Miscellaneous Poems by Top Critiquers
POEMS AND SHORT STORIES
Random, diverse and unusual poetry
Poems written by Top Critiquers
Salt of Life
still remember
the day i arrived
silenced bird with
disfigured wings
insecure about
everything but
willing to evolve
you came my way
spoke of sound
enjambment
onomatopoeia
rhythm and flow
showed me how
to cut & prune
paved the way
to better writes
but the thing that
inspires me most is
your...
the day i arrived
silenced bird with
disfigured wings
insecure about
everything but
willing to evolve
you came my way
spoke of sound
enjambment
onomatopoeia
rhythm and flow
showed me how
to cut & prune
paved the way
to better writes
but the thing that
inspires me most is
your...
#gratitude
#friendship
1106 reads
43 Comments
One Liner...No7
Love is the first thing to enter a new born and the last thing to leave the dying.
#LifeCycle
25 reads
2 Comments
THE OUTSIDE IS SECONDARY
#sex
#erotic
#sensual
#orgasm
#seductive
174 reads
2 Comments
Der Kaiser
They say legends never die
Their stories becoming something of a myth
But for those from another generation
They bore witness to the greats
Somewhere up there a dream team is playing together
Cruyff, Maradona, Pele, Charlton
And now Franz joins them
Rest in Peace Der Kaiser
Their stories becoming something of a myth
But for those from another generation
They bore witness to the greats
Somewhere up there a dream team is playing together
Cruyff, Maradona, Pele, Charlton
And now Franz joins them
Rest in Peace Der Kaiser
#death
#sports
183 reads
2 Comments
The Moment
The glossy ferocious spill of the water,
was a brilliant bubbling potion.
With an ever so random tumbling motion.
The fall's graceful blessing showers.
The river contains voracious power.
To hold your hours, hold each moment.
Before time just devours.
Don't die before you are dead.
Bleached snow juxtaposed
besides roses blood red.
Flowers are left by the hearts of lead.
Whose soul sometimes fled this world.
Live in the moment the sun opens
her soft yet feral eyes.
Leave the past for demise.
As the future aches to...
was a brilliant bubbling potion.
With an ever so random tumbling motion.
The fall's graceful blessing showers.
The river contains voracious power.
To hold your hours, hold each moment.
Before time just devours.
Don't die before you are dead.
Bleached snow juxtaposed
besides roses blood red.
Flowers are left by the hearts of lead.
Whose soul sometimes fled this world.
Live in the moment the sun opens
her soft yet feral eyes.
Leave the past for demise.
As the future aches to...
#SelfDiscovery
79 reads
15 Comments
under ice (secrets)
the cloud's
breath
creeping
again on
the high
peaks,
softly
murmuring
pale days,
from
high up
glances,
quiet
and sad
ageless
stone,
they hold
their secrets
under ice.
breath
creeping
again on
the high
peaks,
softly
murmuring
pale days,
from
high up
glances,
quiet
and sad
ageless
stone,
they hold
their secrets
under ice.
#clouds
#mountains
#sky #snow
#sky #snow
37 reads
4 Comments
Moon Glow
To wear the moon like a crown
How I’d glow as no other
From bland to brilliant
with one beam
A shining beauty for once
Silences me, the seeker
Of all things that glisten
I’m still me
Hoping but not hopeful
Dreams and wishes heaped
upon a romantic moon,
a fool’s folly
How I’d glow as no other
From bland to brilliant
with one beam
A shining beauty for once
Silences me, the seeker
Of all things that glisten
I’m still me
Hoping but not hopeful
Dreams and wishes heaped
upon a romantic moon,
a fool’s folly
#dreams
#sadness
612 reads
63 Comments
~The Existential Dragade
1.
::beyond habitat, are their forever presence::
protesting protean, the free~ roaches
in bricks of chitinous- walled amber spirits
& treading over the long enough- the
stained & sinful savagery footpaths..
emerge..
from the brittly bursting
oothecal undergrounds.. to
a being daredevil- a radically
right-winged repellent entity..
on those
slantish fallen faint flicker shady
nightlights
scattering streetsmart .....
::beyond habitat, are their forever presence::
protesting protean, the free~ roaches
in bricks of chitinous- walled amber spirits
& treading over the long enough- the
stained & sinful savagery footpaths..
emerge..
from the brittly bursting
oothecal undergrounds.. to
a being daredevil- a radically
right-winged repellent entity..
on those
slantish fallen faint flicker shady
nightlights
scattering streetsmart .....
#love
#evolution
#surreal
#metaphor
#identity
797 reads
2 Comments
Fallen empires
Ambient breeze.
Caressing dead eroded figures.
Gently hewn impressions jest knowingly.
Laughing madly now only pitied.
Quieted remaining stagnant.
Tired useless vessels.
Weathered xylography.
Yesterday's zeitgeist.
Caressing dead eroded figures.
Gently hewn impressions jest knowingly.
Laughing madly now only pitied.
Quieted remaining stagnant.
Tired useless vessels.
Weathered xylography.
Yesterday's zeitgeist.
#death
41 reads
0 Comments
Snake!!!
Just a picture of the snake I caught at work. It's a black racer. Totally harmless to people, yet eat rodents and other (some harmful!) Snakes .
Yes, I let it go after a few minutes. It kinda blended well with my arm tatts. Lol.
No, I'm obviously not scared of any snakes. I was raised around them. My stepmother was the snake lady in the circus back in the day. I've held cobras even. What!
Yes, I let it go after a few minutes. It kinda blended well with my arm tatts. Lol.
No, I'm obviously not scared of any snakes. I was raised around them. My stepmother was the snake lady in the circus back in the day. I've held cobras even. What!
#nature
195 reads
25 Comments
8 people, 1 cup ( multiple collab see authors note)
After not hearing from Miranda Wright for several days, her family reported the petite 28 year old woman missing. Thirteen days after filing the missing persons report, Miranda's father and brother went to her house on Halloween and noticed there was a foul odor coming from the living room. The police had gone through everything in her house as well, but found no signs of struggle. Miranda's brother noticed that the odor seemed to increase when he went toward the couch. Something told him that he should lift up the cushion. As he lifted up the cushions, he stood there in shock, seeing a...
#collaboration
#fiction
#horror
#mystery
#ShortStory
98 reads
5 Comments
Unwitched
Ablaze bewitching conjurers dance.
Enchantment flames gather, hex ignite.
Enchantment flames gather, hex ignite.
#curse
#fire
#magic
#pagan
#witches
46 reads
6 Comments
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