
28th Aug 2013 11:03pm
re: Re: You gonna call me
29th Aug 2013 11:15am
Aaaaawwwww so happy you did! makes me happy to know my friend, now if only i could get you stutter I'll feel like I'm making progress! lol jk... Truly appreciate you sweetness :)
Re: You gonna call me
29th Aug 2013 11:18am
Read this after coming up with something about "daddy" versus "papi", so timing worked for me. I was intrigued with the feel of the poem as I jokingly was wondering if someone was going to call Ghostbusters. No doubt as to the roles in this write.
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re: Re: You gonna call me
29th Aug 2013 11:33am
When something's 'strange' in yo neighborhood, who you gon'
call? GHOSTBUSTERS! lol yea, that takes me back yup yup!
lol thanks, n yea I know... But growing up around a lot of Latinos n Latinas I e Always personally loved hearing the women say, "Papi" much more sexy in my opinion!
As for Daddy... I think of it more as a funny thing than anything else lol thanks for ur thoughts, appreciate it n I will check out ur ink soon :)
call? GHOSTBUSTERS! lol yea, that takes me back yup yup!
lol thanks, n yea I know... But growing up around a lot of Latinos n Latinas I e Always personally loved hearing the women say, "Papi" much more sexy in my opinion!
As for Daddy... I think of it more as a funny thing than anything else lol thanks for ur thoughts, appreciate it n I will check out ur ink soon :)
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29th Aug 2013 4:44pm
oh no big deal, just that at least one of our friends here doesn't like "daddy" at all. I don't think she has ever played pick-up basketball, pool, or/and been witness to what happens when the competitive juices take over!
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29th Aug 2013 7:00pm
Re: You gonna call me
30th Aug 2013 6:26am
Ugh this is great I can read this exactly how you wrote it do you rap?! Lol all your writings have an amazing flow to them. I really can appreciate this bc i have the same style.
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re: Re: You gonna call me
30th Aug 2013 11:37am
Literally? NO, but I ink how I feel inside... In the moment
n with I internal 'music' playing its beats in my soul... Lol
Probably sounds retarded but it's the honest to god's truth lol
Thank you sweetness, happy you liked n FYI? Be prepared
I will Always flip the script n change up writing styles!! lol
n with I internal 'music' playing its beats in my soul... Lol
Probably sounds retarded but it's the honest to god's truth lol
Thank you sweetness, happy you liked n FYI? Be prepared
I will Always flip the script n change up writing styles!! lol
Re: You gonna call me
31st Aug 2013 2:10pm
The flow of your words carries me along, feeling them, tasting them ,savoring them ... Wonderful write, Poe!
Chi
Chi
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Re: You gonna call me
18th Sep 2013 11:08pm
I will definitely call u Daddy, honey 4real :) I like the flow u got man, its hella nice ;)
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re: Re: You gonna call me
31st Dec 2013 7:24pm
Wow I'm sooooooo ashamed I have completely missed this comment!! Thank you so much n I'm sorry bout the late reply...:( but I'm happy you wanna call me daddy lol
Re: You gonna call me
31st Dec 2013 3:13pm
re: Re: You gonna call me
31st Dec 2013 7:29pm
I'm glad u went back into my 'vault' I'm humbled too
N I'd be willing to bet if u went further you'd find more you would have some 'thoughts' about lol
Appreciate ur support always my darling Nik! :)
N I'd be willing to bet if u went further you'd find more you would have some 'thoughts' about lol
Appreciate ur support always my darling Nik! :)
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