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Darkness Speaks
Darkness speaks
Within
Sinuous tendrils tentacles
Reaching out, tips probing
Touching feeling out
The screams in dreams
Flashing out, Fleshing
Fears horrors misery
Brushing slowly
Like discordant violins
Screeches on surface
Slimes slides
Fingers
Scratches
She screams
Looking into the abyss.
Within
Sinuous tendrils tentacles
Reaching out, tips probing
Touching feeling out
The screams in dreams
Flashing out, Fleshing
Fears horrors misery
Brushing slowly
Like discordant violins
Screeches on surface
Slimes slides
Fingers
Scratches
She screams
Looking into the abyss.
Written by
Grace
(IDryad)
Published 13th Jun 2013
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Re: Darkness Speaks
13th Jun 2013 9:00am
re: Re: Darkness Speaks
13th Jun 2013 9:14am
Thanks Magdalena...wrote this after a visit to a Hospital. A woman kept looking out of the window with a terrified expression on her face. She did not scream of course but I felt that she must be screaming inside; I wondered what she saw...or what she was seeing.
re: re: Re: Darkness Speaks
13th Jun 2013 12:37pm
Demons Grace, the kind our minds conjure up..
Things we see...but dare not share. Powerful write mate..
Things we see...but dare not share. Powerful write mate..
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13th Jun 2013 5:55pm
Re: Darkness Speaks
13th Jun 2013 1:00pm
Nightmares are never a good thing but fear not the sun will again rise and bring a smile back to your eyes.
Red
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re: Re: Darkness Speaks
13th Jun 2013 5:57pm
Re: Darkness Speaks
13th Jun 2013 2:08pm
A dark and scary write indeed Dear Grace!!!
Lets hope this Woman smiles soon!!!
Lets hope this Woman smiles soon!!!
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re: Re: Darkness Speaks
13th Jun 2013 5:58pm
Re: Darkness Speaks
13th Jun 2013 11:01pm
I've felt this darkness Grace a spine tingling read. excellent peace Crim :)
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re: Re: Darkness Speaks
13th Jun 2013 11:55pm
I'm sorry such memories are dredged up by the write dear Crim...but thank you for being kind.
Re: Darkness Speaks
14th Jun 2013 8:37am
Like Unveiling, I too have known such profound darkness... things you can't reveal to anyone but which change you in ways you could never have imagined previously. Sometimes there can be light beyond that dark, but it can be a long time before one finds it. Not everyone can or does... and some can become lost in the darkness, amidst the demons, forever. A powerful poem, Grace! From a powerful poetess I am happy to call my friend. :)
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re: Re: Darkness Speaks
14th Jun 2013 9:02am
Dear Jess ...we have known darkness indeed. And we managed to get out...some people just get lost. And you are my forever friend in the circle of our cycle.
Re: Darkness Speaks
Anonymous
14th Jun 2013 10:45am
You wrote dark well grace...
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re: Re: Darkness Speaks
15th Jun 2013 4:26am
Unfortunately, thats because I am acquainted with it too, Strider. Thanks for being here.
Re: Darkness Speaks
14th Jun 2013 10:08pm
A different view of darkness, one much different from mine, I like it!
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15th Jun 2013 4:28am