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The Moon at Noon
Twenty degrees up in the east
a buxom crescent rose
as a bosomy silver beast
that everybody knows.
She's up and down and all around
in itinerant bliss
where every crater has been crowned
by meteoric kiss.
Each kiss a job around each rim
and holes where glory be,
where lovers might let vision skim
from sea...to Luna sea...
a madness in the daylit sky
much like that midnight craze
where sunny Selene passes by...
from phase to sexy phase!
a buxom crescent rose
as a bosomy silver beast
that everybody knows.
She's up and down and all around
in itinerant bliss
where every crater has been crowned
by meteoric kiss.
Each kiss a job around each rim
and holes where glory be,
where lovers might let vision skim
from sea...to Luna sea...
a madness in the daylit sky
much like that midnight craze
where sunny Selene passes by...
from phase to sexy phase!
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Re. The Moon at Noon
6th Mar 2025 11:42pm
This is fun, with your elegant touches of course.
Is there a market for moon bras? Lunar lovlies need support too.
Is there a market for moon bras? Lunar lovlies need support too.
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Re: Re. The Moon at Noon
7th Mar 2025 1:02am
I just hope the crescent moon was "horny" enough for you. (Oh behave)
Surely somebody already has lunar brassieres ready to blast off, but if not, then you know where to put your entrepreneurial efforts. 💵
Surely somebody already has lunar brassieres ready to blast off, but if not, then you know where to put your entrepreneurial efforts. 💵
Re. The Moon at Noon
7th Mar 2025 5:42am
Re: Re. The Moon at Noon
7th Mar 2025 6:09pm
Thank you, Damian.
I went for a walk and this is what I came back with 🙂
I went for a walk and this is what I came back with 🙂
Re. The Moon at Noon
7th Mar 2025 10:19am
Dear MS,
I really enjoyed this flirty depiction of the moon. The rhyming meter was awesome and as ever I’m a moon devotee. Great write. H🌷
I really enjoyed this flirty depiction of the moon. The rhyming meter was awesome and as ever I’m a moon devotee. Great write. H🌷
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Re: Re. The Moon at Noon
7th Mar 2025 6:15pm
Re. The Moon at Noon
Love love love this language so rich n cosmic n sensual you speak fluent dear Poet .. i too have wondered lot wenever i see the bitten noonish moon as a weird white opaque as if in an unbelongingness.. but yes yet the same her waits polite for her bridal golden sexy n sensual n soulful form at night! Beautiful composition XO
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Re: Re. The Moon at Noon
7th Mar 2025 6:24pm
Right? Silver in the day and gold at night
and we love the moon either way ❤️
She is always at the center of love language for every true poet 💞
Many thanks to you for reading 🙏
and we love the moon either way ❤️
She is always at the center of love language for every true poet 💞
Many thanks to you for reading 🙏
Re. The Moon at Noon
9th Mar 2025 9:39pm
I like this poem MS, I felt like I walked for a while under a moonlit sky🌹talented
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Re: Re. The Moon at Noon
9th Mar 2025 9:48pm
Hi Grace!
That's always a great feeling, isn't it?
I've been walking every day now that's it's warmed up a little:)
That's always a great feeling, isn't it?
I've been walking every day now that's it's warmed up a little:)
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9th Mar 2025 10:06pm
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9th Mar 2025 11:27pm
Re. The Moon at Noon
22nd Mar 2025 00:56am
Re: Re. The Moon at Noon
22nd Mar 2025 1:05pm
HaHa !!!
Yes! Even the sky can be pornographic!
Let's see them try and ban that:)
Yes! Even the sky can be pornographic!
Let's see them try and ban that:)
Re. The Moon at Noon
5th Apr 2025 2:58pm
Re: Re. The Moon at Noon
5th Apr 2025 3:40pm
Thank you!
I just hope you get your breath back, because you're going to need it...
for inspiration, you know :-)
I just hope you get your breath back, because you're going to need it...
for inspiration, you know :-)