Poems About Religion by Top Critiquers
#religion
Poems about religion by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
Jeebus
I'm dead in a ditch.
Jeebus did it because I believed.
He's a soul sucker, on his knees.
Kissing the people's feet.
I wish his fishing boat,
Would stop carrying me.
I'm 'bout to bounce,
And set myself free!
Free like the birds riding the sun,
Not to tomorrow.
I aint no Cinderelli dressed in yelly.
I'm the destroyer!
Leaving you all dead in ditches.
I suck your soul!
I sever heads!
Mindless. Tweeking.
Faith is my meth.
Now let me heal you,
With the...
Jeebus did it because I believed.
He's a soul sucker, on his knees.
Kissing the people's feet.
I wish his fishing boat,
Would stop carrying me.
I'm 'bout to bounce,
And set myself free!
Free like the birds riding the sun,
Not to tomorrow.
I aint no Cinderelli dressed in yelly.
I'm the destroyer!
Leaving you all dead in ditches.
I suck your soul!
I sever heads!
Mindless. Tweeking.
Faith is my meth.
Now let me heal you,
With the...
#funny
#religion
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Sunday Swan Song
It was the piano that finally made me cry.
I’ve been dispassionate
(to say the least)
about this closure,
knowing that eras end and life goes on –
impatient to rip off the bandage.
Perhaps even a little bitter
about all the years I tried to help
people
think
bigger
even though my faith never completely fit
inside their box.
I think I gave it my best.
I guess they did too –
nurturing me and my kids
through all kinds of storms,
(even when I wasn’t easy to love) ...
I’ve been dispassionate
(to say the least)
about this closure,
knowing that eras end and life goes on –
impatient to rip off the bandage.
Perhaps even a little bitter
about all the years I tried to help
people
think
bigger
even though my faith never completely fit
inside their box.
I think I gave it my best.
I guess they did too –
nurturing me and my kids
through all kinds of storms,
(even when I wasn’t easy to love) ...
#death
#friendship
#music #religion
#music #religion
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FORGIVENESS
NEEDED
I've always heard that
even angels make mistakes
and everyone guesses
that the devil does all
the time. I know I, hopefully,
fall somewhere between
these two entities. I would
dare to make a guess that
we all do, not an accusation,
just a thought.
If it is true that the best
and worst of us makes mistakes
it must follow that we all,
at one time or another, need
forgiveness. I see that
the line at the confession booth
is long but I will patiently wait.
HOW ABOUT YOU?
I've always heard that
even angels make mistakes
and everyone guesses
that the devil does all
the time. I know I, hopefully,
fall somewhere between
these two entities. I would
dare to make a guess that
we all do, not an accusation,
just a thought.
If it is true that the best
and worst of us makes mistakes
it must follow that we all,
at one time or another, need
forgiveness. I see that
the line at the confession booth
is long but I will patiently wait.
HOW ABOUT YOU?
#religion
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Mother Nature V Human Nature
Episodes of High Strangeness (Mother Nature V Human Nature)
#religion
#spiritual
#TruthOfLife
#pagan
#tradition
542 reads
6 Comments
Canonical Mimetics
Canonical mimetics.
Methodical, majestic.
Performable perplexes.
Remarkable, hermetic.
Hierarchical agenda.
Apocryphal, presented.
Inaugural momentum.
Denominal, exemplar.
Historical assessment.
Demonstrable, accepted.
Inaudible objective.
Rhetorical, prolepsis.
Unstoppable kinetics.
Proportional, extensive.
Personable potential.
Conformable, tremendous.
Phenomenal endeavor.
Transportable, credentials.
Affordable sequester.
Importable, intended.
Adorable...
Methodical, majestic.
Performable perplexes.
Remarkable, hermetic.
Hierarchical agenda.
Apocryphal, presented.
Inaugural momentum.
Denominal, exemplar.
Historical assessment.
Demonstrable, accepted.
Inaudible objective.
Rhetorical, prolepsis.
Unstoppable kinetics.
Proportional, extensive.
Personable potential.
Conformable, tremendous.
Phenomenal endeavor.
Transportable, credentials.
Affordable sequester.
Importable, intended.
Adorable...
#LifeStruggles
#religion
#spiritual
#rhyming
#humankind
203 reads
2 Comments
I Pity
Both sides killing each other
They both deserve to die
Since both do not bother
To stop and wonder why
Why is blood spilled each day
For handful meaningless sands
When killing can stop today
And extend peaceful hands
They kill in the name of Right
Blind in the nature of Gods
Thinking they know the light
An illusional psychotic frauds
Any such god would denounce
What is in his name is done
Yet they kill and announce
What they did is for the...
They both deserve to die
Since both do not bother
To stop and wonder why
Why is blood spilled each day
For handful meaningless sands
When killing can stop today
And extend peaceful hands
They kill in the name of Right
Blind in the nature of Gods
Thinking they know the light
An illusional psychotic frauds
Any such god would denounce
What is in his name is done
Yet they kill and announce
What they did is for the...
#conflict
#death
#religion
#violence
#war
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15 Comments
Bathroom Church
The reason I don’t go to church, because it’s full of shit
Honestly, a real man can recognize a sucka-ass pimp,
“Twisting the message of the Bible into his own word play
Seasoning the congregation for Hell every motherfuckin Sunday,
“Bible study Wednesday, fish fry Friday
Don’t come knocking on my door to preach that shit no day,
“I might be watching my Hellraiser marathon or trying to fuck
I will answer the door asshole naked and ask ‘what’s up?’
“Straight from the visual they will know shit ain’t right
And it...
Honestly, a real man can recognize a sucka-ass pimp,
“Twisting the message of the Bible into his own word play
Seasoning the congregation for Hell every motherfuckin Sunday,
“Bible study Wednesday, fish fry Friday
Don’t come knocking on my door to preach that shit no day,
“I might be watching my Hellraiser marathon or trying to fuck
I will answer the door asshole naked and ask ‘what’s up?’
“Straight from the visual they will know shit ain’t right
And it...
#betrayal
#religion
168 reads
5 Comments
The Day Of Reckoning (COTS)
To know the mark of the beast, look upon they embedded of thy kissed face
Weaken mentalities to deal with the channeling of self, yet a two legged entity walking among thy human race
Royalty has pressed upon the lip's civilizations taste
Rage festering from the fountains of a forgotten livid youth
The is the eighth eclipsed of the soul denounced living in the darkness of denied truth
Reliving moments of stolen time from a descend into chaos formed its own new rebirth
Until...
Weaken mentalities to deal with the channeling of self, yet a two legged entity walking among thy human race
Royalty has pressed upon the lip's civilizations taste
Rage festering from the fountains of a forgotten livid youth
The is the eighth eclipsed of the soul denounced living in the darkness of denied truth
Reliving moments of stolen time from a descend into chaos formed its own new rebirth
Until...
#faith
#pagan
#philosophical
#religion
#spiritual
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5 Comments
If I taught in Louisiana
If I taught in Louisiana
you best believe I'd know the score,
I post the ten commandments in Hebrew
and hang a mezuzah by the door
The kids could sit on a pentagram rug
in the lotus position if they choose,'
Unitarian talks and Pagan rites
with inclusion you can't lose
The next mandate is not hard to guess:
Trump's picture on the wall
a breaker of every commandment
the irony lost on each and all
Talk of separation of church and state
would only be met with anger and hate
should I be forced to hang doctrine...
you best believe I'd know the score,
I post the ten commandments in Hebrew
and hang a mezuzah by the door
The kids could sit on a pentagram rug
in the lotus position if they choose,'
Unitarian talks and Pagan rites
with inclusion you can't lose
The next mandate is not hard to guess:
Trump's picture on the wall
a breaker of every commandment
the irony lost on each and all
Talk of separation of church and state
would only be met with anger and hate
should I be forced to hang doctrine...
#America
#religion
#school
201 reads
6 Comments
a little perspective, dear, she says
religion causes more rows and
arguments and wars than an
elderly couple over breakfast about
how best to cook their eggs
arguments and wars than an
elderly couple over breakfast about
how best to cook their eggs
#religion
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1 Comment
Creativity
Once upon a while. . .
When there was only the Word (John 1: 1-3)
Heavens and earth began the style (Gen 1:1)
and so began creativity's birth.
In seven short days
All we observe and know to be
God created in ways.....
unknown to us,
but His creativeness we do see.
Once upon a today. . .
there were people with imagination:
sculpting, painting, writing away,
and acting with great dissertation.
In a few short thoughts
all they saw and didn't see,
they created many knots
to fill in...
When there was only the Word (John 1: 1-3)
Heavens and earth began the style (Gen 1:1)
and so began creativity's birth.
In seven short days
All we observe and know to be
God created in ways.....
unknown to us,
but His creativeness we do see.
Once upon a today. . .
there were people with imagination:
sculpting, painting, writing away,
and acting with great dissertation.
In a few short thoughts
all they saw and didn't see,
they created many knots
to fill in...
#religion
#Christian
801 reads
17 Comments
please don't be gay (for the Dead Gods comp)

#hate
#religion
#SelfWorth
159 reads
5 Comments
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