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A "HALLMARK" CRUSH
Cyndi_Moone
Forum Posts: 188
Thought Provoker
3
Joined 13th Dec 2016Forum Posts: 188
Poetry Contest Description
Write a "Hallmark" Greeting Card Poem to your FIRST CRUSH Ever....
We all remember the joys of having a FIRST Crush: The stomach butterflies, the heart-pounding palpitations, the sweaty palms, dry-mouth, distorted speech....Whatever your symptoms and whatever your story, whatever age and whatever happened....Let's Turn Back Time!
In Commemoration of the Valentine's Day Card Giving/Exchanging Tradition, write your very own "Hallmark" Poem Card to your FIRST CRUSH EVER! Take a trip back down OLD Memory Lane, REAWAKEN the moment and BE INSPIRED to CREATE YOUR VERY OWN "HALLMARK" CARD to your SECRET (or NOT-SO-SECRET) CRUSH. Say you love'em, say you hate'em, say you've moved on...Just say something, in poem/card format!
IDEA SUGGESTIONS: Confess NOW how you felt, THEN! Did they impact your moving-on with life in any way? Do they pop-up in your mind occasionally even today? Have you moved on or would you long for a second chance if you could to RIGHT whatever WRONG? Your card, your thoughts!
COMP GUIDELINES:
* Maximum Entry: 1 entry per poet
* Maximum Limit: No limit but NOT dramatically lengthy. IT'S A CARD!
* POEM TITLE: Remember to TITLE your poem
FIRST CRUSH: WHAT COULD HAVE BEEN:
Lingering mysteries dangled over my head
In hues of colors, bright blues, yellows, and reds.
Painted portraits of what could have been clouded my mind
As the dancing silhouettes followed directly behind.
Both our faces flushed when our eyes would meet
Neither of us could utter a word when it was time to greet
Looking down and away, we both were shy
We’d scurry away before uttering our first “Hi!”
From a near and far distance, my mother saw the full picture
Of how our chemistry blended well as the perfect mixture.
She thought to herself, “If he should ask when she’s of age
I’ll have to oblige and let them date.”
Who would have guessed that, after waiting so long,
At the turn of age, you would have gone…
With another girl who slipped right between our open gap
To venture with you into a night recap.
You slipped away just as I almost reached you with my fingertips
And got caught under the other lucky girl’s loving grip.
Leaving me standing in the cold and in the rain
Holding my umbrella as my heart swelled in pain.
All those years I spent daydreaming of the day
You’d scoop me up and take me away
All the romance and fantasies that danced in my mind
Waiting for its birth met the shredding grind.
Strange romance we shared, you and I.
A romance that never existed, but in our minds.
How many times did we not travel across a different land
Leaving our bare prints along an island's beach sand?
How many times did we kiss passionately on the lip
Or walk hand-in-hand, feeling the lite touch of our fingertips?
Life changes; the world turns; life goes on
As we are carried away and drifted along.
But, regardless of the journey life has taken me through
From time to time, my thoughts would return running back to you…
Thinking of what we COULD HAVE BEEN….
If I could have had a fair-play to win...…
But now that I have found my “Happily Ever After”
I find no use anymore for our book or our chapter
For you’ve become a vapor of an unborn dream
Of what once came close but wasn’t destined to ever be…•
Ready? 3...2....1.....Go, let the thoughts flow!
In Commemoration of the Valentine's Day Card Giving/Exchanging Tradition, write your very own "Hallmark" Poem Card to your FIRST CRUSH EVER! Take a trip back down OLD Memory Lane, REAWAKEN the moment and BE INSPIRED to CREATE YOUR VERY OWN "HALLMARK" CARD to your SECRET (or NOT-SO-SECRET) CRUSH. Say you love'em, say you hate'em, say you've moved on...Just say something, in poem/card format!
IDEA SUGGESTIONS: Confess NOW how you felt, THEN! Did they impact your moving-on with life in any way? Do they pop-up in your mind occasionally even today? Have you moved on or would you long for a second chance if you could to RIGHT whatever WRONG? Your card, your thoughts!
COMP GUIDELINES:
* Maximum Entry: 1 entry per poet
* Maximum Limit: No limit but NOT dramatically lengthy. IT'S A CARD!
* POEM TITLE: Remember to TITLE your poem
FIRST CRUSH: WHAT COULD HAVE BEEN:
Lingering mysteries dangled over my head
In hues of colors, bright blues, yellows, and reds.
Painted portraits of what could have been clouded my mind
As the dancing silhouettes followed directly behind.
Both our faces flushed when our eyes would meet
Neither of us could utter a word when it was time to greet
Looking down and away, we both were shy
We’d scurry away before uttering our first “Hi!”
From a near and far distance, my mother saw the full picture
Of how our chemistry blended well as the perfect mixture.
She thought to herself, “If he should ask when she’s of age
I’ll have to oblige and let them date.”
Who would have guessed that, after waiting so long,
At the turn of age, you would have gone…
With another girl who slipped right between our open gap
To venture with you into a night recap.
You slipped away just as I almost reached you with my fingertips
And got caught under the other lucky girl’s loving grip.
Leaving me standing in the cold and in the rain
Holding my umbrella as my heart swelled in pain.
All those years I spent daydreaming of the day
You’d scoop me up and take me away
All the romance and fantasies that danced in my mind
Waiting for its birth met the shredding grind.
Strange romance we shared, you and I.
A romance that never existed, but in our minds.
How many times did we not travel across a different land
Leaving our bare prints along an island's beach sand?
How many times did we kiss passionately on the lip
Or walk hand-in-hand, feeling the lite touch of our fingertips?
Life changes; the world turns; life goes on
As we are carried away and drifted along.
But, regardless of the journey life has taken me through
From time to time, my thoughts would return running back to you…
Thinking of what we COULD HAVE BEEN….
If I could have had a fair-play to win...…
But now that I have found my “Happily Ever After”
I find no use anymore for our book or our chapter
For you’ve become a vapor of an unborn dream
Of what once came close but wasn’t destined to ever be…•
Ready? 3...2....1.....Go, let the thoughts flow!
eswaller
Forum Posts: 763
Dangerous Mind
31
Joined 22nd Dec 2015Forum Posts: 763
Unrequited Crush
Heart stopping and heart pounding affection.
Every time you turned my way, I had to stop
From fainting. As we got older, the connection
We once had faded because you would chop
My heart into pieces and pretended like you
Never knew who I was to you. You smiled at
Every pretty girl, but I never had the luxury to
Be on the receiving end of it. I was a doormat
And an outsider, but I am over it now because
A guy like you does not deserve my infatuation
Or to be my unrequited crush. It made me pause
Wondering why you would be my temptation
Because you are nothing more than a daydream
In a fantasy. Someone else gives me that gleam.
Every time you turned my way, I had to stop
From fainting. As we got older, the connection
We once had faded because you would chop
My heart into pieces and pretended like you
Never knew who I was to you. You smiled at
Every pretty girl, but I never had the luxury to
Be on the receiving end of it. I was a doormat
And an outsider, but I am over it now because
A guy like you does not deserve my infatuation
Or to be my unrequited crush. It made me pause
Wondering why you would be my temptation
Because you are nothing more than a daydream
In a fantasy. Someone else gives me that gleam.
Written by eswaller
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archetype23
Forum Posts: 3672
Tyrant of Words
7
Joined 5th Oct 2013Forum Posts: 3672
Never say goodbye
I'm watching the petals fly eternally
upon the fleeting breeze
echoing angels lost across the seas
Down upon my knees
Beckoning the reckoning in pleas
please erase these memories
which songs sing with subtle ease
to deliver delightful disease
I'm falling apart at the seams, and it seems
nothing is real, and I feel like I'm in a dream
If memory dies, I'm free
Reality lies, I see.....
Nothing is real nor will ever be.....
Not for me.....
I'm falling in love with memories, and she sees
nothing in me that she wants to see
let it be
let a letter fly free, let it die free
let her see, let it be
Let her see
Let it die,.....
But never let her say goodbye
upon the fleeting breeze
echoing angels lost across the seas
Down upon my knees
Beckoning the reckoning in pleas
please erase these memories
which songs sing with subtle ease
to deliver delightful disease
I'm falling apart at the seams, and it seems
nothing is real, and I feel like I'm in a dream
If memory dies, I'm free
Reality lies, I see.....
Nothing is real nor will ever be.....
Not for me.....
I'm falling in love with memories, and she sees
nothing in me that she wants to see
let it be
let a letter fly free, let it die free
let her see, let it be
Let her see
Let it die,.....
But never let her say goodbye
Written by archetype23
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Grace
IDryad
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IDryad
Tyrant of Words
126
Joined 25th Aug 2011Forum Posts: 17018
snugglebuck
Forum Posts: 1873
Dangerous Mind
77
Joined 3rd Feb 2014Forum Posts: 1873
A CRUSH CHALLENGE
I have a crush on you
You have a crush on me
Who ever of the two of us
Is the most courageous
We’ll very well soon see
For who ever tries to kiss first
Is by far the bravest
So, I dare ya!
Come on, I dare ya!
To try and kiss me!
You have a crush on me
Who ever of the two of us
Is the most courageous
We’ll very well soon see
For who ever tries to kiss first
Is by far the bravest
So, I dare ya!
Come on, I dare ya!
To try and kiss me!
Written by snugglebuck
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McEltic
Joined 13th Feb 2017
Forum Posts: 4
Lost Thinker
Forum Posts: 4
Empty Jack
~~~
A distant sail on evening's set
no color binding form
an empty flask where you once sat
and kept my shoulder warm
~
Transparent
stripped
reminders gone
no keepsakes marking time
no lost refrain or captive song
depletes infectious rhyme
~
Revoking nights of shameless play
beneath a comber wave
where fervent sky entombing dusk
rent heart to looming grave
~
Conception nests in solitude
o'er seabird casted song
born in mist of crashing swell
adieu ...
bereave prolongs
~
In time perhaps
in your respite
you'll stumble
breaking stride
beneath your step an empty flask
your memory
corked
inside
~
A distant sail on evening's set
no color binding form
an empty flask where you once sat
and kept my shoulder warm
~
Transparent
stripped
reminders gone
no keepsakes marking time
no lost refrain or captive song
depletes infectious rhyme
~
Revoking nights of shameless play
beneath a comber wave
where fervent sky entombing dusk
rent heart to looming grave
~
Conception nests in solitude
o'er seabird casted song
born in mist of crashing swell
adieu ...
bereave prolongs
~
In time perhaps
in your respite
you'll stumble
breaking stride
beneath your step an empty flask
your memory
corked
inside
~
Written by McEltic
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Jade-Pandora
jade tiger
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jade tiger
Tyrant of Words
154
Joined 9th Nov 2015 Forum Posts: 5134
wallyroo92
Forum Posts: 1871
Tyrant of Words
154
Joined 11th July 2012Forum Posts: 1871
Caught in a Glance
I remember dreaming dreams,
Of flying in the bluest skies,
My heart beating faster,
Just by the look from her eyes.
I remember feeling feelings,
And things I couldn’t understand,
But I just wanted to be near,
And maybe even hold her hand.
I remember wishing wishes,
Although I never had a chance,
But those emotions were innocent,
Even when she caught my glance.
Through the years I sometimes remembered,
A face, a name but I always kept hush,
A secret memory belonging to me,
The feeling I felt of my first crush.
I remember dreaming dreams,
Of flying in the bluest skies,
My heart beating faster,
Just by the look from her eyes.
I remember feeling feelings,
And things I couldn’t understand,
But I just wanted to be near,
And maybe even hold her hand.
I remember wishing wishes,
Although I never had a chance,
But those emotions were innocent,
Even when she caught my glance.
Through the years I sometimes remembered,
A face, a name but I always kept hush,
A secret memory belonging to me,
The feeling I felt of my first crush.
KrystalG
Forum Posts: 44
Thought Provoker
1
Joined 11th Oct 2015Forum Posts: 44
Dear Daniel,
Dear Daniel,
You should know....
I always thought of you....
How your deep dark eyes
They mistified
Your words to me
Were like honey
And when you kissed me
I felt the complete embarrassment
With the shyest blush upon my cheeks
You said it was ok
I felt so shocked you even gave me what I wanted
Deep down
There is no words that could have Explained
How happy you made me in the moment
Never knew
You felt the same way too
I feel like i messed up our first kiss though....
Maybe one day a redo?
The butterflies
So wild in my little girl tummy
Never imagining
Someone like me would ever get
What she wanted
It was hard keeping them at bay
But as time went by
And you disappeared...
I let the butterflies fly
A sweet memory in my thoughts
Was all I had
You gave me a memorable experience.....
And for that
I thank you
for one of the best memories I ever had
You should know....
I always thought of you....
How your deep dark eyes
They mistified
Your words to me
Were like honey
And when you kissed me
I felt the complete embarrassment
With the shyest blush upon my cheeks
You said it was ok
I felt so shocked you even gave me what I wanted
Deep down
There is no words that could have Explained
How happy you made me in the moment
Never knew
You felt the same way too
I feel like i messed up our first kiss though....
Maybe one day a redo?
The butterflies
So wild in my little girl tummy
Never imagining
Someone like me would ever get
What she wanted
It was hard keeping them at bay
But as time went by
And you disappeared...
I let the butterflies fly
A sweet memory in my thoughts
Was all I had
You gave me a memorable experience.....
And for that
I thank you
for one of the best memories I ever had
Written by KrystalG
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