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Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
26th Jan 2025 1:07pm
26th Jan 2025 1:07pm
The Wish
My heart is for you
When I opened up my eyes
I wish you were mine
When I opened up my eyes
I wish you were mine
#dreams
#love
#mystery
#sadness
#senryu
95 reads
16 Comments
Her
Poem Published
18th Dec 2024 9:59am
18th Dec 2024 9:59am
Master of the Senryu (AspergerPoet56)
His erotica
Passion igniting the page
Dancing molten heat
Passion igniting the page
Dancing molten heat
#admiration
#friendship
#respect #senryu
#respect #senryu
119 reads
12 Comments
Ahavati
Tams
Tams
Poem Published
24th Sep 2018 5:14pm
24th Sep 2018 5:14pm
haiga I
haiga is a form of Japanese poetry that contains an image with either a haiku or senryu written on it. This one form combined three artforms: imagery ( photographs or original art * ), poetry, and calligraphy. I hope to dig out my calligraphy pens and apply original penmanship soon, something I feel has all but been lost in the digital age.
* in this case both; this is a photograph of an original collage I did of mixed media: sand, gold leaf, sumi ink, and oil entitled ' Carved in Stone', which I believe the sentiment to be. The senryu is digitally applied. 11 x 14
* in this case both; this is a photograph of an original collage I did of mixed media: sand, gold leaf, sumi ink, and oil entitled ' Carved in Stone', which I believe the sentiment to be. The senryu is digitally applied. 11 x 14
#senryu
#art
825 reads
11 Comments
PoetSpeak
Poem Published
30th Sep 2021 2:20am
30th Sep 2021 2:20am
Senryu 4 ( pastel heart )
Heart is pastel pink
It beats extra hard for you
Colors my world soft
It beats extra hard for you
Colors my world soft
#love
#MyInspiration
#WritingPoetry #senryu
#WritingPoetry #senryu
326 reads
13 Comments
Solomon_Song
Poem Published
10th Aug 2017 6:50am
10th Aug 2017 6:50am
NAKED IN OUR BEDROOM
The ease you have in your own skin
Bespeaks confidence from within,
Acceptance of the way God made
You, as like Adam you parade
In the hallowed sanctuary
Of bedroom shared maritally.
The sight inspires security
To join you in your nudity,
Becoming like Adam and Eve
Before the serpent did deceive,
To bite the Divine hand that fed
Them, be ashamed to be naked.
Within the mirror you and I
Our joint reflection we espy.
You turn to me and take my hand
Like on our wedding day, then stand
Sharing the view...
Bespeaks confidence from within,
Acceptance of the way God made
You, as like Adam you parade
In the hallowed sanctuary
Of bedroom shared maritally.
The sight inspires security
To join you in your nudity,
Becoming like Adam and Eve
Before the serpent did deceive,
To bite the Divine hand that fed
Them, be ashamed to be naked.
Within the mirror you and I
Our joint reflection we espy.
You turn to me and take my hand
Like on our wedding day, then stand
Sharing the view...
#marriage
#sex
#erotic
#religion
#senryu
917 reads
5 Comments
Honoria
Poem Published
2nd Dec 2020 3:39am
2nd Dec 2020 3:39am
Senryu Menu II
(K)
Why do we fear things?
In the end it comes around
to what it will be.
(L)
If you had been at
liberty to speak, would you
have said you love me?
(M)
I see a future
devoid of pain and sorrow
T’would I live that long.
(N1)
I’m afraid you’ve seen
me through such dirty lenses.
A shadow of dust-
***
(N2)
I am to the world.
Merely swept into the bin
and lost forever.
(O)
Praying and hoping,
my wish, at last was granted. ...
Why do we fear things?
In the end it comes around
to what it will be.
(L)
If you had been at
liberty to speak, would you
have said you love me?
(M)
I see a future
devoid of pain and sorrow
T’would I live that long.
(N1)
I’m afraid you’ve seen
me through such dirty lenses.
A shadow of dust-
***
(N2)
I am to the world.
Merely swept into the bin
and lost forever.
(O)
Praying and hoping,
my wish, at last was granted. ...
#WritingPoetry
#senryu
677 reads
44 Comments
PAR
Poem Published
4th Nov 2023 6:00pm
4th Nov 2023 6:00pm
Senry#1
I am just so over
people are so uninteresting
I need to go pee
people are so uninteresting
I need to go pee
#mirror
#confessional
#myself
#WritingPoetry
#senryu
147 reads
2 Comments
SweetKittyCat5
Poem Published
19th Dec 2022 4:41am
19th Dec 2022 4:41am
Mm.. Are You Ready By Poet Tenderloin (Featuring SKC)
#erotic
#lover
#senryu
#passion
#seductive
890 reads
16 Comments
brokentitanium
k.
k.
Poem Published
3rd Nov 2024 11:21am
3rd Nov 2024 11:21am
Limerence
here I go again
fingers brushing candle flame
beauty - danger - dance
.
fingers brushing candle flame
beauty - danger - dance
.
#love
#senryu
#ThrillSeeking
104 reads
10 Comments
goodwolf1966
jimmy
jimmy
Poem Published
21st Oct 2024 5:36am
21st Oct 2024 5:36am
haikus and senryus
my secret
if i loved her more
i would have to let her know
but it's my secret
no more heartbreaks
you're only lonely
that's the way you choose to live
with no more heartbreaks
she wore moonlight
she looked so lovely
wearing nothing but moonlight
she wore it all night
winter's cold
i don't mind the cold
when winter comes around
let it pass by spring
hopeful flowers
the bad weather came
the flowers withstood it all
keeping...
if i loved her more
i would have to let her know
but it's my secret
no more heartbreaks
you're only lonely
that's the way you choose to live
with no more heartbreaks
she wore moonlight
she looked so lovely
wearing nothing but moonlight
she wore it all night
winter's cold
i don't mind the cold
when winter comes around
let it pass by spring
hopeful flowers
the bad weather came
the flowers withstood it all
keeping...
#emotional
#haiku
#minimalist
#senryu
#uplifting
102 reads
6 Comments
KristinaX
Poem Published
29th Nov 2022 1:00am
29th Nov 2022 1:00am
Crying
you don't see my tears
somehow you know anyway
that I am crying
somehow you know anyway
that I am crying
#sadness
#mother
#illness
#senryu
#suffering
842 reads
Ljdynamic
Poem Published
29th May 2024 5:57pm
29th May 2024 5:57pm
And We Clashed
The warmth of my wrath
collides with his cold aura.
Creating a storm.
collides with his cold aura.
Creating a storm.
#conflict
#senryu
#relationships
48 reads
42 Comments
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