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dartford
Paul S...
Paul S...
Poem Published
Today 00:34am
Today 00:34am
the awful current
books I’ve read in the past
and would like to read anew
are many is the time I’ve thought
so why don’t you, she asked?
oh, the latest review ..
and would like to read anew
are many is the time I’ve thought
so why don’t you, she asked?
oh, the latest review ..
#books
3 reads
0 Comments
PoetSpeak
Poem Published
Yesterday 10:10pm
Yesterday 10:10pm
Killer Last Line ... Redux 2017
You Can't Have my Thoughts Anymore
They were free
Not anymore
I gave everything
Carte Blanche
Holed up and pissed off
It's almost ironic
Ask me a specific question
I might answer
You run the risk though
I'm prone to form letters
PoetSpeakWritten by PoetSpeak
Published 17th Sep 2017 | Edited 19th Sep 2017
They were free
Not anymore
I gave everything
Carte Blanche
Holed up and pissed off
It's almost ironic
Ask me a specific question
I might answer
You run the risk though
I'm prone to form letters
PoetSpeakWritten by PoetSpeak
Published 17th Sep 2017 | Edited 19th Sep 2017
#confessional
#dialogue
#myself #pagan
#myself #pagan
41 reads
5 Comments
poeticdelight
Poem Published
Yesterday 4:49pm
Yesterday 4:49pm
Transparent Ink
The inflated empty balloons
They come onto the stage
Under the limelight craze
They know deeply that rage
Is merely a delible glaze
Once the real sun will blaze
And the sheen leaves no trace
Of a misty fame that daze
Hollow space will take its place
The core that has been hid
Behind a blinding glossy shield
Will melt down like the wax
And let show the real facts
Some mystery is only game
Some history grant no fame
When fake drives the sick
Whose sanity is on...
They come onto the stage
Under the limelight craze
They know deeply that rage
Is merely a delible glaze
Once the real sun will blaze
And the sheen leaves no trace
Of a misty fame that daze
Hollow space will take its place
The core that has been hid
Behind a blinding glossy shield
Will melt down like the wax
And let show the real facts
Some mystery is only game
Some history grant no fame
When fake drives the sick
Whose sanity is on...
#books
#LifeAsAWriter
#PowerOfWords
23 reads
2 Comments
PittinixDesigns
Poem Published
Yesterday 3:24pm
Yesterday 3:24pm
My Last Post on All Poetry
Hi, to all my supportive readers, I just came back to tell you goodbye.
Mischievous LGBTQ people have been fighting against my work since I joined this website.
The administrator of All Poetry is a partial, unjust and unwise man.
He has easily played right into the hands of the wicked LGBTQ individuals.
This is exactly what they want, but their malicious actions will not dissuade me.
I thought the administrator of this website had integrity, but I was wrong.
Is he a member of the LGBTQ community or did they corrupt him with money?
I would like to ask...
Mischievous LGBTQ people have been fighting against my work since I joined this website.
The administrator of All Poetry is a partial, unjust and unwise man.
He has easily played right into the hands of the wicked LGBTQ individuals.
This is exactly what they want, but their malicious actions will not dissuade me.
I thought the administrator of this website had integrity, but I was wrong.
Is he a member of the LGBTQ community or did they corrupt him with money?
I would like to ask...
#corruption
#LGBT
#money
#WritingPoetry
#morality
41 reads
0 Comments
Oslynray
Rosalyn
Rosalyn
Poem Published
Yesterday 10:22am
Yesterday 10:22am
The Chase (Part Two)
The Chase Part Two
Finally got the pussy.
Fuck.
This shit grip.
… wet as shit,
So good.
Had me moaning like a bitch.
She made me wait a lil bit,
And I was getting a lil impatient,
But she was with all the freaky shit,
So yeah, this was worth it.
But now she’s in her feelings,
Tryna “what are we”
After I hit it…
I didn’t know what to tell her so
I told her to just chill…
Then I gave her some more dick.
Once she was falling asleep,
I told her I had to dip.
Told her I’d be back later, ...
Finally got the pussy.
Fuck.
This shit grip.
… wet as shit,
So good.
Had me moaning like a bitch.
She made me wait a lil bit,
And I was getting a lil impatient,
But she was with all the freaky shit,
So yeah, this was worth it.
But now she’s in her feelings,
Tryna “what are we”
After I hit it…
I didn’t know what to tell her so
I told her to just chill…
Then I gave her some more dick.
Once she was falling asleep,
I told her I had to dip.
Told her I’d be back later, ...
#sex
#confusion
#bittersweet
30 reads
0 Comments
Cipher_O
Poem Published
Yesterday 9:09am
Yesterday 9:09am
The Birds
An undulation,
stratospheric
across
the spheres.
A liturgy of energy
Manifested
seemingly-spontaneous
In the modus
Of
Genius.
The genius of all things
Heard
In
The morning
Song
Of birds which sing
stratospheric
across
the spheres.
A liturgy of energy
Manifested
seemingly-spontaneous
In the modus
Of
Genius.
The genius of all things
Heard
In
The morning
Song
Of birds which sing
#shadows
27 reads
2 Comments
Cipher_O
Poem Published
Yesterday 9:08am
Yesterday 9:08am
Epistle #4
Honoria
So dig…
I have been willing my self
into
a transformatory
observatory
An observatory of transformation
I am:
A BDSM poet/god
&
Have an image
to
Uphold
So dig…
I have been willing my self
into
a transformatory
observatory
An observatory of transformation
I am:
A BDSM poet/god
&
Have an image
to
Uphold
#shadows
17 reads
0 Comments
LongTubiFree
Poem Published
5th Dec 2023 3:00am
5th Dec 2023 3:00am
Broken wings
For you it's been a long and dark road
trying to find yourself while carrying the load.
You've endure pain others cannot understand
yet you're always quick to lend a hand.
The gift that is your presence
far exceeds any world presents,
you've done more in a short time for my heart
than I ever have from the very start.
You don't see you like I do,
very sad fact that's also unfortunately true,
but I'll tell you what I see
an angel with broken wings right before me.
A masterpiece to be admired and treasured,
infinitely more than...
trying to find yourself while carrying the load.
You've endure pain others cannot understand
yet you're always quick to lend a hand.
The gift that is your presence
far exceeds any world presents,
you've done more in a short time for my heart
than I ever have from the very start.
You don't see you like I do,
very sad fact that's also unfortunately true,
but I'll tell you what I see
an angel with broken wings right before me.
A masterpiece to be admired and treasured,
infinitely more than...
#love
#friendship
57 reads
1 Comment
dartford
Paul S...
Paul S...
Poem Published
5th Dec 2023 1:26am
5th Dec 2023 1:26am
a time to think
how do you explain the beginning
of the universe and everything without god knows, says the bloke down the pub, sitting alone with his drink
of the universe and everything without god knows, says the bloke down the pub, sitting alone with his drink
#religion
#alcohol
31 reads
2 Comments
monovox128
Poem Published
4th Dec 2023 3:02pm
4th Dec 2023 3:02pm
HER (Mary)
Hi Everyone!
Hope this finds you all well and staying blessed, strong and encouraged!
I am writing to inquire whether or not anyone has heard from 'HER' (Mary) as of late!? I have written her a few emails that haven't been replied to..that's very unusual behavior for her.
Take care and thanks for reading! 🥰🫂💯❤
Ps. Just received this email....
Hi Philis.
I’m extremely fatigued but doing well actually. Biopsy scare turned out to be okay, now my foot surgery is scheduled for February. I’m pretty much home bound now, so...
Hope this finds you all well and staying blessed, strong and encouraged!
I am writing to inquire whether or not anyone has heard from 'HER' (Mary) as of late!? I have written her a few emails that haven't been replied to..that's very unusual behavior for her.
Take care and thanks for reading! 🥰🫂💯❤
Ps. Just received this email....
Hi Philis.
I’m extremely fatigued but doing well actually. Biopsy scare turned out to be okay, now my foot surgery is scheduled for February. I’m pretty much home bound now, so...
#love
#hope
#respect #bittersweet
#respect #bittersweet
60 reads
2 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
4th Dec 2023 2:10pm
4th Dec 2023 2:10pm
No Daughter Of Mine Should Be In A Beauty Pageant
Keshia smiled and
thought "Soon, the
crown will be mine"
only to have her
see Dad among
the other judges.
thought "Soon, the
crown will be mine"
only to have her
see Dad among
the other judges.
#father
#beauty
#fiction
#FreeVerse
#dialogue
20 reads
0 Comments
Cipher_O
Poem Published
4th Dec 2023 6:08am
4th Dec 2023 6:08am
A Dew of You
In the name of: You.
I just
Want to make
Every
Pair of panties:
Moist.
Create a pull
Across
The void
By
The hull
Into a realm
Of pleasure
Unparalleled
With
I
At the helm
I just
Want to make
Every
Pair of panties:
Moist.
Create a pull
Across
The void
By
The hull
Into a realm
Of pleasure
Unparalleled
With
I
At the helm
#shadows
38 reads
0 Comments
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