Senryu Seeking Honest Critique Poems
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senryu seeking honest critique poems. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Home
home is each other
not in cathedrals of stone
but houses of flesh
not in cathedrals of stone
but houses of flesh
#senryu
#sensual
#passion
157 reads
6 Comments
Peace (senryu)
Peace, so far, so close
Well wishes on street corners
Bring it full circle
Well wishes on street corners
Bring it full circle
#peace
#senryu
72 reads
3 Comments
Stop Teasing
#lust
#erotic
#senryu
#sexy
#passion
259 reads
1 Comment
Cascade
their music brings joy
fleshy rhythmic impactful
seething cataract
fleshy rhythmic impactful
seething cataract
#senryu
#sensual
79 reads
3 Comments
Birdseye View
red panorama
voyeurs pleasure birdwatching
fiery cardinals
voyeurs pleasure birdwatching
fiery cardinals
#senryu
#sensual
91 reads
2 Comments
Life’s Agast
Life’s Just Agast!
Ardenous ordeal,
a poignant belligerence,
revenant mistress!
willingly waddle,
presumptions inadequate,
burning delicate!
The sun's prejudice,
icarus' atrocities,
melting my cities!
wondering what is?
crashes and thrashers, is it not?
probing whilst its hot!
A rouse no other,
birds and their pretty feathers,
painful, why bother?
do let it be still,
for it, the river runs deep,
never ever to heel!
such the spectacle,
tepid dust to...
Ardenous ordeal,
a poignant belligerence,
revenant mistress!
willingly waddle,
presumptions inadequate,
burning delicate!
The sun's prejudice,
icarus' atrocities,
melting my cities!
wondering what is?
crashes and thrashers, is it not?
probing whilst its hot!
A rouse no other,
birds and their pretty feathers,
painful, why bother?
do let it be still,
for it, the river runs deep,
never ever to heel!
such the spectacle,
tepid dust to...
#anxiety
#dreams
#haiku
#confusion
#senryu
97 reads
1 Comment
Collision
when two worlds collide
explosions of lustiness
and calm discipline
explosions of lustiness
and calm discipline
#senryu
#passion
126 reads
1 Comment
Weirdo
i'm a pretty strange one
in comparison to some
just being my self
in comparison to some
just being my self
#identity
#senryu
#SelfDiscovery
115 reads
10 Comments
Cloak Of Invisibility
#senryu
#sensual
96 reads
1 Comment
Stellar Ride
pain desire and love
intergalactic triad
enjoying the ride
intergalactic triad
enjoying the ride
#BDSM
#senryu
128 reads
1 Comment
Senry#1
I am just so over
people are so uninteresting
I need to go pee
people are so uninteresting
I need to go pee
#mirror
#confessional
#myself
#WritingPoetry
#senryu
64 reads
2 Comments
Stereo Typical
#BDSM
#senryu
127 reads
2 Comments
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