Poems About Responsibility Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about responsibility seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
I_was_rare_once
RareFaction
RareFaction
Poem Published
20th Apr 2024 8:15am
20th Apr 2024 8:15am
If the world gave up...
If the world gave up,
I would still be fighting.
Because I love to love.
Fuck what the world says:
"Love means only some."
"love isn't worth the hate."
I love the silver linings.
If the world gave up,
I would still be standing.
I broke the chains of shame and crying.
Or I am older now, but the world is older.
Though even elders make cracks in the pavements walked by youth.
If the world gave up,
I would be tempted.
Making the most is hard, I know.
But if the world went ghost, I would...
I would still be fighting.
Because I love to love.
Fuck what the world says:
"Love means only some."
"love isn't worth the hate."
I love the silver linings.
If the world gave up,
I would still be standing.
I broke the chains of shame and crying.
Or I am older now, but the world is older.
Though even elders make cracks in the pavements walked by youth.
If the world gave up,
I would be tempted.
Making the most is hard, I know.
But if the world went ghost, I would...
#morality
#peace
#responsibility #TruthOfLife
#responsibility #TruthOfLife
210 reads
2 Comments
LostViking
Lost Viking
Lost Viking
Poem Published
16th Apr 2024 4:28pm
16th Apr 2024 4:28pm
Sniper Files #3 The Kill
As the moon hung low in the night sky, casting shadows across the deserted alley, I watched them from the rooftop opposite the dimly lit apartment building. The general's daughter, Olena, stood on the balcony, her silhouette joined by that of her lover, Andrei. They seemed lost in each other, unaware of the danger lurking in the darkness below.
I adjusted the scope on my rifle, my breath steady despite the adrenaline coursing through my veins. This was the moment I had trained for, the mission I had been assigned by my superiors. But as I stared through the crosshairs, doubt...
I adjusted the scope on my rifle, my breath steady despite the adrenaline coursing through my veins. This was the moment I had trained for, the mission I had been assigned by my superiors. But as I stared through the crosshairs, doubt...
#sex
#murder
#war #responsibility
#war #responsibility
243 reads
2 Comments
Kementic1
Poem Published
9th Apr 2024 9:50pm
9th Apr 2024 9:50pm
Final Battle*
Final Battle*
I have worn many hats and played many parts
and made numerous costume changes in my various roles
Sadly, first hand one day I will know "for whom the bell tolls"
until then I will cherish the good in a bad day if I have any smarts
In this lifetime, I have learn a few things
like the fact all 7 billion of us are flawed human beings
And when my back is against the wall
my best move is to drop my knees and pray to stand tall
that the written words of fools and sages
both begin on...
I have worn many hats and played many parts
and made numerous costume changes in my various roles
Sadly, first hand one day I will know "for whom the bell tolls"
until then I will cherish the good in a bad day if I have any smarts
In this lifetime, I have learn a few things
like the fact all 7 billion of us are flawed human beings
And when my back is against the wall
my best move is to drop my knees and pray to stand tall
that the written words of fools and sages
both begin on...
#death
#fate
#aging #responsibility
#aging #responsibility
203 reads
2 Comments
MidnightSonneteer
Poem Published
4th Apr 2024 8:09pm
4th Apr 2024 8:09pm
Brand New Illiteracy
With no more reverence for script
we are like the Eloi now
amid old books which won't endow
aloof cerebra ill equipped
to see the future much improved
from Anthropocentric shambles
and apocalyptic brambles
no lords of order have approved
for any Eden garden plot
on this or any other Earth,
steadfast for merriment and mirth
and by no petrodollar bought.
Come what may...we must ever read
if from that doom we would be freed.
we are like the Eloi now
amid old books which won't endow
aloof cerebra ill equipped
to see the future much improved
from Anthropocentric shambles
and apocalyptic brambles
no lords of order have approved
for any Eden garden plot
on this or any other Earth,
steadfast for merriment and mirth
and by no petrodollar bought.
Come what may...we must ever read
if from that doom we would be freed.
#CallToAction
#freedom
#responsibility #reading
#responsibility #reading
166 reads
4 Comments
MidnightSonneteer
Poem Published
21st Mar 2024 2:09pm
21st Mar 2024 2:09pm
MAGA
They've got a trigger finger itch
the likes of which you ought believe
are the first person shooter glitch
installed since Adam first beat Eve
and bruised that finger in the act
but blamed it all on the lady
since testosterone negates fact
and proceeds to call it shady.
Yet some of us are poison free
and see abuse through neutral eyes,
to mark susceptibility,
which bullies see as their next prize,
(in a one on one conspectus)...
but when meek numbers grow in size
those fuckers will respect us,
and all the...
the likes of which you ought believe
are the first person shooter glitch
installed since Adam first beat Eve
and bruised that finger in the act
but blamed it all on the lady
since testosterone negates fact
and proceeds to call it shady.
Yet some of us are poison free
and see abuse through neutral eyes,
to mark susceptibility,
which bullies see as their next prize,
(in a one on one conspectus)...
but when meek numbers grow in size
those fuckers will respect us,
and all the...
#politics
#PopCulture
#morality #responsibility
#morality #responsibility
148 reads
3 Comments
anandosen
Poem Published
5th Mar 2024 9:06am
5th Mar 2024 9:06am
Telemachus
Thou attained divinity and taught us-
Like my father and Telemachus.
Thou may not be now with us-
Yet feel thou along with us.
Without thou we could not know-
God, The Mother or Odeyssus.
Love thou so much and thy thoughts-
Bless us to rise much above us.
Like my father and Telemachus.
Thou may not be now with us-
Yet feel thou along with us.
Without thou we could not know-
God, The Mother or Odeyssus.
Love thou so much and thy thoughts-
Bless us to rise much above us.
#father
#memories
#responsibility
102 reads
0 Comments
MidnightSonneteer
Poem Published
4th Mar 2024 5:09pm
4th Mar 2024 5:09pm
Poor, Poor, MAGA...
#cars
#travel
#freedom
#responsibility
#ThrillSeeking
94 reads
3 Comments
buddhakitty
Poem Published
25th Feb 2024 4:19pm
25th Feb 2024 4:19pm
peace, grace and mercy
moving towards
it
through indescribable
tiredness
captured by
sadness as pure as
any holy relic
in the distance
it waits
waits
waits like nostalgia
of an old black and
white movie
I will find it...
eventually
find it maybe more
towards the end
then now
but I know it's out
there
and when I find it
I will sit
light a
smoke
watch the sky collect
clouds like a child
gathering...
it
through indescribable
tiredness
captured by
sadness as pure as
any holy relic
in the distance
it waits
waits
waits like nostalgia
of an old black and
white movie
I will find it...
eventually
find it maybe more
towards the end
then now
but I know it's out
there
and when I find it
I will sit
light a
smoke
watch the sky collect
clouds like a child
gathering...
#responsibility
105 reads
6 Comments
MySmile
Besma
Besma
Poem Published
22nd Feb 2024 9:22pm
22nd Feb 2024 9:22pm
Retired Souls In Rhyme Confide
I fear as I drip my word
Teardrops would be overheard
No verse shall set its rhythm or whine
I dread my anguish is seen as I rhyme
Whatever deep into my soul unable to mute
I wholly surrender to the magic of the flute
To bring the sublime into the mundane is insane
My world of poetry, in your glossary no word for strain
Blind to the divine truth we wander astray
Tempted by sick feelings we fall an easy prey
Of all the stages, one and only age
When the Self falls into the clutches of rage
Granted is the time to ponder and reap ...
Teardrops would be overheard
No verse shall set its rhythm or whine
I dread my anguish is seen as I rhyme
Whatever deep into my soul unable to mute
I wholly surrender to the magic of the flute
To bring the sublime into the mundane is insane
My world of poetry, in your glossary no word for strain
Blind to the divine truth we wander astray
Tempted by sick feelings we fall an easy prey
Of all the stages, one and only age
When the Self falls into the clutches of rage
Granted is the time to ponder and reap ...
#spiritual
#LifeChangingMoment
#MyInspiration
#SelfReflection
#responsibility
121 reads
2 Comments
athar
Poem Published
22nd Feb 2024 00:49am
22nd Feb 2024 00:49am
Wake Up!
Time marches on, relentless, unstirred,
Unaware of events,
Events that might alter
The very essence of our shared realm.
The cosmic web shifts, threads anew,
Neither the present
Nor the future
Can claim certainty's helm.
A mist obscures our collective sight,
Save for a few who stand in the light.
Fed with spoonfuls of crafted tales,
Our minds shaped to fit their scales.
We wander through life's foggy veil,
Like somnambulists on a well-trodden trail.
Conditioned beings in an endless cycle,
To...
Unaware of events,
Events that might alter
The very essence of our shared realm.
The cosmic web shifts, threads anew,
Neither the present
Nor the future
Can claim certainty's helm.
A mist obscures our collective sight,
Save for a few who stand in the light.
Fed with spoonfuls of crafted tales,
Our minds shaped to fit their scales.
We wander through life's foggy veil,
Like somnambulists on a well-trodden trail.
Conditioned beings in an endless cycle,
To...
#conflict
#secrets
#politics
#freedom
#responsibility
100 reads
0 Comments
buddhakitty
Poem Published
10th Feb 2024 6:47pm
10th Feb 2024 6:47pm
reality testing
the future that this became
is not so bright and shiny
as when it was seen from
the past
(where are the flying
cars?)
is not so bright and shiny
as when it was seen from
the past
(where are the flying
cars?)
#freedom
#responsibility
145 reads
8 Comments
Nizana
Lauryn
Lauryn
Poem Published
28th Jan 2024 6:16pm
28th Jan 2024 6:16pm
Love Letter from Joseph
January 26, 2024
Lauryn,
I am filled with an overwhelming sense of gratitude for the love we share. We're not naļve. We see our pasts littered with mistakes and missteps. I want you to know that my love for you is unconditional, a force that transcends the errors of yesterday.
You know this about me by now. I've taken love from many women not because it would be lasting or right but because it was easy. Yours, however, is a love that is right. You guide me to a better version of myself. I've wandered down paths of convenience, mistaking physical connection for...
Lauryn,
I am filled with an overwhelming sense of gratitude for the love we share. We're not naļve. We see our pasts littered with mistakes and missteps. I want you to know that my love for you is unconditional, a force that transcends the errors of yesterday.
You know this about me by now. I've taken love from many women not because it would be lasting or right but because it was easy. Yours, however, is a love that is right. You guide me to a better version of myself. I've wandered down paths of convenience, mistaking physical connection for...
#love
#responsibility
360 reads
3 Comments
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