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Sun Bathing
In sunlight's embrace, my love was unveiled,
Her figure adorned as she softly exhaled
Her body embraced by a canvas of grace
Elegance and purity, a soft interlace
Basking in the sun she quietly sleeps
I remember our love and quietly weep
Her figure adorned as she softly exhaled
Her body embraced by a canvas of grace
Elegance and purity, a soft interlace
Basking in the sun she quietly sleeps
I remember our love and quietly weep
Published 2nd Dec 2023
Author's Note
Remembering my wife sunbathing behind our house. She was so beautiful.
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2nd Dec 2023 3:38pm
2nd Dec 2023 4:32pm
2nd Dec 2023 4:55pm
A lovely admiring write. Last two lines made me wonder is she no longer living?
"He body embraced by a canvas of grace" - lovely description. (Canvas of grace open to interpretation.)
"He body embraced by a canvas of grace" - lovely description. (Canvas of grace open to interpretation.)
13th Dec 2023 11:19am
3rd Dec 2023 00:15am
9th Dec 2023 10:51pm
This is so profound and beautifully written. The ending tugged at my heartstrings.
13th Dec 2023 12:47pm
14th Dec 2023 11:43am
