Spiritual Poems by Top Critiquers
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Poetry which debates religion, atheism and New Age spirituality
Poems written by Top Critiquers
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
21st Jan 2025 7:34pm
21st Jan 2025 7:34pm
You're child is hideous!
How many out there do we see
In someone's presence that has VD
You got pregnant, had a child
Your baby looks cursed, should be exiled
Your parents were fucked up most of their youth
Their liberal or redneck ideas, born with no couth
Idiocy doesn't fall far from your tree
Your mongoloid child is quite ugly!
Ugly parents shouldn't have kids
Don't need formula or some wooden crib
No sex to create a child, it's only for pleasure
I'll take that statement to the grave, for always & forever
In someone's presence that has VD
You got pregnant, had a child
Your baby looks cursed, should be exiled
Your parents were fucked up most of their youth
Their liberal or redneck ideas, born with no couth
Idiocy doesn't fall far from your tree
Your mongoloid child is quite ugly!
Ugly parents shouldn't have kids
Don't need formula or some wooden crib
No sex to create a child, it's only for pleasure
I'll take that statement to the grave, for always & forever
#birth
#devil
#hate
#parent
#satirical
57 reads
6 Comments
DamianDeadLove
Poem Published
12th Jun 2024 6:32am
12th Jun 2024 6:32am
Carry Me Back Home
Memories fade like seasons
Slowly losing them all
Holding on for the right reasons
Waiting to receive the call
Spent way too many years
Chasing down every ghost
Struggling against my fears
Wondering who I’ll miss most
Life is difficult to survive
Crawling towards the light
When the show goes live
Under the cover of night
In the midst of great strife
The beast will fall like Rome
Dear lord who gave me life
Please carry me back home
Slowly losing them all
Holding on for the right reasons
Waiting to receive the call
Spent way too many years
Chasing down every ghost
Struggling against my fears
Wondering who I’ll miss most
Life is difficult to survive
Crawling towards the light
When the show goes live
Under the cover of night
In the midst of great strife
The beast will fall like Rome
Dear lord who gave me life
Please carry me back home
#faith
169 reads
9 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
6th Jan 2025 5:39am
6th Jan 2025 5:39am
experience
an inflection of doubt makes me hesitate
your connection unsecure I pull back
the dark speaks and genuflects
seemingly effortless
seeking affection from an intelligence unlike our own
feelings evolve and take form
we were made from dreams
visions of the future seen
in the mind's eye, of the one spoke things into being
your soul is part of a universal love
you were desired
alone in the vast he longed
for companions of substance
a great compassion, was given the shape of human
experiencing the world that came...
your connection unsecure I pull back
the dark speaks and genuflects
seemingly effortless
seeking affection from an intelligence unlike our own
feelings evolve and take form
we were made from dreams
visions of the future seen
in the mind's eye, of the one spoke things into being
your soul is part of a universal love
you were desired
alone in the vast he longed
for companions of substance
a great compassion, was given the shape of human
experiencing the world that came...
#love
#spiritual
77 reads
5 Comments
TheOralizer
Poem Published
21st Apr 2021 2:33pm
21st Apr 2021 2:33pm
WHY I WORSHIP YOU
To me worship includes
adoration, honor, reverence,
awe, valuing, above all else,
declaration of worth and
love beyond the highest meaning.
Why do I worship YOU?
It's not because of your beauty
because you are breathtaking.
It's not because of your intellect
and membership in Mensa.
Why do I worship YOU?
It's not because of your passion
that is off the scale.
It's not because of your sense
of humor which is amazing.
Why do I worship YOU?
It's not because of your wealth
which is in seven figures.
Why do I...
adoration, honor, reverence,
awe, valuing, above all else,
declaration of worth and
love beyond the highest meaning.
Why do I worship YOU?
It's not because of your beauty
because you are breathtaking.
It's not because of your intellect
and membership in Mensa.
Why do I worship YOU?
It's not because of your passion
that is off the scale.
It's not because of your sense
of humor which is amazing.
Why do I worship YOU?
It's not because of your wealth
which is in seven figures.
Why do I...
#happiness
#inspirational
#gratitude
#admiration
#emotions
597 reads
8 Comments
backdeckbenny
Poem Published
18th Jan 2025 6:54am
18th Jan 2025 6:54am
Ubuntu Two
I am because we are.
If you don't see me
I don't see you.
We both won't exist.
If you don't see me
I don't see you.
We both won't exist.
#TruthOfLife
45 reads
1 Comment
Anne-Ri999
Poem Published
20th Jan 2025 9:24am
20th Jan 2025 9:24am
Disir, power drumming journey
North, place of dark
of winter, in and between
shimmering dark
we greet you
East, place of rising sun
of spring, springing lambs
springing water wells
we greet you
South, place of Summer
of prospect and prosperities
wind, we greet you
West, place of risen sun
of sunset, autumn , fallen leaf
of transformation
we greet you
Sacred center
first of circles
Disir, foremothers, tree mothers, grandmothers
star mothers, fire mothers, wind mother, all mother
we greet...
of winter, in and between
shimmering dark
we greet you
East, place of rising sun
of spring, springing lambs
springing water wells
we greet you
South, place of Summer
of prospect and prosperities
wind, we greet you
West, place of risen sun
of sunset, autumn , fallen leaf
of transformation
we greet you
Sacred center
first of circles
Disir, foremothers, tree mothers, grandmothers
star mothers, fire mothers, wind mother, all mother
we greet...
#spiritual
84 reads
6 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
24th Jan 2025 2:47am
24th Jan 2025 2:47am
The awakening of the soul
What is your spiritual awakening of the truth of your own thoughts, and insight and spiritually subconsciousness of your, own soul vibes of your energy. For sure through this cycle of life there will be a moment in your life, that you will have to step back and reflect upon the trails and tribulations, you had to face in yourself in body and spiritual soul. For even now as you are going through a situation, that isn't for you nor is it made for you, as they say that no one is sent to you by chance or accident. But yet there is someone who was sent to you. For it's in you to be able to do that...
#faith
#philosophical
#rebirth
#spiritual
#TruthOfLife
38 reads
0 Comments
Numer90
Numer0-un0
Numer0-un0
Poem Published
4th Aug 2021 00:18am
4th Aug 2021 00:18am
God pardons
Yesterday feels like Disney..
Now it's the house of terror..
Grandpa. What's your advice?
Got compromised?!..
No. Yes, both oh! May be..
Confused?
Certainly.
So what do you say?..
Anything new yet found under the sun?
Not that I know of.
Good then..
Are you among the many of us who took life as REAL?
Seal this
...
Now it's the house of terror..
Grandpa. What's your advice?
Got compromised?!..
No. Yes, both oh! May be..
Confused?
Certainly.
So what do you say?..
Anything new yet found under the sun?
Not that I know of.
Good then..
Are you among the many of us who took life as REAL?
Seal this
...
#hope
#courage
#forgiveness
670 reads
3 Comments
PoetSpeak
Poem Published
28th Jul 2014 12:39pm
28th Jul 2014 12:39pm
Fastball - My Spiritual Awakening through Baseball
I can hit the fastball
But I really want to hit the slider
Same thing in writing verse
The erotic comes easy
but my own core emotions
always leave me wanting more
fom myself
So, no erotic poems this morning
Going back to the basics
My need to write
I hope you will let me in
Even though I have been hard on you
I'm not a bad guy
And I don't spit too much
When I'm at the plate
But I really want to hit the slider
Same thing in writing verse
The erotic comes easy
but my own core emotions
always leave me wanting more
fom myself
So, no erotic poems this morning
Going back to the basics
My need to write
I hope you will let me in
Even though I have been hard on you
I'm not a bad guy
And I don't spit too much
When I'm at the plate
978 reads
6 Comments
Ahavati
Tams
Tams
Poem Published
19th Jan 2025 2:49pm
19th Jan 2025 2:49pm
A Night in the Museum
I was attending a meeting
hosting a keynote speaker
whom I did not know
During the presentation
the internet connection was lost
and I found myself sitting
next to the speaker
discussing potential options
for a better connection
A fundraiser was suggested
while he politely asked
if I was a Sociologist
At that time, the host
a gangly old man, obviously
frustrated by our discourse
abruptly blurted out:
"We don't use oracle cards...
hosting a keynote speaker
whom I did not know
During the presentation
the internet connection was lost
and I found myself sitting
next to the speaker
discussing potential options
for a better connection
A fundraiser was suggested
while he politely asked
if I was a Sociologist
At that time, the host
a gangly old man, obviously
frustrated by our discourse
abruptly blurted out:
"We don't use oracle cards...
#dreams
#religion
#spiritual #universe
#spiritual #universe
142 reads
12 Comments
Solomon_Song
Poem Published
9th Nov 2024 7:14am
9th Nov 2024 7:14am
NATURISM MAKES A PRISM,
Naturism
makes a prism
through which to see
the nudity
of the body,
not as dirty
but quite worthy
in harmony
with creation.
Inspiration -
appreciate
God did create
first humans nudd,
saw "very good" *
in what He made
and thus displayed
in the garden
of his Eden.
* "So God created man in his own image, in the image of God he created him, male and female...God saw all that he had made, and it was very good.....The man and his wife were both naked, and they felt no...
makes a prism
through which to see
the nudity
of the body,
not as dirty
but quite worthy
in harmony
with creation.
Inspiration -
appreciate
God did create
first humans nudd,
saw "very good" *
in what He made
and thus displayed
in the garden
of his Eden.
* "So God created man in his own image, in the image of God he created him, male and female...God saw all that he had made, and it was very good.....The man and his wife were both naked, and they felt no...
#happiness
#inspirational
#nature #spiritual
#nature #spiritual
116 reads
3 Comments
AfterSexDilemma
Poem Published
2nd Oct 2024 2:11pm
2nd Oct 2024 2:11pm
Adjusting The Dial (collab with adagio)
The gossipers of the clouds
rain down dark's cacophony
Leaving me alone; covered in agony
neath the veil of twilight's shroud
Adjusting the dial to a new sound.
Listening to narcissistic gossipers pound
cued in amongst the symphony.
Agnostics and mannequins confound
as indecent as they are proud
Like a two-toed sloth of the epiphany
Inside the mockery of their frown
wound among the gossipers in infamy
A loneliness intensified by the clouds
buried in a salinity of dark infinity
A promise to search...
rain down dark's cacophony
Leaving me alone; covered in agony
neath the veil of twilight's shroud
Adjusting the dial to a new sound.
Listening to narcissistic gossipers pound
cued in amongst the symphony.
Agnostics and mannequins confound
as indecent as they are proud
Like a two-toed sloth of the epiphany
Inside the mockery of their frown
wound among the gossipers in infamy
A loneliness intensified by the clouds
buried in a salinity of dark infinity
A promise to search...
#freedom
#God
#spiritual
181 reads
7 Comments
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