Poems About the Sun Seeking Honest Critique
#sun
SweetKittyCat5
Poem Published
20th Jan 2024 5:04am
20th Jan 2024 5:04am
The Awe Of A Winter Wonderland
Unto the barren what dreams become bare by the absence of trees
Where fantasies are found in dreams as we atrial in the subconscious of our sleep
Snowcapped mountains as far as the eyes can see
Polar bears swimming in the depth of the frigid oceans just as easy as breeze
Their time of the season as human huddle under blankets for Winter’s cold hibernation
As the Artic fox roam in search of prey or be consumed by the nature victor’s starvation
Enjoy your presence upon the Earth and surround yourself with love
The blanket of the Winter season is...
Where fantasies are found in dreams as we atrial in the subconscious of our sleep
Snowcapped mountains as far as the eyes can see
Polar bears swimming in the depth of the frigid oceans just as easy as breeze
Their time of the season as human huddle under blankets for Winter’s cold hibernation
As the Artic fox roam in search of prey or be consumed by the nature victor’s starvation
Enjoy your presence upon the Earth and surround yourself with love
The blanket of the Winter season is...
#sun
#winter
#water #lover
#water #lover
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4 Comments
PAR
Poem Published
19th Jan 2024 12:42pm
19th Jan 2024 12:42pm
Boreal Flower
the flower screaming
in the creases of the night
the afternoon screaming
your sunsets
its dawns and the
long night
leans out the window
and watch the procession pass
the night is still in the churchyard
loaded with wounds
the night falls from the eyes
of insomniacs and falls asleep
in the bed of all rivers
the night peers
the unfathomability.
in the creases of the night
the afternoon screaming
your sunsets
its dawns and the
long night
leans out the window
and watch the procession pass
the night is still in the churchyard
loaded with wounds
the night falls from the eyes
of insomniacs and falls asleep
in the bed of all rivers
the night peers
the unfathomability.
#grief
#sun
#despair
#emotions
#dawn
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1 Comment
janiselizabeth
Janis Miller
Janis Miller
Poem Published
13th Jan 2024 12:28pm
13th Jan 2024 12:28pm
Impossible Things
Like dipping my feet into a golden sunset
Or drinking the moon from a silver straw
I like to do impossible things
Or drinking the moon from a silver straw
I like to do impossible things
#sun
#moon
#stars
185 reads
7 Comments
javalini
Poem Published
6th Jan 2024 1:37pm
6th Jan 2024 1:37pm
NEW PRAYER TO THE SUN
dream me rising
through this damp haze
to bask in your glory
oh, light of the world,
merciful sun of the gods,
giver of light and life
and maker of this
and all days
grey and bright
you, who rise from
the tomb of dark night
and ascend to reign
from the azure throne
of heaven,
nourish thy green kingdom
and all that lives
therein,
this we pray in earnest
amen
through this damp haze
to bask in your glory
oh, light of the world,
merciful sun of the gods,
giver of light and life
and maker of this
and all days
grey and bright
you, who rise from
the tomb of dark night
and ascend to reign
from the azure throne
of heaven,
nourish thy green kingdom
and all that lives
therein,
this we pray in earnest
amen
#sun
#prayer
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2 Comments
LunasChild8
Poem Published
4th Jan 2024 00:05am
4th Jan 2024 00:05am
He's the Sun
He’s the sun
Our source of warmth and light
Can’t you sense how important his presence is?
It’s worth giving up my life.
Just as he died for us
To take in all our earthly sins
If only we could see the big picture
And focus on bettering what’s within.
I’ve loved and lost
I’ve cursed and cried
One moment I’ve hit rock bottom
The next I’m flying on cloud nine.
He’s within each of us
For we’re all his sacred temple
Can’t you feel that blooming warmth?
A soothing caress forever gentle.
He’s the...
Our source of warmth and light
Can’t you sense how important his presence is?
It’s worth giving up my life.
Just as he died for us
To take in all our earthly sins
If only we could see the big picture
And focus on bettering what’s within.
I’ve loved and lost
I’ve cursed and cried
One moment I’ve hit rock bottom
The next I’m flying on cloud nine.
He’s within each of us
For we’re all his sacred temple
Can’t you feel that blooming warmth?
A soothing caress forever gentle.
He’s the...
#love
#sun
#God
#spiritual
#rhyming
280 reads
2 Comments
SweetKittyCat5
Poem Published
21st Dec 2023 1:21am
21st Dec 2023 1:21am
I See Your Worth
Oh, I see you shooting your vibes past the stars
Raise the conscious level, it’s still grounded, push the limits, my throne will tell you how far
I do not solicit the pulsations of my Chi, my star dust softly floats from Jupiter after it has been tenderly kissed upon Mars
A Hebrew King is ordained by the will of Allah and in him I trust
Not by his will to fall into temptation of mental lust
My value is worth far more the silver, titanium, and from the minerals embedded in Mother Earth, the natural elements of gold
I am...
Raise the conscious level, it’s still grounded, push the limits, my throne will tell you how far
I do not solicit the pulsations of my Chi, my star dust softly floats from Jupiter after it has been tenderly kissed upon Mars
A Hebrew King is ordained by the will of Allah and in him I trust
Not by his will to fall into temptation of mental lust
My value is worth far more the silver, titanium, and from the minerals embedded in Mother Earth, the natural elements of gold
I am...
#sun
#philosophical
#wisdom
#TruthOfLife
#spiritual
412 reads
5 Comments
FATBOY300PLUS
Poem Published
21st Dec 2023 1:13am
21st Dec 2023 1:13am
Visual Appeal
I love the look of beautiful women
And I love female beauty
in all the forms it presents itself
Each man must define visual beauty for himself
But my preference for beautiful has not changed
It is pretty, perfect, and black
Perfectly Black
A darkness of the skin that brings joy to my heart. A vivid, visceral beauty that brings forth happiness, and hunger, in me.
Ever feel the sun on your face and revel in the warmth of soaking up all the sun's rays?
That is how I feel looking upon skin which collects all the colors...
And I love female beauty
in all the forms it presents itself
Each man must define visual beauty for himself
But my preference for beautiful has not changed
It is pretty, perfect, and black
Perfectly Black
A darkness of the skin that brings joy to my heart. A vivid, visceral beauty that brings forth happiness, and hunger, in me.
Ever feel the sun on your face and revel in the warmth of soaking up all the sun's rays?
That is how I feel looking upon skin which collects all the colors...
#romantic
#beauty
#sun #environment
#sun #environment
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3 Comments
LunasChild8
Poem Published
15th Dec 2023 1:47am
15th Dec 2023 1:47am
Liquid Sunshine
I hear whispers in the dark
Preaching about an infinite wonder
Apparently, we all have this mark
Branded inside of us, and it’s led me to discover…
This completion and rush of thrill
A noiseless heartbeat is my life line
The world around me seemingly stands still
As I bathe in a pool of liquid sunshine.
Ooh, I can feel it
This warmth that oozes into my soul
It brought me out of this empty pit
And rewarded me with self-control.
Fill me up, and enter me
This golden honey called liquid sunshine
I surrender to...
Preaching about an infinite wonder
Apparently, we all have this mark
Branded inside of us, and it’s led me to discover…
This completion and rush of thrill
A noiseless heartbeat is my life line
The world around me seemingly stands still
As I bathe in a pool of liquid sunshine.
Ooh, I can feel it
This warmth that oozes into my soul
It brought me out of this empty pit
And rewarded me with self-control.
Fill me up, and enter me
This golden honey called liquid sunshine
I surrender to...
#happiness
#sun
#rhyming
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10 Comments
SweetKittyCat5
Poem Published
5th Dec 2023 00:55am
5th Dec 2023 00:55am
My Scorpion King (Mm..Softly Levitating)
Flipping the covers back licking my fingers than sliding them inside my kitty cat
I felt a soft caress to my cheek
Where virtual and reality has come to meet
I heard you summoning for me
Tonight my back arched, mm.. you will taste of thee
Kisses to my clit… my eyes in rapid eye movement
The feel of his tongue swirling over my soft folds, this is meant
Dazing me in my slumber
He’s winter and I’m summer
He plays my mind likes he’s savored my passion in the fifth wonder
He leaned...
I felt a soft caress to my cheek
Where virtual and reality has come to meet
I heard you summoning for me
Tonight my back arched, mm.. you will taste of thee
Kisses to my clit… my eyes in rapid eye movement
The feel of his tongue swirling over my soft folds, this is meant
Dazing me in my slumber
He’s winter and I’m summer
He plays my mind likes he’s savored my passion in the fifth wonder
He leaned...
#war
#water
#lover
#seductive
#sun
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3 Comments
SweetKittyCat5
Poem Published
3rd Dec 2023 12:10pm
3rd Dec 2023 12:10pm
Thy Will Shall Be Done (The Covenant)
For your arrogance, Damballa and your spiritual treason, your malice, your racial contempt, your hate, YOU and your regrets were tossed off the Mothership
Then to label yourself in this dimension as the demoness Maman Brigitte who scowls the night killing babies, including the divine spiritual killing of your own
Bedazzling men and women with false spiritual ideology in hopes their minds are confused, too far gone
And you want the world to worship a snakehead you have placed upon your throne
The Lilith of the night, a Jinn, an Earth slithering...
Then to label yourself in this dimension as the demoness Maman Brigitte who scowls the night killing babies, including the divine spiritual killing of your own
Bedazzling men and women with false spiritual ideology in hopes their minds are confused, too far gone
And you want the world to worship a snakehead you have placed upon your throne
The Lilith of the night, a Jinn, an Earth slithering...
#war
#sun
#moon
#religion
#culture
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3 Comments
LostViking
Lost Viking
Lost Viking
Poem Published
2nd Dec 2023 3:06pm
2nd Dec 2023 3:06pm
Sun Bathing
In sunlight's embrace, my love was unveiled,
Her figure adorned as she softly exhaled
Her body embraced by a canvas of grace
Elegance and purity, a soft interlace
Basking in the sun she quietly sleeps
I remember our love and quietly weep
Her figure adorned as she softly exhaled
Her body embraced by a canvas of grace
Elegance and purity, a soft interlace
Basking in the sun she quietly sleeps
I remember our love and quietly weep
#regret
#lust
#beauty #sun
#beauty #sun
354 reads
8 Comments
LongTubiFree
Poem Published
2nd Dec 2023 4:43am
2nd Dec 2023 4:43am
In the morning light
To the sun, the moon must seem a fool
living in shadows, nobody able to see Her rule
yet she continues so patient and quiet
preventing the tides from creating a riot
guiding our nights along on their paths
yet, the sun on has His wrath.
Beating us down under his heated crown
hoping we will drown
in our own sweat from our brow
hoping to match her beauty somehow.
Yes, spring may belong to the bright
but Winter belongs to the cold night
just like the moon herself, cold and aloof
yet so beautiful it goes beyond any proof
the...
living in shadows, nobody able to see Her rule
yet she continues so patient and quiet
preventing the tides from creating a riot
guiding our nights along on their paths
yet, the sun on has His wrath.
Beating us down under his heated crown
hoping we will drown
in our own sweat from our brow
hoping to match her beauty somehow.
Yes, spring may belong to the bright
but Winter belongs to the cold night
just like the moon herself, cold and aloof
yet so beautiful it goes beyond any proof
the...
#sun
#moon
#night #nature
#night #nature
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