Poems About Relationships Seeking Honest Critique
#relationships
Poems about relationships seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Your cuticles are sexy
She was a cutie
Young, hot and had an extraordinary appetite for sex
She knew her way around my body and knew what I enjoyed
There was just one problem...
She had a disgusting habit of frequently and repeatedly gnawing on her skin
Most of the time it was her cuticles or her hand
The area would become red & raw
Many times the affected area would bleed
She had a disease called Dermatophagia
In the beginning of our time together it wasn't bad
After several months her hands looked like someone cut & chopped her skin up with a...
Young, hot and had an extraordinary appetite for sex
She knew her way around my body and knew what I enjoyed
There was just one problem...
She had a disgusting habit of frequently and repeatedly gnawing on her skin
Most of the time it was her cuticles or her hand
The area would become red & raw
Many times the affected area would bleed
She had a disease called Dermatophagia
In the beginning of our time together it wasn't bad
After several months her hands looked like someone cut & chopped her skin up with a...
#dark
#MentalHealth
#relationships
#satirical
#suffering
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4 Comments
Baby it's you
So many times when I look or hear about people being lonely
I have a feeling of sadness deep inside
It makes me wonder if I would have been alone, before I found you
What would happen if you turned around and said goodbye
Honey it's you
you're what I'm living for
I have it all, nothing more
right from the start when I found you
Baby it's you
you were the one for me
the one who's been making me see
the world with you is such a brighter place
I now realize it's you
you are my brightest star
whether you're...
I have a feeling of sadness deep inside
It makes me wonder if I would have been alone, before I found you
What would happen if you turned around and said goodbye
Honey it's you
you're what I'm living for
I have it all, nothing more
right from the start when I found you
Baby it's you
you were the one for me
the one who's been making me see
the world with you is such a brighter place
I now realize it's you
you are my brightest star
whether you're...
#loneliness
#love
#lyrics
#relationships
#romantic
116 reads
9 Comments
Burning This Shit Down Together
She have had four kids, ten piercings and major tattoo work
But refuse to do anal, because she says the shit hurt,
“Even the tooth fairy checking children’s pillows when they sleep
Why don’t the motherfucka go to a graveyard and dig up dead people teeth,
“Bitches think sympathy is the same as accountability
Then shed a tear for me when I’m doggystyle deep in the pussy,
“Let that animalistic attitude come out when howling at the moon
Because everyday life will be fucking her and is not cuming no time soon,
“Some women...
But refuse to do anal, because she says the shit hurt,
“Even the tooth fairy checking children’s pillows when they sleep
Why don’t the motherfucka go to a graveyard and dig up dead people teeth,
“Bitches think sympathy is the same as accountability
Then shed a tear for me when I’m doggystyle deep in the pussy,
“Let that animalistic attitude come out when howling at the moon
Because everyday life will be fucking her and is not cuming no time soon,
“Some women...
#men
#relationships
#women
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2 Comments
Personal Thoughts
It's me again the story teller of unspoken words ✍️ What I would like to know from thyself own personal experiences, do you remember when you had a disagreement with someone, that we would just pick up the phone and dial the number. 🤔 Yeah I know that times have changed over the years 😔 with this new wave of communications. BUT yet do you remember what it use to be like to just talk, about what went wrong with just talking to someone. 😡 Now we just go on a web site and voice our thoughts and opinions, to the whole world 🌎 about our situations in...
#honesty
#kindness
#relationships
#respect
#support
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Marriage Stuff
We come and go
Independent contractors of a life
Watching the news together
A slow motion work in progress
Together many years
Dog walks, family stuff, sharing
A popsicle after dinner
Coconut for her, lemon for me
Moments in a marriage
Affection, gentle touch, sharing
Respect, dignity, love
Independent contractors of a life
Watching the news together
A slow motion work in progress
Together many years
Dog walks, family stuff, sharing
A popsicle after dinner
Coconut for her, lemon for me
Moments in a marriage
Affection, gentle touch, sharing
Respect, dignity, love
#love
#marriage
#philosophical
#relationships
#TruthOfLife
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14 Comments
Please Vanish!
Why don't you disappear
Sick of your face each year
Listen to me my dear
The end is growing near
You have tried to threaten me
You have tried to destroy me
I'm stronger then you thought I would be
Open your mouth, taste my sweet addiction
Come a little closer, endure my depraved affliction
Accuracy & outcome, guided this conviction
No time for remorse, another crucifixion
Eat the bite
Rinse it down
Run for cover
Stroke the ground
Within is the rival
Must annihilate, for survival
...
Sick of your face each year
Listen to me my dear
The end is growing near
You have tried to threaten me
You have tried to destroy me
I'm stronger then you thought I would be
Open your mouth, taste my sweet addiction
Come a little closer, endure my depraved affliction
Accuracy & outcome, guided this conviction
No time for remorse, another crucifixion
Eat the bite
Rinse it down
Run for cover
Stroke the ground
Within is the rival
Must annihilate, for survival
...
#dark
#hate
#murder #relationships
#murder #relationships
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12 Comments
I woke up surprised
I remember it vividly
It was all about forgetting everything
That night it happened was a first of many
By the end, I took more than twenty
It was all about forgetting everything
That night it happened was a first of many
By the end, I took more than twenty
#relationships
#religion
#SelfHarm
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Rain On Her Lips
Oh, that morning dew on her lips.
Taste of her I long on my lips.
Let it be known to her,
that she is special to me.
Oh, that morning rain from her eyes.
Sight of her tears of joy in her eyes.
Let it be known to her,
that she can cry before me.
Taste of her I long on my lips.
Let it be known to her,
that she is special to me.
Oh, that morning rain from her eyes.
Sight of her tears of joy in her eyes.
Let it be known to her,
that she can cry before me.
#love
#relationships
#surreal
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1 Comment
Booby Trapped

#erotic
#girlfriend
#lust
#relationships
#sex
218 reads
13 Comments
Please Disappear
Wake up, I want your lies
Don't die, it won't be nice
Is that what I've been waiting for?
Now I saw your face
You awoke!
You didn't die, it isn't so wonderful after all
Is that what I've been waiting for?
No.
Please disappear forever
Don't die, it won't be nice
Is that what I've been waiting for?
Now I saw your face
You awoke!
You didn't die, it isn't so wonderful after all
Is that what I've been waiting for?
No.
Please disappear forever
#death
#disappointment
#LifeChangingMoment
#regret
#relationships
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4 Comments
Wildlife
I know it's hard this way
navigating two maps
so differently, living
with a lamb filled
with uncertainty
and a jaguar who
vanishes without
question or reason
but my darling you
always put a smile
on my face, for two
years we have lived
this wildlife many
refuse to recognise.
navigating two maps
so differently, living
with a lamb filled
with uncertainty
and a jaguar who
vanishes without
question or reason
but my darling you
always put a smile
on my face, for two
years we have lived
this wildlife many
refuse to recognise.
#LGBT
#love
#polyamory #relationships
#polyamory #relationships
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3 Comments
A Toxic Drowning
They were married for a very long time
Minimal love for one another
Both daydreamed about the perfect crime.
A poor swimmer she was at best
He thought of submerging her deep
An expeditious agonizing death.
He enjoyed her cooking and anything she made
She thought of poisoning his food
Wild Mushrooms, drain cleaners or a can of raid.
One day they went walking on the beach
The ocean was violent
Waves crashing within an arms reach
She made a picnic basket full of joy
Pie, sandwiches and soda ...
Minimal love for one another
Both daydreamed about the perfect crime.
A poor swimmer she was at best
He thought of submerging her deep
An expeditious agonizing death.
He enjoyed her cooking and anything she made
She thought of poisoning his food
Wild Mushrooms, drain cleaners or a can of raid.
One day they went walking on the beach
The ocean was violent
Waves crashing within an arms reach
She made a picnic basket full of joy
Pie, sandwiches and soda ...
#relationships
#rhyming
#tragedy
102 reads
8 Comments
DU Poetry : Poems About Relationships Seeking Honest Critique