Observational Poems by Top Critiquers
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Poetry about life, society and the natural world
Poems written by Top Critiquers
Godspeed, Fellow Writer's
Propaganda got emotions running hot
Misinformation crowds an angry stage
Seems the internet can cause brain rot
Inciting the masses with constant rage
Help me understand how we got here
Political puppets are deciding our fate
It’s not a mere illusion it’s more severe
Wealthy families fighting over the gate
I’m sorry fellow poets/poetesses I had every intention of writing this poem. Maybe I did write it, maybe it’s not meant to be what I call finished.
My muse has other ideas in mind. She always gets her way, and she is...
Misinformation crowds an angry stage
Seems the internet can cause brain rot
Inciting the masses with constant rage
Help me understand how we got here
Political puppets are deciding our fate
It’s not a mere illusion it’s more severe
Wealthy families fighting over the gate
I’m sorry fellow poets/poetesses I had every intention of writing this poem. Maybe I did write it, maybe it’s not meant to be what I call finished.
My muse has other ideas in mind. She always gets her way, and she is...
#freedom
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17 Comments
The Rise, Fall & Rebirth of a Giant
Once imperative to growth
Now decaying
Dilapidated
The future home of condos and a shopping district
History succumbs to progress
The death of beauty
Now decaying
Dilapidated
The future home of condos and a shopping district
History succumbs to progress
The death of beauty
#consumerism
#historical
#TruthOfLife
210 reads
25 Comments
Unholy Seed
They're doing tricks on the blind
And busy bee got control
The other brick in the wall
Another day on the job
And that's the way things work
Digging, shoving, to fuel the machinery
Watch the pistons pump
That's the drive that keeps the heart alive
And all that you desire
Making you the perfect liar
And someone's casting pearls before the swine
On the road to hell
Illuminati
N.W.O. in control
While fingers worked to the bone
Illuminati, unholy seed
In 1776 the birth of greed
...
And busy bee got control
The other brick in the wall
Another day on the job
And that's the way things work
Digging, shoving, to fuel the machinery
Watch the pistons pump
That's the drive that keeps the heart alive
And all that you desire
Making you the perfect liar
And someone's casting pearls before the swine
On the road to hell
Illuminati
N.W.O. in control
While fingers worked to the bone
Illuminati, unholy seed
In 1776 the birth of greed
...
#corruption
#greed
#HumanRights
#inequality
#politics
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4 Comments
Get the Meat Out!
Get the words out of your head
It has taken residence there for too long
Are you afraid of what they say?
That they will not like it?
Hey Fia they are all not going to like it.
They are not all supposed to like it.
Get the meat out
Then cook it
Then decide on the sides
If you want a desert
Add something sticky sweet.
What I am saying is get the words out of your head
Are you going Mad giving yourself a pep talk?
Not sure. But this needed to be said
So I said it.
It has taken residence there for too long
Are you afraid of what they say?
That they will not like it?
Hey Fia they are all not going to like it.
They are not all supposed to like it.
Get the meat out
Then cook it
Then decide on the sides
If you want a desert
Add something sticky sweet.
What I am saying is get the words out of your head
Are you going Mad giving yourself a pep talk?
Not sure. But this needed to be said
So I said it.
#confessional
#myself
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20 Comments
A WICKED WORLD
As long as I can remember I never truly thought that my hometown. 🌆 NEW YORK CITY 🏙️ WOULD BE BLANKET IN SHADES OF 🌑 DARKNESS. THE YEARS OF THE INVASION 2020 to now 2024 OF THE MAGGOTS, CALLED THE NEW COMERS OF AMERICA. IMMIGRANTS AS THEY WERE SENT BY BUSES AND PLANES, even walking across the border. WHO KNEW WILL BE DESTROYING THE CITY LIFE. 😲 YET here is the truth of the devastation of crimes, with no punishment or jail time, murders and robbery, and the senseless killings of American citizen. WHO are people young and elderly and childrens....
#money
#PowerOfWords
#StreamOfConsciousness
#vampires
#werewolves
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2 Comments
The Dark Moon
The moon has a dark side
…a harem of stars
to fuck every night;
surrounded by his concubines
he sucks up their light,
and glows with an
aura so saintly and white
thus, a naïve is fooled
with his deceptive sight
a vampire in disguise-
the moon has a dark side
…a harem of stars
to fuck every night;
surrounded by his concubines
he sucks up their light,
and glows with an
aura so saintly and white
thus, a naïve is fooled
with his deceptive sight
a vampire in disguise-
the moon has a dark side
#abuse
#corruption
#dark
#moon
#politics
415 reads
45 Comments
WHY DO WE NEED LABELS?
#love
#courage
#motivational
#admiration
#emotions
106 reads
9 Comments
Comparison
It's bad to compare.
Demons lurk the perfect ones.
Illusion, not bliss.
Demons lurk the perfect ones.
Illusion, not bliss.
#haiku
#lies
184 reads
17 Comments
Look At Me
Here I am for all to see
My story in glory, look at me
Social net, their many sites
Camera, action, phones bright lights
My world, my soul, here is my wall
Random friends, I give you it all
Never met, request and send
Latest fads, following trends
Timeline, pic, vid upload
Public, flick, watch, unfold
So here I am for all to see
A web celeb... I'm yours for free
My story in glory, look at me
Social net, their many sites
Camera, action, phones bright lights
My world, my soul, here is my wall
Random friends, I give you it all
Never met, request and send
Latest fads, following trends
Timeline, pic, vid upload
Public, flick, watch, unfold
So here I am for all to see
A web celeb... I'm yours for free
#technology
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12 Comments
Winter's Prose
In autumn's glow, the world begins to rest
And amber leaves descend in weathered flight
The summer's heat now finds a gentler quest
As chilly winds chase the lingering light
The trees, donning their robes of ember gold
Stand sentinel against the waning sun
Their branches reach with tales of seasons old
While shadows stretch as days are nearly done
The air is crisp, a breath of frost and pine
As harvests yield their bounty to the earth
The twilight hours in muted hues align
And nightfall's calm descends with...
And amber leaves descend in weathered flight
The summer's heat now finds a gentler quest
As chilly winds chase the lingering light
The trees, donning their robes of ember gold
Stand sentinel against the waning sun
Their branches reach with tales of seasons old
While shadows stretch as days are nearly done
The air is crisp, a breath of frost and pine
As harvests yield their bounty to the earth
The twilight hours in muted hues align
And nightfall's calm descends with...
#fall
#LifeCycle
#nature #trees
#nature #trees
428 reads
33 Comments
molestor pester boil in oil
stroke me I think not
peddal you trike elsewhere
I farted in you
why?
you earned it
think with that
shit in your brains
take that alien
and stay the fuck away
poison ivy on you thick cock
you're empty
clashes keep your ashes
ashes ashes we all fall down
peddal you trike elsewhere
I farted in you
why?
you earned it
think with that
shit in your brains
take that alien
and stay the fuck away
poison ivy on you thick cock
you're empty
clashes keep your ashes
ashes ashes we all fall down
#dark
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2 Comments
flesh of the earth
the flesh
of earth
has been
turned up,
its bones
spread out
into rows,
the tendons
holding
onto the
seeds,
and new
life
will come
from the
tears
of others.
of earth
has been
turned up,
its bones
spread out
into rows,
the tendons
holding
onto the
seeds,
and new
life
will come
from the
tears
of others.
#consumerism
#culture
#identity
#morality
#tradition
68 reads
6 Comments
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