Observational Poems by Top Critiquers
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Poetry about life, society and the natural world
Poems written by Top Critiquers
We
Live
In a wounded world
Let kindness
Be the balm
In a wounded world
Let kindness
Be the balm
#TruthOfLife
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Toxic Regime
Can someone please explain their logic?
I’m lost beyond measure it would seem
I got deja-vu the whole thing feels ironic
Once again living under this toxic regime
Copyright @ Damian DeadLove 2024
I’m lost beyond measure it would seem
I got deja-vu the whole thing feels ironic
Once again living under this toxic regime
Copyright @ Damian DeadLove 2024
#disappointment
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12 Comments
Is the Ranch Dressing As Creamy As Your Cum?
A vulgar case
Of food tampering
Bodily fluid
Into salad dressing
Orgasm in the cafeteria
Semen into salad dressing
Everyone there is disgusted
The sickest thing they've ever heard
Contents could have been digested
Warnings told about this health hazard
Of food tampering
Bodily fluid
Into salad dressing
Orgasm in the cafeteria
Semen into salad dressing
Everyone there is disgusted
The sickest thing they've ever heard
Contents could have been digested
Warnings told about this health hazard
#MentalHealth
#satirical
#school
#TruthOfLife
#dirty
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9 Comments
Random Thought??
Sitting here thinking ...
Men want women
" To arch their backs"
For looks or easy entry?
Not certain
Women want men
"To put their backs into it."
For thrust capacity or rhythm?
Not certain
Either way, the chiropractors and orthopedists will always be needed to align the spine Straight!
Men want women
" To arch their backs"
For looks or easy entry?
Not certain
Women want men
"To put their backs into it."
For thrust capacity or rhythm?
Not certain
Either way, the chiropractors and orthopedists will always be needed to align the spine Straight!
#sex
96 reads
26 Comments
WHY DO WE NEED LABELS?
#love
#courage
#motivational
#admiration
#emotions
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9 Comments
molestor pester boil in oil
stroke me I think not
peddal you trike elsewhere
I farted in you
why?
you earned it
think with that
shit in your brains
take that alien
and stay the fuck away
poison ivy on you thick cock
you're empty
clashes keep your ashes
ashes ashes we all fall down
peddal you trike elsewhere
I farted in you
why?
you earned it
think with that
shit in your brains
take that alien
and stay the fuck away
poison ivy on you thick cock
you're empty
clashes keep your ashes
ashes ashes we all fall down
#dark
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2 Comments
From before to the now
From the deepness of the truth, that it shall reveal the real makings of a new, frontier of hope and dreams and endless possibilities. 🙏 For sure we can slowly see a new horizon, that once was hidden behind the darkness of thick clouds. Changing as it has done more harm than good, yet it is soon coming over the world. 🌍 YET it's for the betterment of mankind and humanity, for gone is the unnecessary feelings of hatred and discrimination of negativity, bought on by the devil's 👿 in human skin. For sure we stand here as one nation under GOD. 🙏 ALMIGHTY and the...
#friendship
#humankind
#men
#soldiers
#women
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Look At Me
Here I am for all to see
My story in glory, look at me
Social net, their many sites
Camera, action, phones bright lights
My world, my soul, here is my wall
Random friends, I give you it all
Never met, request and send
Latest fads, following trends
Timeline, pic, vid upload
Public, flick, watch, unfold
So here I am for all to see
A web celeb... I'm yours for free
My story in glory, look at me
Social net, their many sites
Camera, action, phones bright lights
My world, my soul, here is my wall
Random friends, I give you it all
Never met, request and send
Latest fads, following trends
Timeline, pic, vid upload
Public, flick, watch, unfold
So here I am for all to see
A web celeb... I'm yours for free
#technology
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14 Comments
The Way Life Goes
Sun pierces through a vast barricade of bark.
Moon filtering through the dream landscape
of the dark.
Those were the days, trees were on fire.
A blaze with the most vibrant orange.
Burning against the evergreen fringe.
Warmer on the heart than the breath of spring.
Reflecting backwards she thought
I guess that's the way life goes.
Acceptance is the secret no one seems to know.
Moon filtering through the dream landscape
of the dark.
Those were the days, trees were on fire.
A blaze with the most vibrant orange.
Burning against the evergreen fringe.
Warmer on the heart than the breath of spring.
Reflecting backwards she thought
I guess that's the way life goes.
Acceptance is the secret no one seems to know.
#nature
#SelfReflection
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21 Comments
Concrete
Zoolike daze
your life in an
X-files maze
world issues
violence hate
urban horror
the cupidity
shatters us
rigid politics
questionable
pharmacies
opportunistic
news readers
manipulators
lying leaders
kindless, idle
jurisdictions
indifference
hypocrisies
Government
fucks stuff up
ending earth
deforestation
concrete jungle
biohazard frenzy
awake, my friends
your life in an
X-files maze
world issues
violence hate
urban horror
the cupidity
shatters us
rigid politics
questionable
pharmacies
opportunistic
news readers
manipulators
lying leaders
kindless, idle
jurisdictions
indifference
hypocrisies
Government
fucks stuff up
ending earth
deforestation
concrete jungle
biohazard frenzy
awake, my friends
#corruption
#politics
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26 Comments
Equal to
My birthday has become
a time of giving and serving
It's an exchange of gratitude
for another year of living
What better way to share
than providing a home
for a rescue kitty
who needed to be loved
Isn't that true for all of us
“And, in the end
The love you take
is equal to the love you make.”
a time of giving and serving
It's an exchange of gratitude
for another year of living
What better way to share
than providing a home
for a rescue kitty
who needed to be loved
Isn't that true for all of us
“And, in the end
The love you take
is equal to the love you make.”
#animals
#birthday
#cats #love
#cats #love
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7 Comments
American Idle
Vote now for your favorite performer!
Or else your ballot will go up in smoke
Because the latter unlike the former
Is a serious offense and not a joke
Some like to stoke flames of hate
Then pretend and look the other way
But all this useless idling just creates
More mayhem to everyone’s dismay
Still many strive to move forward
With growth, progress, and common goals
While other’s stagger with vile words
Delusional and completely out of control
Many of us can sense a wind of change
We feel hope and...
Or else your ballot will go up in smoke
Because the latter unlike the former
Is a serious offense and not a joke
Some like to stoke flames of hate
Then pretend and look the other way
But all this useless idling just creates
More mayhem to everyone’s dismay
Still many strive to move forward
With growth, progress, and common goals
While other’s stagger with vile words
Delusional and completely out of control
Many of us can sense a wind of change
We feel hope and...
#funny
#LifeStruggles
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16 Comments
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