Poems About the Sun Seeking Honest Critique
#sun
Gahddess_Worship
Poem Published
25th Apr 2025 3:04am
25th Apr 2025 3:04am
Natural Bridges - Scene 1
Gravel crunch, crunch, crunches
beneath your sandals
walking the ice plant framed path
that leads to the shore
feel the cool sea breeze l
caress your cheeks,
tousle your hair
descending the stairway
to the beige sanded beach
bifurcated by a flowing stream
fed by seawater at high tide
survey the dark green ocean waves
rolling in to meet the land
and marvel at the natural
rock Arc de Triomphe
rising majestically just off shore
seeming to support a bridge
to some mystical kingdom in the azure blue sky
beneath your sandals
walking the ice plant framed path
that leads to the shore
feel the cool sea breeze l
caress your cheeks,
tousle your hair
descending the stairway
to the beige sanded beach
bifurcated by a flowing stream
fed by seawater at high tide
survey the dark green ocean waves
rolling in to meet the land
and marvel at the natural
rock Arc de Triomphe
rising majestically just off shore
seeming to support a bridge
to some mystical kingdom in the azure blue sky
#nature
#peace
#sea
#sun
#wind
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InDreamz
Poem Published
23rd Apr 2025 3:39pm
23rd Apr 2025 3:39pm
a morning to behold
clouds bloomed and sprinkled
cool dew drops,
as the sun emerged in a crimson robe;
the rosy aura smudged the periphery
like kohl spreads around eyes,
environs echoed with the
mellifluous music of birds
while the velvety breeze waltzed,
intoxicated with sweet aromas
of blossoming buds,
flirting with leaves
as it flowed along its drift.
sparkling streams gurgled
in kiddish merriment
savoring every droplets of drizzle,
while the leaves whispered
prayers to the universe,
as the trees meditated...
cool dew drops,
as the sun emerged in a crimson robe;
the rosy aura smudged the periphery
like kohl spreads around eyes,
environs echoed with the
mellifluous music of birds
while the velvety breeze waltzed,
intoxicated with sweet aromas
of blossoming buds,
flirting with leaves
as it flowed along its drift.
sparkling streams gurgled
in kiddish merriment
savoring every droplets of drizzle,
while the leaves whispered
prayers to the universe,
as the trees meditated...
#earth
#morning
#nature
#sun
#universe
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9 Comments
PittinixDesigns
Poem Published
23rd Apr 2025 2:39am
23rd Apr 2025 2:39am
I'll Return to You
I’ll leave tomorrow to a distant place.
You’ll miss me when I go away.
In three years, I’ll return to you.
I want you to wait for me,
But I know it’s too much to ask.
Your poor heart will ache for me,
But the sky will still be blue,
And the faithful sun will still shine.
I’ll think of you as time goes by.
The fire will keep burning.
I promise you that I’ll return to you.
Please don’t give up on me.
I’ll see you when I come back.
We’ll smile at each other again.
Darling, I’ll return to you,
And I’ll stay with you...
You’ll miss me when I go away.
In three years, I’ll return to you.
I want you to wait for me,
But I know it’s too much to ask.
Your poor heart will ache for me,
But the sky will still be blue,
And the faithful sun will still shine.
I’ll think of you as time goes by.
The fire will keep burning.
I promise you that I’ll return to you.
Please don’t give up on me.
I’ll see you when I come back.
We’ll smile at each other again.
Darling, I’ll return to you,
And I’ll stay with you...
#fire
#love
#sky #sun
#sky #sun
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Green_Arrow
Poem Published
16th Apr 2025 11:33am
16th Apr 2025 11:33am
Oh, Am I In Big Trouble.
As the sun rises, she
finds a golden ball on
the ground and plays
with it until she hears
a snap from that thing.
She picks it up and
sees cracks all over it
which makes her realize
that it really is an egg.
finds a golden ball on
the ground and plays
with it until she hears
a snap from that thing.
She picks it up and
sees cracks all over it
which makes her realize
that it really is an egg.
#confusion
#fiction
#FreeVerse
#ignorance
#sun
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wallyroo92
Poem Published
11th Apr 2025 3:40am
11th Apr 2025 3:40am
Sun Rise, Sun Set
Sometimes things must be dark so we can see the light
Just like at night, when the stars decorate the sky
And during the day when I’ve dreamt of chasing clouds away
My mind can tend to get lost while time just flies by
But right before the sun sets there is a certain anticipation
An array of colors weaves right before the sun is gone
The light blue gives away to a darker shade for a new view
Until the hues begin to change again right before dawn
I have breathed the cool air and felt the hot afternoon glare
When every step I took made my...
Just like at night, when the stars decorate the sky
And during the day when I’ve dreamt of chasing clouds away
My mind can tend to get lost while time just flies by
But right before the sun sets there is a certain anticipation
An array of colors weaves right before the sun is gone
The light blue gives away to a darker shade for a new view
Until the hues begin to change again right before dawn
I have breathed the cool air and felt the hot afternoon glare
When every step I took made my...
#dawn
#moon
#PersonalGrowth
#SelfReflection
#sun
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OyateInyanNajin
Poem Published
9th Apr 2025 10:37pm
9th Apr 2025 10:37pm
The CHALLENGING INNER and OUTER STRUGGLES OF and IN COMMITTING FULLY (Wed., April 9th, 2025, Palm Springs, California
such
sweet solace
found
in this
oneness
such
sweet solace
lived and loved
in the
higher frequency
vibrational resonance
of it s awakened
experiential whole
such
sweet solace
still hid within
the even greater
sweet mystery
between and of
all we do
and do not
know
such
sweet solace
still yet
to unfold
in the wholly
ineffable holy
of and in
this sacred oneness s
all ...
sweet solace
found
in this
oneness
such
sweet solace
lived and loved
in the
higher frequency
vibrational resonance
of it s awakened
experiential whole
such
sweet solace
still hid within
the even greater
sweet mystery
between and of
all we do
and do not
know
such
sweet solace
still yet
to unfold
in the wholly
ineffable holy
of and in
this sacred oneness s
all ...
#earth
#evolution
#heaven
#sun
#universe
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msbellepoetry43
Poem Published
26th Mar 2025 7:38pm
26th Mar 2025 7:38pm
Earth, I owe you the biggest Apology
Dear Earth,
It is my, fault and
my biggest regret,
I owe you an apology, because
you didn't forget,
I owe you for the things
that has happened to you,
So, I am Appoligizing
on behalf, for this apology is due.
The people of this world
has done you so wrong,
Run-a-muck and done foolish things, and just strung you along!!
The people of this world today,
do not deserve you,
They waste and they damage, and
They don't have a clue.
They can't get it right,
They're polluting the Lands
Is where I Step in...
It is my, fault and
my biggest regret,
I owe you an apology, because
you didn't forget,
I owe you for the things
that has happened to you,
So, I am Appoligizing
on behalf, for this apology is due.
The people of this world
has done you so wrong,
Run-a-muck and done foolish things, and just strung you along!!
The people of this world today,
do not deserve you,
They waste and they damage, and
They don't have a clue.
They can't get it right,
They're polluting the Lands
Is where I Step in...
#earth
#moon
#sun #universe
#sun #universe
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summultima
uma
uma
Poem Published
20th Mar 2025 10:00pm
20th Mar 2025 10:00pm
~nowadays: dandelions and the dog of time
1.
the delicately hardened
strawy hued dry achenes
had set their route..
unknown
unpredictable..
wind steers
their destiny..
freely parachuting
long to shores unknown..
as they land.. just only their heady
basal seed remains .. losing their
angelic wings .. that had swam
through the wild uproarious airs
2.
she- the apartment dwelling
beautiful...
the delicately hardened
strawy hued dry achenes
had set their route..
unknown
unpredictable..
wind steers
their destiny..
freely parachuting
long to shores unknown..
as they land.. just only their heady
basal seed remains .. losing their
angelic wings .. that had swam
through the wild uproarious airs
2.
she- the apartment dwelling
beautiful...
#astronomy
#dogs
#earth
#spring
#sun
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3 Comments
smackdownraven
Poem Published
19th Mar 2025 9:54pm
19th Mar 2025 9:54pm
conversion of light
unfurling my soul I wander
breaking barriers as I go
interesting brokenness
leaving bits of myself along the way
in exchange for soul-to-soul contact
a pneuma of attraction
with eyes that flash and then turn low to a faint glow
awaiting the shadows that light
they are and are not observers of mankind
with pleasant greetings
a salutation is given
Crimsin of shade and light
we see your shine
with glitter of their own, I smile
taking my time to acquaint myself
there are some dwellers...
breaking barriers as I go
interesting brokenness
leaving bits of myself along the way
in exchange for soul-to-soul contact
a pneuma of attraction
with eyes that flash and then turn low to a faint glow
awaiting the shadows that light
they are and are not observers of mankind
with pleasant greetings
a salutation is given
Crimsin of shade and light
we see your shine
with glitter of their own, I smile
taking my time to acquaint myself
there are some dwellers...
#spiritual
#sun
#universe
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3 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
13th Mar 2025 11:34pm
13th Mar 2025 11:34pm
Here I am as I am a woman
Here I am as I am a woman sitting here in the afternoon sun, of the mother land, yet it's here and now. I admire this tree of life. Tall looking like a badge of honor, standing under the sun, as it's light creating a image, of the bonsai tree of life with love, and happiness and dreams. For sure as I look forward beyond the tree of Life. I can feel it's power reaching into me, so spiritually touching the deepness of my heart ❤️ YET I feel so alive here and now in this space without time, as I am in twin with it's deepness of this subject matter that is called living life. ...
#evolution
#moon
#stars
#sun
#universe
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MidnightSonneteer
Poem Published
6th Mar 2025 9:39pm
6th Mar 2025 9:39pm
The Moon at Noon
Twenty degrees up in the east
a buxom crescent rose
as a bosomy silver beast
that everybody knows.
She's up and down and all around
in itinerant bliss
where every crater has been crowned
by meteoric kiss.
Each kiss a job around each rim
and holes where glory be,
where lovers might let vision skim
from sea...to Luna sea...
a madness in the daylit sky
much like that midnight craze
where sunny Selene passes by...
from phase to sexy phase!
a buxom crescent rose
as a bosomy silver beast
that everybody knows.
She's up and down and all around
in itinerant bliss
where every crater has been crowned
by meteoric kiss.
Each kiss a job around each rim
and holes where glory be,
where lovers might let vision skim
from sea...to Luna sea...
a madness in the daylit sky
much like that midnight craze
where sunny Selene passes by...
from phase to sexy phase!
#moon
#sun
185 reads
17 Comments
dartford
Paul S...
Paul S...
Poem Published
5th Mar 2025 11:42pm
5th Mar 2025 11:42pm
confidence
sun was shining
over cracked uneven pavements
slopes, ramps, hills
in the distance
you can see an old bloke utterly careless
of such moments
over cracked uneven pavements
slopes, ramps, hills
in the distance
you can see an old bloke utterly careless
of such moments
#sun
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2 Comments
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