Poems About Responsibility Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about responsibility seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
SonderNinja
BenjaminEC
BenjaminEC
Poem Published
23rd Mar 2025 00:25am
23rd Mar 2025 00:25am
Roadside Manner
This highway air
is thick & bleeding.
A yellow sleep
in curt despair.
Windows down
for morning dew
on hard thistle blue.
A red flag noon
fuming mindful ooze
into white-hot stew.
A smile so sweetly
sang the horizon-
miles over my head
on a mobile bed…
"oh no, child,
THIS is the dream,
you are still in very real danger"
our...
#freedom
#FreeVerse
#responsibility
#travel
#drugs
49 reads
1 Comment
Duice
Poem Published
14th Mar 2025 4:02am
14th Mar 2025 4:02am
Happy Born Day
Letter to my first
I unleashed you
into the world
with the snip of a natal chord
With tenacity we fell
in love at first sight
even then I knew this world
thru me was yours
Three played together
as I watched you
grow strong
from a feeble introduction
To hold your head high
looking up to me
a child-father
no prerequisite nor question
Seems I did the teaching
but truth is
I learned myself
in sacrifice thru you
Re-lived from first step
to remove training wheels ...
I unleashed you
into the world
with the snip of a natal chord
With tenacity we fell
in love at first sight
even then I knew this world
thru me was yours
Three played together
as I watched you
grow strong
from a feeble introduction
To hold your head high
looking up to me
a child-father
no prerequisite nor question
Seems I did the teaching
but truth is
I learned myself
in sacrifice thru you
Re-lived from first step
to remove training wheels ...
#children
#memories
#responsibility #son
#responsibility #son
59 reads
2 Comments
drivelicious13
alon aLion
alon aLion
Poem Published
13th Mar 2025 10:53pm
13th Mar 2025 10:53pm
It Seems like I should write....... a POEM ?!?
It Seems .................
like I should write
a POEM
where should I go?
Into Love?
Sex?
Surprise?
Betrayal?
unexpected risk?
elusive Success?
the possibility of folly
the light
at end
of a Conqueror's tunnel?
why a poem?
why not merely live?
create and destroy
with every move
like every single
organism groping clumsily ...
like I should write
a POEM
where should I go?
Into Love?
Sex?
Surprise?
Betrayal?
unexpected risk?
elusive Success?
the possibility of folly
the light
at end
of a Conqueror's tunnel?
why a poem?
why not merely live?
create and destroy
with every move
like every single
organism groping clumsily ...
#anxiety
#frustration
#regret
#responsibility
#SelfWorth
64 reads
0 Comments
Solomon_Song
Poem Published
13th Mar 2025 7:07pm
13th Mar 2025 7:07pm
THE FATHER OF HER CHILD
#father
#motherhood
#responsibility #sex
#responsibility #sex
64 reads
0 Comments
Dan_ONeill
Dan ONeill
Dan ONeill
Poem Published
5th Mar 2025 1:43pm
5th Mar 2025 1:43pm
A Modest Return
The dupe prefers a midnight shade to snare a single hide,
Drafts the freely given dark for ends you long denied.
Doesn’t need your genuflection, yet demands your sole attention,
Waited long to seize your mind, your behaviour modified.
Stumble if you want to, but I’ve seen it overtake you,
Now you forfeit what was once true,
For a modest return.
Scriptoriums in dusty hills announce the new diversion,
The flicker show grants its favours to the picture-perfect person,
Flung afar from every platform, deft manoeuvres make us conform,
We can...
Drafts the freely given dark for ends you long denied.
Doesn’t need your genuflection, yet demands your sole attention,
Waited long to seize your mind, your behaviour modified.
Stumble if you want to, but I’ve seen it overtake you,
Now you forfeit what was once true,
For a modest return.
Scriptoriums in dusty hills announce the new diversion,
The flicker show grants its favours to the picture-perfect person,
Flung afar from every platform, deft manoeuvres make us conform,
We can...
#culture
#identity
#morality
#politics
#responsibility
50 reads
0 Comments
MidnightSonneteer
Poem Published
1st Mar 2025 8:36pm
1st Mar 2025 8:36pm
Liabilities
Bill Burr has billionaires dead to rights, because of eminent domain logic.
Is not justifiable homicide, justifiable, because of the ascertained risk to the community?
-The Midnight Sonneteer
“The needs of the many outweigh the needs of the few, or the one.”
-Surak of Vulcan
Is not justifiable homicide, justifiable, because of the ascertained risk to the community?
-The Midnight Sonneteer
“The needs of the many outweigh the needs of the few, or the one.”
-Surak of Vulcan
#culture
#morality
#politics #responsibility
#politics #responsibility
125 reads
18 Comments
Knotshaker
Poem Published
1st Mar 2025 2:00pm
1st Mar 2025 2:00pm
Walls
Look at these walls. They’re everywhere decreed.
Inside me. Inside you. Between us too.
‘tween my neighbors and me, walls intercede.
Houses of walls, fences blocking the view.
South at the border they build chunks of walls.
Hate chunks and fear chunks materialized
Steely expressions of bigoted drawls.
Essence of lynch mobs surrealialized.
A dike is a wall. It holds back the sea
Minds can hold walls that don’t need installing.
Billionaire dikes holding back you and me.
They mask the good; they hide the appalling.
...
Inside me. Inside you. Between us too.
‘tween my neighbors and me, walls intercede.
Houses of walls, fences blocking the view.
South at the border they build chunks of walls.
Hate chunks and fear chunks materialized
Steely expressions of bigoted drawls.
Essence of lynch mobs surrealialized.
A dike is a wall. It holds back the sea
Minds can hold walls that don’t need installing.
Billionaire dikes holding back you and me.
They mask the good; they hide the appalling.
...
#identity
#morality
#politics
#responsibility
#tradition
86 reads
2 Comments
Duice
Poem Published
27th Feb 2025 00:08am
27th Feb 2025 00:08am
Alpha Male
Otherworldly lucid
envisioned insights mosaic
writing clairvoyant entranced
Quill expansive unapologetic
in complex worlds
to masculine stance
Livid thoroughbred
baptised in fire honored in flowers
of past horror stories
Survived injury carried by One
mirrored in backwoods
as night turn dark to gory
DUICE
in solidarity surveying eyes
are of no consequence its personal
Every cut healed to scar
how the star was born
vitality endured unmerciful
To reject what taps my strength
bound to weakness ...
envisioned insights mosaic
writing clairvoyant entranced
Quill expansive unapologetic
in complex worlds
to masculine stance
Livid thoroughbred
baptised in fire honored in flowers
of past horror stories
Survived injury carried by One
mirrored in backwoods
as night turn dark to gory
DUICE
in solidarity surveying eyes
are of no consequence its personal
Every cut healed to scar
how the star was born
vitality endured unmerciful
To reject what taps my strength
bound to weakness ...
#emotions
#respect
#responsibility
#sacrifice
#strength
97 reads
1 Comment
A_hidden_talent
Poem Published
25th Feb 2025 5:54pm
25th Feb 2025 5:54pm
Ghosted
I know it's been a while
But I haven't forgotten your name
I can' only wonder..
If you've done the same?
Yeah, we've both been busy
With stuff at home, and our jobs
I have to let you know...
Seeing your pretty face makes my heart throb!
I thought communication is a two-way street
Though I feel like I'm on a one way
Please let me know if it's a dead end..
And I'll tell my heart to stray..
I use my phone for work
So I'm hesitant to share..
But because I don't text or call
Doesn't mean that I...
But I haven't forgotten your name
I can' only wonder..
If you've done the same?
Yeah, we've both been busy
With stuff at home, and our jobs
I have to let you know...
Seeing your pretty face makes my heart throb!
I thought communication is a two-way street
Though I feel like I'm on a one way
Please let me know if it's a dead end..
And I'll tell my heart to stray..
I use my phone for work
So I'm hesitant to share..
But because I don't text or call
Doesn't mean that I...
#love
#relationships
#responsibility
122 reads
10 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
21st Feb 2025 1:47am
21st Feb 2025 1:47am
Life is short live it
Let's take a few seconds to let what I've said be an eye opener, 👁️👁️ for you to just THINK, If you could go back in your own thoughts, for just a minute I want you to be honest with thyself. FOR you should never let your emotions, and feelings lead you on your decisions. For if you could go back in time and really analyze, the depths of your own journeys and travels and walks. Within your own relationships in the past, for what would you change on how, you handled some situations, rather wrong or right. I want you to be honest and truthful, with your answers as...
#friendship
#LifeCycle
#memories
#relationships
#responsibility
98 reads
0 Comments
FrozenFlight
Poem Published
14th Feb 2025 00:25am
14th Feb 2025 00:25am
Leeroy's Burden
The many stand upon the hill,
They watch as the lands burn,
Their homes, Their lives, All they were,
For it is all they can do.
They must stand and hold,
Thus is their duty,
The oaths they bear,
A pain they choose.
For they wait for the time,
The time to march,
The time to fight,
The time to exist.
For such is the Soldier's call,
They burn their lives,
Abandon their homes,
Forsake their hope,
All to serve the ones they leave behind.
They watch as the lands burn,
Their homes, Their lives, All they were,
For it is all they can do.
They must stand and hold,
Thus is their duty,
The oaths they bear,
A pain they choose.
For they wait for the time,
The time to march,
The time to fight,
The time to exist.
For such is the Soldier's call,
They burn their lives,
Abandon their homes,
Forsake their hope,
All to serve the ones they leave behind.
#responsibility
60 reads
0 Comments
moon_bather
Poem Published
13th Feb 2025 3:04am
13th Feb 2025 3:04am
Elon Musk Can Suck My Dick
The crumbling empire
Won’t stand
Much longer
The fortress walls
Are breaking, oh
So much faster
to you propagators
breeding lies
among blind eyes
keep pushing bullshit
keep having your fits
to succumb
to your master
OH...
ELON
you weak little insignificant delusional bitch
think you're important yet
you're just a little BITCH
I wave good-BYE
We do not need you
we recognize your nothingness
We wave good-BYE
Everyone is aware
of your bullshit ...
Won’t stand
Much longer
The fortress walls
Are breaking, oh
So much faster
to you propagators
breeding lies
among blind eyes
keep pushing bullshit
keep having your fits
to succumb
to your master
OH...
ELON
you weak little insignificant delusional bitch
think you're important yet
you're just a little BITCH
I wave good-BYE
We do not need you
we recognize your nothingness
We wave good-BYE
Everyone is aware
of your bullshit ...
#CallToAction
#freedom
#identity
#manipulation
#responsibility
120 reads
4 Comments
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