Senryu by Top Critiquers Poems
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Her
Poem Published
22nd Sep 2024 11:36pm
22nd Sep 2024 11:36pm
The Beauty of Orgasm
White hot light pulsates
Damp whispers on her skin soothe
His growl claims her soul
Damp whispers on her skin soothe
His growl claims her soul
#erotic
#orgasm
#senryu
249 reads
10 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
16th Nov 2024 7:47pm
16th Nov 2024 7:47pm
My heart that cries
Rain hits the window
There's more water in my eyes
I long for your love
There's more water in my eyes
I long for your love
#loneliness
#love
#sadness #senryu
#sadness #senryu
54 reads
6 Comments
Solomon_Song
Poem Published
10th Aug 2017 6:50am
10th Aug 2017 6:50am
NAKED IN OUR BEDROOM
The ease you have in your own skin
Bespeaks confidence from within,
Acceptance of the way God made
You, as like Adam you parade
In the hallowed sanctuary
Of bedroom shared maritally.
The sight inspires security
To join you in your nudity,
Becoming like Adam and Eve
Before the serpent did deceive,
To bite the Divine hand that fed
Them, be ashamed to be naked.
Within the mirror you and I
Our joint reflection we espy.
You turn to me and take my hand
Like on our wedding day, then stand
Sharing the view...
Bespeaks confidence from within,
Acceptance of the way God made
You, as like Adam you parade
In the hallowed sanctuary
Of bedroom shared maritally.
The sight inspires security
To join you in your nudity,
Becoming like Adam and Eve
Before the serpent did deceive,
To bite the Divine hand that fed
Them, be ashamed to be naked.
Within the mirror you and I
Our joint reflection we espy.
You turn to me and take my hand
Like on our wedding day, then stand
Sharing the view...
#marriage
#sex
#erotic
#religion
#senryu
899 reads
5 Comments
Ahavati
Tams
Tams
Poem Published
24th Sep 2018 5:14pm
24th Sep 2018 5:14pm
haiga I
haiga is a form of Japanese poetry that contains an image with either a haiku or senryu written on it. This one form combined three artforms: imagery ( photographs or original art * ), poetry, and calligraphy. I hope to dig out my calligraphy pens and apply original penmanship soon, something I feel has all but been lost in the digital age.
* in this case both; this is a photograph of an original collage I did of mixed media: sand, gold leaf, sumi ink, and oil entitled ' Carved in Stone', which I believe the sentiment to be. The senryu is digitally applied. 11 x 14
* in this case both; this is a photograph of an original collage I did of mixed media: sand, gold leaf, sumi ink, and oil entitled ' Carved in Stone', which I believe the sentiment to be. The senryu is digitally applied. 11 x 14
#senryu
#art
810 reads
11 Comments
Honoria
Poem Published
2nd Dec 2020 3:39am
2nd Dec 2020 3:39am
Senryu Menu II
(K)
Why do we fear things?
In the end it comes around
to what it will be.
(L)
If you had been at
liberty to speak, would you
have said you love me?
(M)
I see a future
devoid of pain and sorrow
T’would I live that long.
(N1)
I’m afraid you’ve seen
me through such dirty lenses.
A shadow of dust-
***
(N2)
I am to the world.
Merely swept into the bin
and lost forever.
(O)
Praying and hoping,
my wish, at last was granted. ...
Why do we fear things?
In the end it comes around
to what it will be.
(L)
If you had been at
liberty to speak, would you
have said you love me?
(M)
I see a future
devoid of pain and sorrow
T’would I live that long.
(N1)
I’m afraid you’ve seen
me through such dirty lenses.
A shadow of dust-
***
(N2)
I am to the world.
Merely swept into the bin
and lost forever.
(O)
Praying and hoping,
my wish, at last was granted. ...
#WritingPoetry
#senryu
638 reads
44 Comments
PoetSpeak
Poem Published
30th Sep 2021 2:20am
30th Sep 2021 2:20am
Senryu 4 ( pastel heart )
Heart is pastel pink
It beats extra hard for you
Colors my world soft
It beats extra hard for you
Colors my world soft
#love
#MyInspiration
#WritingPoetry #senryu
#WritingPoetry #senryu
300 reads
13 Comments
goodwolf1966
jimmy
jimmy
Poem Published
21st Oct 2024 5:36am
21st Oct 2024 5:36am
haikus and senryus
my secret
if i loved her more
i would have to let her know
but it's my secret
no more heartbreaks
you're only lonely
that's the way you choose to live
with no more heartbreaks
she wore moonlight
she looked so lovely
wearing nothing but moonlight
she wore it all night
winter's cold
i don't mind the cold
when winter comes around
let it pass by spring
hopeful flowers
the bad weather came
the flowers withstood it all
keeping...
if i loved her more
i would have to let her know
but it's my secret
no more heartbreaks
you're only lonely
that's the way you choose to live
with no more heartbreaks
she wore moonlight
she looked so lovely
wearing nothing but moonlight
she wore it all night
winter's cold
i don't mind the cold
when winter comes around
let it pass by spring
hopeful flowers
the bad weather came
the flowers withstood it all
keeping...
#emotional
#haiku
#minimalist
#senryu
#uplifting
81 reads
6 Comments
Connotation
Poem Published
14th Nov 2024 9:53am
14th Nov 2024 9:53am
10 Wondrous Senryu Poems
Lost in Confusion:
Mystery enquired
Paradox alienates
No truth and purpose
Fallen Suddenly:
Thievery question
Fragility foundation
Unstable collapse
Imagined Expanse:
Above atmosphere
Observational below
Connection wondrous
Idolatrous Guess:
The gift of the stars
Deceitful ultimatum
To expect answers
Separate Conscience:
Physics fabricate
Presumably literal
Spirit spatially
...
Mystery enquired
Paradox alienates
No truth and purpose
Fallen Suddenly:
Thievery question
Fragility foundation
Unstable collapse
Imagined Expanse:
Above atmosphere
Observational below
Connection wondrous
Idolatrous Guess:
The gift of the stars
Deceitful ultimatum
To expect answers
Separate Conscience:
Physics fabricate
Presumably literal
Spirit spatially
...
#haiku
#metaphor
#senryu
#stars
#universe
41 reads
2 Comments
AspergerPoet56
Poem Published
9th Nov 2024 6:10pm
9th Nov 2024 6:10pm
Echoes Of Sacrifice
when those brave heroes
bore arms for king and country
innocence was lost
the mustard gas crept
the grim reaper was there ~ to
collect the dead souls
seeping blood in mud
fertilising poppy weed
for rememberence
stark horrors of war
was the putrid remains ~ of
trusted brotherhood
true peace in our time
a fleeting concept ~ never
forget the fallen
honour in silence
with reverence the fallen
for they sacrificed
whispers of the past
echoes of the brave who...
bore arms for king and country
innocence was lost
the mustard gas crept
the grim reaper was there ~ to
collect the dead souls
seeping blood in mud
fertilising poppy weed
for rememberence
stark horrors of war
was the putrid remains ~ of
trusted brotherhood
true peace in our time
a fleeting concept ~ never
forget the fallen
honour in silence
with reverence the fallen
for they sacrificed
whispers of the past
echoes of the brave who...
#military
#senryu
#soldiers
#war
#memorial
71 reads
5 Comments
SweetKittyCat5
Poem Published
3rd Jun 2023 11:34pm
3rd Jun 2023 11:34pm
Your Love Is King
A man shall never journey his path through life being lonely
A Creole Queen, a nurse, a poetess, his astral muse, his tender macaroni
Who dare says love cannot be rendered from the sky
God loaned it unto earthlings without any subtle doubts, no cosmic whys
Mental entangled juices
Silken dialect whispered, freeing his pearly flow satisfaction of uses
You have baptized my mind
Tipping the scales of fate, surrendering echoes within a different celestial time
Praying for hope, dreams, pants of Heavenly communion
A...
A Creole Queen, a nurse, a poetess, his astral muse, his tender macaroni
Who dare says love cannot be rendered from the sky
God loaned it unto earthlings without any subtle doubts, no cosmic whys
Mental entangled juices
Silken dialect whispered, freeing his pearly flow satisfaction of uses
You have baptized my mind
Tipping the scales of fate, surrendering echoes within a different celestial time
Praying for hope, dreams, pants of Heavenly communion
A...
#senryu
#passion
#seductive
#sun
#moon
471 reads
12 Comments
PAR
Poem Published
4th Nov 2023 6:00pm
4th Nov 2023 6:00pm
Senry#1
I am just so over
people are so uninteresting
I need to go pee
people are so uninteresting
I need to go pee
#mirror
#confessional
#myself
#WritingPoetry
#senryu
114 reads
2 Comments
Trillium
Poem Published
25th Apr 2023 6:39am
25th Apr 2023 6:39am
Religion
You pervert nature
In your world my love is sin
My body shameful
In your world my love is sin
My body shameful
#anger
#senryu
210 reads
4 Comments
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