Miscellaneous Poems Seeking Honest Critique
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Random, diverse and unusual poetry
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a little perspective, dear, she says
religion causes more rows and
arguments and wars than an
elderly couple over breakfast about
how best to cook their eggs
arguments and wars than an
elderly couple over breakfast about
how best to cook their eggs
#religion
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1 Comment
Art
Hatred & Sorrow
Channel an outlet for it
Creativity
Channel an outlet for it
Creativity
#art
#hate
#sadness #senryu
#sadness #senryu
35 reads
6 Comments
What will you dream tonight
From dusk to dawn to day and night quietly, as you sleep what will you dream tonight, hush little baby don't you cry it sounds like a a lullaby you sing to a child. YET we are apart of God's Children's no matter the creed or race or color. YET still as I look outside of the world 🌍 sometimes I wonder how will there future really be. For example will they have the strength, in the case of the world. THAT they will have to learn to navigate the real rough times and the bad times. But will they have the perseverance to survive in a hardcore world, or will they just have to find...
#dialogue
#emotional
#epic
#philosophical
#StreamOfConsciousness
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vista
tar-niched computation,
a sigil lost in breeze
perpendicular to axes
and futile clarity;
the intra-net is full of daemons
we chant we chant we chase
an inorganic time-kept secret:
a shadow with no face
under green glow within the watch of tiny tiny eyes
the cables snake and process: tenderized
a mother-bored 2deaf shall initialize
a startup scream still bright and new
internal disks store what to do
instruction set x86
intact bliss-fool ignorance
a sigil lost in breeze
perpendicular to axes
and futile clarity;
the intra-net is full of daemons
we chant we chant we chase
an inorganic time-kept secret:
a shadow with no face
under green glow within the watch of tiny tiny eyes
the cables snake and process: tenderized
a mother-bored 2deaf shall initialize
a startup scream still bright and new
internal disks store what to do
instruction set x86
intact bliss-fool ignorance
#risk
#technology
38 reads
3 Comments
Coulrophobia
Dress up as a clown
Clowns create hysteria
Bring fear to your friends
Clowns create hysteria
Bring fear to your friends
#anxiety
#fear
#satirical
#senryu
#ThrillSeeking
32 reads
8 Comments
Hibiscus
flowers so full
your blooms are happiness
the color I picked
makes me so happy
fuchsia is my favorite color
I will dream of your petals
once the have fallen to the ground
your blooms are happiness
the color I picked
makes me so happy
fuchsia is my favorite color
I will dream of your petals
once the have fallen to the ground
#nature
60 reads
5 Comments
LISTENING
Listening to you,letter
fighting against caged up skeletons of blue,
always feeling n combating
d
procrastination feeling,
against it all ,
feeling d feeling,
Listening !
when I feel d feeling
muses begging me to resume exploding,
letters out till it hits many a ceiling
via highest highs
Calling
Ears not blocking
positive inclination's
That are always Roaring,
against it all,
feeling d feeling,
Listening!
fighting against caged up skeletons of blue,
always feeling n combating
d
procrastination feeling,
against it all ,
feeling d feeling,
Listening !
when I feel d feeling
muses begging me to resume exploding,
letters out till it hits many a ceiling
via highest highs
Calling
Ears not blocking
positive inclination's
That are always Roaring,
against it all,
feeling d feeling,
Listening!
#dawn
#night
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0 Comments
I’ve never read the bible
but those who profess to be christian can be
divided between those who lean towards
the new testament and those who prefer the
old testament don't appear to be christian at all
divided between those who lean towards
the new testament and those who prefer the
old testament don't appear to be christian at all
#religion
34 reads
2 Comments
a ne’er do well nobody read
an eighteenth century poet
no one has ever heard of,
I haven’t myself, all I know is that
by now he’s long dead
rumours he was a friend
of boswell, as well as johnson
never mentioned him, since boswell
didn’t note that he did.
no one has ever heard of,
I haven’t myself, all I know is that
by now he’s long dead
rumours he was a friend
of boswell, as well as johnson
never mentioned him, since boswell
didn’t note that he did.
#LifeAsAWriter
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Swept-Wind
Somehow-someway
T/will
Always
be
Enough
Where reflections
are
Reflected upon
Swept away
with
the wind-swept
seeds
of
The day
***
PA/TH
WA/ES
***
T/will
Always
be
Enough
Where reflections
are
Reflected upon
Swept away
with
the wind-swept
seeds
of
The day
***
PA/TH
WA/ES
***
#shadows
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Will of Way
The way
of
The say
Endowed-clouds
Aloft
over
The day
having
a
Way: Where
way
meets
way
Each instilled with will
Will
of
Way
***
PA/TH
WA/ES
***
of
The say
Endowed-clouds
Aloft
over
The day
having
a
Way: Where
way
meets
way
Each instilled with will
Will
of
Way
***
PA/TH
WA/ES
***
#shadows
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0 Comments
The Frown Spinner
When I feel sad and blue
I turn my thought and think of you
When my lips just want to frown
You're who turns it upside-down
I turn my thought and think of you
When my lips just want to frown
You're who turns it upside-down
#BestFriend
#friendship
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1 Comment
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