Observational Poems by Top Critiquers
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Poetry about life, society and the natural world
Poems written by Top Critiquers
DamianDeadLove
Poem Published
Today 7:28am
Today 7:28am
Watching Humans Play
Sometimes the meaning gets lost in translation
Signals are crossed in memories that seem jaded
Plastic people are always asking for motivation
Until all the fascination slowly leaves one sedated
Observation is an art form that must be mastered
A tactic to study humanity in it’s most realistic form
Marshmallow figures bow to a corporate bastard
Media whores sale biased propaganda on the norm
Censorship is used to silence the voices they fear
Problems vanish mysteriously when paid to go away
Curious actors get hired only to...
Signals are crossed in memories that seem jaded
Plastic people are always asking for motivation
Until all the fascination slowly leaves one sedated
Observation is an art form that must be mastered
A tactic to study humanity in it’s most realistic form
Marshmallow figures bow to a corporate bastard
Media whores sale biased propaganda on the norm
Censorship is used to silence the voices they fear
Problems vanish mysteriously when paid to go away
Curious actors get hired only to...
#philosophical
18 reads
0 Comments
Her
Poem Published
22nd Dec 2024 12:14pm
22nd Dec 2024 12:14pm
Popularity
It’s a shame
It’s saddens me
To no end
When the world can’t see
What I see
That a person’s unique abilities
The qualities
That make them unique
Don’t matter if it’s not mainstream
What a pity
That not everybody can see
Them the way I do
It’s saddens me
To no end
When the world can’t see
What I see
That a person’s unique abilities
The qualities
That make them unique
Don’t matter if it’s not mainstream
What a pity
That not everybody can see
Them the way I do
#disappointment
#frustration
#sadness
138 reads
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
27th Dec 2024 12:19pm
27th Dec 2024 12:19pm
In Death's Shoes
Everything has meaning
Everything is meaningful
Everything is meaningless
Everything is mean
It all makes sense
It's all bullshit
Death fucks love in the neck
Death makes me see the end
At the beginning of everything
Death makes me want to sleep
Death is a relief
Death is a release
Death is my master and inspiration
A good boss
A good reason to live
A great reason to die
Death is the only thing I know
That doesn't need an excuse
Death doesn't lie
Death is an equal opportunity destroyer
Carpe...
Everything is meaningful
Everything is meaningless
Everything is mean
It all makes sense
It's all bullshit
Death fucks love in the neck
Death makes me see the end
At the beginning of everything
Death makes me want to sleep
Death is a relief
Death is a release
Death is my master and inspiration
A good boss
A good reason to live
A great reason to die
Death is the only thing I know
That doesn't need an excuse
Death doesn't lie
Death is an equal opportunity destroyer
Carpe...
#dark
#death
#LifeStruggles #philosophical
#LifeStruggles #philosophical
59 reads
14 Comments
fianaturie8
Fia Naturie
Fia Naturie
Poem Published
8th Dec 2024 9:14pm
8th Dec 2024 9:14pm
The Sky
Have you ever thought of the sky,
looking down at us and asking why?
Why were we made?
What was the purpose of man?
How do we coincide?
Do you think the sky rages from being annoyed at us?
It's like being on an ant farm.
Causing each other harm.
To go this way and that?
I would be mad at this fact.
Maybe the sky is depressed, blowing out puffed clouds.
Tired of watching the magnificence of man.
Yet knowing they do not understand.
What little time they have.
What miraculous things could be had?
If they would just stay...
looking down at us and asking why?
Why were we made?
What was the purpose of man?
How do we coincide?
Do you think the sky rages from being annoyed at us?
It's like being on an ant farm.
Causing each other harm.
To go this way and that?
I would be mad at this fact.
Maybe the sky is depressed, blowing out puffed clouds.
Tired of watching the magnificence of man.
Yet knowing they do not understand.
What little time they have.
What miraculous things could be had?
If they would just stay...
#learning
179 reads
30 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
20th Mar 2021 1:20pm
20th Mar 2021 1:20pm
molestor pester boil in oil
stroke me I think not
peddal you trike elsewhere
I farted in you
why?
you earned it
think with that
shit in your brains
take that alien
and stay the fuck away
poison ivy on you thick cock
you're empty
clashes keep your ashes
ashes ashes we all fall down
peddal you trike elsewhere
I farted in you
why?
you earned it
think with that
shit in your brains
take that alien
and stay the fuck away
poison ivy on you thick cock
you're empty
clashes keep your ashes
ashes ashes we all fall down
#dark
492 reads
2 Comments
Solomon_Song
Poem Published
19th Nov 2024 7:49pm
19th Nov 2024 7:49pm
ODE TO AMANDA HOLDEN
#beauty
#women
49 reads
0 Comments
PoetSpeak
Poem Published
20th May 2024 11:35am
20th May 2024 11:35am
Our Future Baby … ( Box Heads )
Yeah
I’m back with those guys
Did I ever leave ?
But now there’re weirder than ever
Reflecting modern times
Soon they will control you and me
Once AI gets a hold of them
Scary thought
Embrace them now while they are friends
Feed them love
That’s their only need
A hand job maybe on their birthday
Intimacy is not necessarily their calling
Yet we keep coming back to them
I do anyway
Their creator and mentor
Box Heads
Sexy in a dystopian kind of way
Everything is sex
Xo
Baby
I’m back with those guys
Did I ever leave ?
But now there’re weirder than ever
Reflecting modern times
Soon they will control you and me
Once AI gets a hold of them
Scary thought
Embrace them now while they are friends
Feed them love
That’s their only need
A hand job maybe on their birthday
Intimacy is not necessarily their calling
Yet we keep coming back to them
I do anyway
Their creator and mentor
Box Heads
Sexy in a dystopian kind of way
Everything is sex
Xo
Baby
#art
#LifeAsAWriter
#love
#pagan
#StreamOfConsciousness
212 reads
30 Comments
Honoria
Poem Published
12th Feb 2023 5:21am
12th Feb 2023 5:21am
She Pondered
It’s what we do as humans, isn’t it?
Compare and contrast the good, the bad and the ugly. It makes us feel better, doesn’t it?
Helping ourselves ease the disappointment of what we perceive we don’t have, versus those whom we perceive TO have, right?
Proverbial grass is greener theory, until the veneer cracks. Dark truths ooze out. As vultures we swoop in to pick the flesh from the rotting corpses. Why?
Compare and contrast the good, the bad and the ugly. It makes us feel better, doesn’t it?
Helping ourselves ease the disappointment of what we perceive we don’t have, versus those whom we perceive TO have, right?
Proverbial grass is greener theory, until the veneer cracks. Dark truths ooze out. As vultures we swoop in to pick the flesh from the rotting corpses. Why?
#frustration
822 reads
53 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
8th Dec 2024 7:49pm
8th Dec 2024 7:49pm
IF THERE IS NO MORE WARS
It's me again the story teller of unspoken words ✍️. Just imagine if there wasn't no more WARS. 🤨 FOR could you even imagine in your own, thoughts of your own mind what the world, 🌎 WOULD be like if there was no more damn WARS... 🤔 Yeah I know some of your think that I'm crazy 🤨 or I just lost my damn mind. 😯 But yet it's possible that could happen, 😔 on the flip side of our own situation, and own opinions on the screen of life. 🤨 For sure as we exchange thoughts and insight and imagination, tell me what's...
#dialogue
#epic
#metaphor
#philosophical
#StreamOfConsciousness
59 reads
2 Comments
Ahavati
Tams
Tams
Poem Published
14th Dec 2024 12:34pm
14th Dec 2024 12:34pm
Anne-Ri999
Visual Expression Series X
#admiration
#respect
#spiritual
234 reads
15 Comments
WillowsWhimsies
Poem Published
5th Dec 2024 10:28am
5th Dec 2024 10:28am
evolutionary negation
labels only fit
for a specific moment
erased with new growth
for a specific moment
erased with new growth
#TruthOfLife
134 reads
16 Comments
Pete_25
Poem Published
13th Dec 2024 8:34am
13th Dec 2024 8:34am
Supermarket Sweep
Never ending aisles
Oh grocery store
Two for one offers
Feed me it all
Baskets in bloom
Trollies a glee
Shopping list frenzy
Food spending spree
Shelf upon shelf
Line after line
Screaming bored children
Pass me the wine
Decision, decision
No thrill, top brand
Decision, collision
Octopus hand
Delivery option
Armchair, online
Shopping unpacked
Where is that wine?
Oh grocery store
Two for one offers
Feed me it all
Baskets in bloom
Trollies a glee
Shopping list frenzy
Food spending spree
Shelf upon shelf
Line after line
Screaming bored children
Pass me the wine
Decision, decision
No thrill, top brand
Decision, collision
Octopus hand
Delivery option
Armchair, online
Shopping unpacked
Where is that wine?
#consumerism
#funny
94 reads
16 Comments
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