Observational Poems by Top Critiquers
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Poetry about life, society and the natural world
Poems written by Top Critiquers
DamianDeadLove
Poem Published
20th Nov 2024 8:28am
20th Nov 2024 8:28am
A Selfish Heart
Stars observe all the chaos below
Watching human’s hurt one another
Hatred takes root and starts to grow
While pitting sister against brother
Never learning from past mistakes
Gravitating towards great despair
Rushing headlong without brakes
A selfish heart without fruit to bear
Copyright @ Damian DeadLove 2024
Watching human’s hurt one another
Hatred takes root and starts to grow
While pitting sister against brother
Never learning from past mistakes
Gravitating towards great despair
Rushing headlong without brakes
A selfish heart without fruit to bear
Copyright @ Damian DeadLove 2024
#regret
57 reads
6 Comments
Her
Poem Published
7th Nov 2024 00:41am
7th Nov 2024 00:41am
We
Live
In a wounded world
Let kindness
Be the balm
In a wounded world
Let kindness
Be the balm
#TruthOfLife
85 reads
5 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
20th Nov 2024 11:15am
20th Nov 2024 11:15am
Pro Death
Too many humans
Mankind is off track
The Black Plague was a dick
But it needs to come back
Our world's spinning faster
Like a playground carousel
With a trillion kids pushing
Until it flings us off to hell
China may be dystopia
But they got one thing right
One child per family
We could use their insight
No lives matter
We're all equally worthless
I'll say it again
No lives matter
We're all equally worthless
I'm not "Pro-Life"
So save your breath
And I'm not...
Mankind is off track
The Black Plague was a dick
But it needs to come back
Our world's spinning faster
Like a playground carousel
With a trillion kids pushing
Until it flings us off to hell
China may be dystopia
But they got one thing right
One child per family
We could use their insight
No lives matter
We're all equally worthless
I'll say it again
No lives matter
We're all equally worthless
I'm not "Pro-Life"
So save your breath
And I'm not...
#CallToAction
#death
#LifeGoals
#LifeStruggles
#satirical
32 reads
3 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
20th Mar 2021 1:20pm
20th Mar 2021 1:20pm
molestor pester boil in oil
stroke me I think not
peddal you trike elsewhere
I farted in you
why?
you earned it
think with that
shit in your brains
take that alien
and stay the fuck away
poison ivy on you thick cock
you're empty
clashes keep your ashes
ashes ashes we all fall down
peddal you trike elsewhere
I farted in you
why?
you earned it
think with that
shit in your brains
take that alien
and stay the fuck away
poison ivy on you thick cock
you're empty
clashes keep your ashes
ashes ashes we all fall down
#dark
484 reads
2 Comments
fianaturie8
Fia Naturie
Fia Naturie
Poem Published
2nd Nov 2024 8:16pm
2nd Nov 2024 8:16pm
Random Thought??
Sitting here thinking ...
Men want women
" To arch their backs"
For looks or easy entry?
Not certain
Women want men
"To put their backs into it."
For thrust capacity or rhythm?
Not certain
Either way, the chiropractors and orthopedists will always be needed to align the spine Straight!
Men want women
" To arch their backs"
For looks or easy entry?
Not certain
Women want men
"To put their backs into it."
For thrust capacity or rhythm?
Not certain
Either way, the chiropractors and orthopedists will always be needed to align the spine Straight!
#sex
129 reads
26 Comments
deliabear
Debbie
Debbie
Poem Published
2nd Nov 2024 6:42pm
2nd Nov 2024 6:42pm
The Way Life Goes
Sun pierces through a vast barricade of bark.
Moon filtering through the dream landscape
of the dark.
Those were the days, trees were on fire.
A blaze with the most vibrant orange.
Burning against the evergreen fringe.
Warmer on the heart than the breath of spring.
Reflecting backwards she thought
I guess that's the way life goes.
Acceptance is the secret no one seems to know.
Moon filtering through the dream landscape
of the dark.
Those were the days, trees were on fire.
A blaze with the most vibrant orange.
Burning against the evergreen fringe.
Warmer on the heart than the breath of spring.
Reflecting backwards she thought
I guess that's the way life goes.
Acceptance is the secret no one seems to know.
#nature
#SelfReflection
94 reads
21 Comments
Pete_25
Poem Published
27th Oct 2024 8:09am
27th Oct 2024 8:09am
Look At Me
Here I am for all to see
My story in glory, look at me
Social net, their many sites
Camera, action, phones bright lights
My world, my soul, here is my wall
Random friends, I give you it all
Never met, request and send
Latest fads, following trends
Timeline, pic, vid upload
Public, flick, watch, unfold
So here I am for all to see
A web celeb... I'm yours for free
My story in glory, look at me
Social net, their many sites
Camera, action, phones bright lights
My world, my soul, here is my wall
Random friends, I give you it all
Never met, request and send
Latest fads, following trends
Timeline, pic, vid upload
Public, flick, watch, unfold
So here I am for all to see
A web celeb... I'm yours for free
#technology
99 reads
14 Comments
wallyroo92
Poem Published
16th Nov 2024 10:16pm
16th Nov 2024 10:16pm
At Midnight the Stars Shine Brighter
If you speak the truth then some people will think you’re uncouth
Society has lost propriety smiling brightly while a missing tooth
So it’s up to poets how to show us with rhyme, stanza and verse
Dropping a volley of knowledge like its college - fully immersed
But in the new world that’s been flung and hurled into the gutter
Those who write well are the new age rebel outlaws with a cause
When a sonnet runs the gamut of observation, reflection and thought
As the lexicon has brains and brawn sharper than transitive claws
Pause
He...
Society has lost propriety smiling brightly while a missing tooth
So it’s up to poets how to show us with rhyme, stanza and verse
Dropping a volley of knowledge like its college - fully immersed
But in the new world that’s been flung and hurled into the gutter
Those who write well are the new age rebel outlaws with a cause
When a sonnet runs the gamut of observation, reflection and thought
As the lexicon has brains and brawn sharper than transitive claws
Pause
He...
#LifeAsAWriter
#WritingPoetry
56 reads
6 Comments
Ahavati
Tams
Tams
Poem Published
14th Nov 2024 10:24pm
14th Nov 2024 10:24pm
Broken-record
I.
I wish I was a Witch
imbued through grace
beget by the knowledge of Truth
to combat ignorance
I'd proudly proclaim the title
bowing to Mother Nature
for gifting me the moniker
of so brave the women
—maiden, mother, and crone—
who suffered under religiosity
from pointy fingers
and judgmental tongues
condemning them to death
II.
...
I wish I was a Witch
imbued through grace
beget by the knowledge of Truth
to combat ignorance
I'd proudly proclaim the title
bowing to Mother Nature
for gifting me the moniker
of so brave the women
—maiden, mother, and crone—
who suffered under religiosity
from pointy fingers
and judgmental tongues
condemning them to death
II.
...
#magic
#pagan
#universe #witches
#universe #witches
155 reads
22 Comments
Solomon_Song
Poem Published
19th Nov 2024 7:49pm
19th Nov 2024 7:49pm
ODE TO AMANDA HOLDEN
#beauty
#women
21 reads
0 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
20th Nov 2024 11:15pm
20th Nov 2024 11:15pm
HUMAN INTO A MACHINE
It's me again the story teller of unspoken words ✍️ Yet I come here now before you, as I am a witness to what he can do for you. 🙏 For sure I am not just only HUMAN AND A MACHINE. 🤔 For I am more than that, for sure I have the ability to manifest that, which I see and believe, in my silent whispers of my dream. For even though I can think for thyself, sometimes it feels like I have been traumatized by the things, that are involved in creating a different kind of perspective on life. 🤨 For sure we are living as placements, that has been changed by the...
#LifeChangingMoment
#SelfDiscovery
#SelfReflection
#SelfWorth
#StreamOfConsciousness
41 reads
0 Comments
MidnightSonneteer
Poem Published
14th Nov 2024 6:03pm
14th Nov 2024 6:03pm
Lysistrata Redux
Neo-Confederate MAGA
has long promoted rape
with an electorate saga
the ladies can't escape.
So now..."fuck around and find out",
we hear without a doubt
so dudes look to your brazen snout
to see what's she's about.
And don't forget that their old men
can pull a Glock to cock
to fight your civil war again
and outline you in chalk.
Cuz no one wants to be your slave
or hear your incel bleat
when she can put you in a...
has long promoted rape
with an electorate saga
the ladies can't escape.
So now..."fuck around and find out",
we hear without a doubt
so dudes look to your brazen snout
to see what's she's about.
And don't forget that their old men
can pull a Glock to cock
to fight your civil war again
and outline you in chalk.
Cuz no one wants to be your slave
or hear your incel bleat
when she can put you in a...
#lies
#manipulation
#relationships
#sex
#war
50 reads
4 Comments
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