Miscellaneous Poems by Top Critiquers
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Random, diverse and unusual poetry
Poems written by Top Critiquers
Insomnia, Sleep with me...
I will be your eternal memory that does not let you sleep ...
You will forever remember every minute spent with me,
and every thought will pierce you like an electric current,
blowing up your consciousness and turning on your mind!
Turning you on in every other way too, piercing steel rod
You will forever remember me as a crazy chaos in your head
depriving you of sleep! And you will dream of touching me
at least with your breath, feeling this touch on your body ...
with an exciting tremor!
You will forever remember every minute spent with me,
and every thought will pierce you like an electric current,
blowing up your consciousness and turning on your mind!
Turning you on in every other way too, piercing steel rod
You will forever remember me as a crazy chaos in your head
depriving you of sleep! And you will dream of touching me
at least with your breath, feeling this touch on your body ...
with an exciting tremor!
#men
#insomnia
#passion
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36 Comments
H 1214
Her heart hurt hard, hurled in hurried high hopes,
Harried hastily haunted by horrid hallucinations,
Hence her hatred of horrendous hideous hordes,
Hiding halfheartedly, heightening her hesitation.
Harried hastily haunted by horrid hallucinations,
Hence her hatred of horrendous hideous hordes,
Hiding halfheartedly, heightening her hesitation.
#anxiety
#WritingPoetry
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8 Comments
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Unremarkable
Living under a cloak of shadows
Diminishable
In every aspect of life
Illuminated
By the spotlight of infidels and cheats
Invisible
lines between nothingness
and everything will trip my faith every time
Believing
becomes more difficult after every slip yet I return time and again because what else is there
Passing
through I can only take as much as was given but I’m choking and gasping for breath
As in, a life of peace, no more worries, not another moment wasted
Living under a cloak of shadows
Diminishable
In every aspect of life
Illuminated
By the spotlight of infidels and cheats
Invisible
lines between nothingness
and everything will trip my faith every time
Believing
becomes more difficult after every slip yet I return time and again because what else is there
Passing
through I can only take as much as was given but I’m choking and gasping for breath
As in, a life of peace, no more worries, not another moment wasted
#betrayal
#SelfDiscovery
264 reads
22 Comments
Your voice Echoes
Sometimes in the quiet
I swear I hear your voice
Whispering in the wind
Last time I wrote to you
was in anger and pain
But you washed it away
in form of the rain
I can feel you all around
Profound feeling sustained
Missing you like crazy
Brother in my heart you remain
I still find it hard
Not to carry some of the blame
Still choking when I try
to put into words and explain
Your voice Echoes
Through this window of change
Life without you
Continues to be...
I swear I hear your voice
Whispering in the wind
Last time I wrote to you
was in anger and pain
But you washed it away
in form of the rain
I can feel you all around
Profound feeling sustained
Missing you like crazy
Brother in my heart you remain
I still find it hard
Not to carry some of the blame
Still choking when I try
to put into words and explain
Your voice Echoes
Through this window of change
Life without you
Continues to be...
#sadness
#brother
#peace
#memories
#hurt
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6 Comments
Half A Dozen Little Thoughts
The mockery of a shadow
betrays our years
a personal sundial
whiling away our time
a ticking clock
a constant
reminder
_____________________________________________
your love reminds me of
a panel saw
smooth slide in
two counter rotating blades
honed sharp
the first pulls me in
the second
cuts me apart
______________________________________________
spider webs hang between
tin waves ...
betrays our years
a personal sundial
whiling away our time
a ticking clock
a constant
reminder
_____________________________________________
your love reminds me of
a panel saw
smooth slide in
two counter rotating blades
honed sharp
the first pulls me in
the second
cuts me apart
______________________________________________
spider webs hang between
tin waves ...
#minimalist
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6 Comments
Box Head Series - New and Noteworthy
I’m weird
You’re weird
We are all weird
Words can’t describe
Need to have a visual
Box Heads forever
You’re weird
We are all weird
Words can’t describe
Need to have a visual
Box Heads forever
#funny
#TruthOfLife
#art
#philosophical
#sexy
80 reads
16 Comments
finite ll
where do I go?
i've come to the end
verses that once bridged the void
no longer take me to the flowery fields
& sunlit forests of meditation
my words now a winding stairway deep inside
where poetry is an opera of screams
that echos off the steel wall of my mental trap
I seek visions to free me
& one by one they die within
stillborn thoughts
I wonder do these ideas get reincarnated
in the minds of others
I push myself to press on ...
i've come to the end
verses that once bridged the void
no longer take me to the flowery fields
& sunlit forests of meditation
my words now a winding stairway deep inside
where poetry is an opera of screams
that echos off the steel wall of my mental trap
I seek visions to free me
& one by one they die within
stillborn thoughts
I wonder do these ideas get reincarnated
in the minds of others
I push myself to press on ...
721 reads
32 Comments
The Lazy Poem
Poem Prompt By Bruno Mars
The Lazy Song
No excuses for the tone… too lazy to attempt to care
Just another stupid lazy poem
No thoughts to keep anyone warm
Today I don’t want to rhyme, I did not even want to write
I wanted to see how far I could push my mind to make no sense
Tired of being right
Polite
Courteous
I want to be just downright selfish, have the blissful feelings to see what it would feel like to be callous for just one day
Tell the world go and fuck itself
Sorry
See, when I speak, I just...
The Lazy Song
No excuses for the tone… too lazy to attempt to care
Just another stupid lazy poem
No thoughts to keep anyone warm
Today I don’t want to rhyme, I did not even want to write
I wanted to see how far I could push my mind to make no sense
Tired of being right
Polite
Courteous
I want to be just downright selfish, have the blissful feelings to see what it would feel like to be callous for just one day
Tell the world go and fuck itself
Sorry
See, when I speak, I just...
#satirical
#memories
545 reads
10 Comments
No Going Backs
Orion seems to have
Shifted
From the platform
Of yesteryear
Like shifts
In
Fear here
Or
There
Where there was
Snow
And there was know
Of frozen feelings of chosen dealings
With
Edge of the Earth
Pacts
Of no going
Backs
Shifted
From the platform
Of yesteryear
Like shifts
In
Fear here
Or
There
Where there was
Snow
And there was know
Of frozen feelings of chosen dealings
With
Edge of the Earth
Pacts
Of no going
Backs
#shadows
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1 Comment
A Caress in Darkness
Not something you hear
Or see as an omen
More of a feeling
Being pulled in directions
Instincts in the dark
Guiding you around
Cracked sidewalks
Avoiding dead ends
Whispers that breathe
As a warning breeze
Of comfort through
The winding tunnel
Unafraid of the night
Knowing I’ll be alright
And Angeless
A Caress in Darkness
Or see as an omen
More of a feeling
Being pulled in directions
Instincts in the dark
Guiding you around
Cracked sidewalks
Avoiding dead ends
Whispers that breathe
As a warning breeze
Of comfort through
The winding tunnel
Unafraid of the night
Knowing I’ll be alright
And Angeless
A Caress in Darkness
#dark
#night
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12 Comments
Tartarus
Fitting that this is the underground
#minimalist
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Dracula Celebrity Blood
Dracula wants to attack
Taylor Swift but he
couldn't because she
had Bad Blood that
he couldn't fanthom
So he went after
Katy Perry's blood
which tasted like
Cherry Kool-aid
Then he went after
Ariana Grande's Blood
which tasted like
Blake Shelton's
Whiskey drink then
he went after
Kelly Clarkson's Blood
which tasted like
John Legend
Taylor Swift but he
couldn't because she
had Bad Blood that
he couldn't fanthom
So he went after
Katy Perry's blood
which tasted like
Cherry Kool-aid
Then he went after
Ariana Grande's Blood
which tasted like
Blake Shelton's
Whiskey drink then
he went after
Kelly Clarkson's Blood
which tasted like
John Legend
#Halloween
#music
#funny
#vampires
#sexy
198 reads
2 Comments
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