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Hamid
Hamid
Poem Published
Today 1:40pm
Today 1:40pm
Le Plus Bas Degrés De l'insolence, De La Stupidite
'To those who think they are intelligent, and blah blah blah'' this is the truth.
C'est très honteux, même très stupide de se monter fiere de soi-même; se monter hautaine envers d'autres gens, pour rien montrer, ni produire, si ce n'est que arrogance et insolence..
Ces gens que vous meprisez avec tant de haine, tant de racisme, tant de folie de grandeur, vous souffrez de mégalomanie,' '' faites une visite chez un psy, et réglez vos hormones, chez un genyco...........il me semble que vous souffrez d'une maladie très rare''..
Ces gens que vous croyez moins...
C'est très honteux, même très stupide de se monter fiere de soi-même; se monter hautaine envers d'autres gens, pour rien montrer, ni produire, si ce n'est que arrogance et insolence..
Ces gens que vous meprisez avec tant de haine, tant de racisme, tant de folie de grandeur, vous souffrez de mégalomanie,' '' faites une visite chez un psy, et réglez vos hormones, chez un genyco...........il me semble que vous souffrez d'une maladie très rare''..
Ces gens que vous croyez moins...
#karma
#morality
#philosophical
#religion
#spiritual
13 reads
0 Comments
Hashman
Poem Published
Today 3:16am
Today 3:16am
come together
if you need
a hand
to hold...
a walk
in the woods,
or just sit
at the edge
of the waves..
be silent
breathe deep
and know
a hand
to hold...
a walk
in the woods,
or just sit
at the edge
of the waves..
be silent
breathe deep
and know
#love
#strength
27 reads
1 Comment
dartford
Paul S...
Paul S...
Poem Published
Today 1:58am
Today 1:58am
the noise on the street is never ending
got into a cab and the driver had classic fm on his
radio, and it was such a relief to get away from the buskers
on the street singing bloody awful versions of pop songs,
I just sat back and listened to the lark ascending
radio, and it was such a relief to get away from the buskers
on the street singing bloody awful versions of pop songs,
I just sat back and listened to the lark ascending
#aging
20 reads
0 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
Yesterday 1:43pm
Yesterday 1:43pm
Downward Spiral
A problem you are
Don't taint me with your issues
You bring others down
Don't taint me with your issues
You bring others down
#depression
#FeelingTrapped
#senryu
30 reads
2 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
Yesterday 1:31pm
Yesterday 1:31pm
Dead
When you are alive,
dying is nothing
When you're dead, life is nothing.
dying is nothing
When you're dead, life is nothing.
#dark
#death
#senryu
18 reads
4 Comments
scatteredsilence
Poem Published
Yesterday 10:32am
Yesterday 10:32am
After yes
I will
Fly until
There’s clarity
Despite the calamity
A storm below
Don’t you know
The skies promise peace. .
Hope when the wars cease
We can then embrace
Melt into one another’s face
Find a beautiful place
Cross your fingers just in case
I won’t lie
We’re bound by a soul tie
United by the sharing of skin
Blood brothers within
…. And so to conclusion
Is this but an illusion?
Or a path from confusion
A way out of delusion
Please sit still
Loves’ not...
Fly until
There’s clarity
Despite the calamity
A storm below
Don’t you know
The skies promise peace. .
Hope when the wars cease
We can then embrace
Melt into one another’s face
Find a beautiful place
Cross your fingers just in case
I won’t lie
We’re bound by a soul tie
United by the sharing of skin
Blood brothers within
…. And so to conclusion
Is this but an illusion?
Or a path from confusion
A way out of delusion
Please sit still
Loves’ not...
#courage
#love
#strength #TimeHeals
#strength #TimeHeals
23 reads
2 Comments
dartford
Paul S...
Paul S...
Poem Published
Yesterday 1:34am
Yesterday 1:34am
self reproached
if you laid eggs you wouldn’t
eat omelettes, or have your
brains fried, or scrambled, or poached,
but you don’t, so you do
eat omelettes, or have your
brains fried, or scrambled, or poached,
but you don’t, so you do
#food
32 reads
1 Comment
dartford
Paul S...
Paul S...
Poem Published
Yesterday 1:00am
Yesterday 1:00am
anxiety in the city
and as I walk down
the street
they
ignore me, I say,
the only thing we have in common,
apart from
our common humanity,
of course,
is that
we’re strangers,
and all that entails,
the inherent
dangers ..
the street
they
ignore me, I say,
the only thing we have in common,
apart from
our common humanity,
of course,
is that
we’re strangers,
and all that entails,
the inherent
dangers ..
#heaven
#hell
#utopia
33 reads
3 Comments
Sapphirewolf
Poem Published
10th Sep 2024 10:06pm
10th Sep 2024 10:06pm
Wings On Fish And Fins On Birds
What if birds are fish of the air....
And fish are birds of the sea....
And fish are birds of the sea....
#mythology
28 reads
0 Comments
InDreamz
Poem Published
10th Sep 2024 1:20pm
10th Sep 2024 1:20pm
The prodigal sock
One fine day,
a sock decided to run away
I found its twin
lying nonchalantly in the wardrobe
He didn't care
where his bro
had fled
I searched and
searched
and searched
But in vain...
I was getting late for school
frustratingly I cursed the twain
"Fuck the pair!",
I said in...
a sock decided to run away
I found its twin
lying nonchalantly in the wardrobe
He didn't care
where his bro
had fled
I searched and
searched
and searched
But in vain...
I was getting late for school
frustratingly I cursed the twain
"Fuck the pair!",
I said in...
#LifeStruggles
56 reads
11 Comments
Pete_25
Poem Published
10th Sep 2024 7:31am
10th Sep 2024 7:31am
Wired
All wired up
God's great design
I'll take what's yours
What's yours is mine
It makes no sense
To I and me
I've got no past
No history
I tort all vows
But in defence
My words hang high
In suspense
God's great design
I'll take what's yours
What's yours is mine
It makes no sense
To I and me
I've got no past
No history
I tort all vows
But in defence
My words hang high
In suspense
#fiction
44 reads
4 Comments
DamianDeadLove
Poem Published
10th Sep 2024 6:47am
10th Sep 2024 6:47am
Sundown
A stranger walks in the palest moonlight
Hell hounds following close behind him
Custom suit made from rattlesnake hide
Shadows bending within his every whim
All living creatures were returned to dust
Once this spirit visited their sleepy town
Rumor has it the community was cursed
Destined to be vanquished after sundown
Hell hounds following close behind him
Custom suit made from rattlesnake hide
Shadows bending within his every whim
All living creatures were returned to dust
Once this spirit visited their sleepy town
Rumor has it the community was cursed
Destined to be vanquished after sundown
#dark
53 reads
10 Comments
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