Poems About Relationships Seeking Honest Critique
#relationships
Poems about relationships seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
sick in the head for you
there's an ache when I find,
my self staring at you
your exquisite features,
fire dancing on your lips
can words really speak
your beauty shining on through
behind your beautiful smile
lies a strength, shaped by trial
chocolate brown eyes
strawberry pink lips
all well endowed
for a Love like you
a fiery supernova burning true
a glimpse into something new
for i ache to fill you with Love
that's inspired by none other than you
my self staring at you
your exquisite features,
fire dancing on your lips
can words really speak
your beauty shining on through
behind your beautiful smile
lies a strength, shaped by trial
chocolate brown eyes
strawberry pink lips
all well endowed
for a Love like you
a fiery supernova burning true
a glimpse into something new
for i ache to fill you with Love
that's inspired by none other than you
#love
#relationships
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i want to be yours
is there a way to put into words what i want to say
that you've been the one that's stayed in my head
this entire time, I've thought of you
how maybe there might be a chance to make things right
to show that these demons no longer hold a sway
on the thought i have thinking of you
your chocolate brown eyes
your auburn filled hair
i could never forget, what it felt like to feel
when your text would come up, and all i could almost kneel
in happiness at the thought
to have you in my arms
kiss...
that you've been the one that's stayed in my head
this entire time, I've thought of you
how maybe there might be a chance to make things right
to show that these demons no longer hold a sway
on the thought i have thinking of you
your chocolate brown eyes
your auburn filled hair
i could never forget, what it felt like to feel
when your text would come up, and all i could almost kneel
in happiness at the thought
to have you in my arms
kiss...
#love
#relationships
#redemption
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Could You Be Mine?
Don’t know why,
but thoughts of you keep running through my head lately.
It’s crazy to me how easy it is for me to get swept off my feet by you, should I want you? or should I just forget
about you?.
I can’t shake the feeling nor the thought of you;
I get this electrifying feeling that goes up and down my spine whenever I think of the times I’m around you.
I get oh so breathless I lose touch with reality when I’m near you I can hardly breathe, you really knock me right off my feet.
Can I just have you?,
Can I just be with you?,
Can I...
but thoughts of you keep running through my head lately.
It’s crazy to me how easy it is for me to get swept off my feet by you, should I want you? or should I just forget
about you?.
I can’t shake the feeling nor the thought of you;
I get this electrifying feeling that goes up and down my spine whenever I think of the times I’m around you.
I get oh so breathless I lose touch with reality when I’m near you I can hardly breathe, you really knock me right off my feet.
Can I just have you?,
Can I just be with you?,
Can I...
#relationships
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Our Energies
She is nestled here amongst me,
our energies intertwined
exchanging soft electricity,
nuzzling.
A quiet moment created where space
and time slows,
juxtaposed
with love and longing
amid fears and frailties
that are forever timeless.
She shouldn't have to wonder, nor
should she ever worry in regards
to if we are forever.
But she does, oh she does,
soft and hard she does.
I hold her all the tighter
so she knows my energy is all hers,
pure and bright as the noon day
sun and just as...
our energies intertwined
exchanging soft electricity,
nuzzling.
A quiet moment created where space
and time slows,
juxtaposed
with love and longing
amid fears and frailties
that are forever timeless.
She shouldn't have to wonder, nor
should she ever worry in regards
to if we are forever.
But she does, oh she does,
soft and hard she does.
I hold her all the tighter
so she knows my energy is all hers,
pure and bright as the noon day
sun and just as...
#love
#relationships
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Potential But What About Reality?
Oh forgive me if you can to begin
for being intrigued by motions one might call sin
even if my chances are ever thin
pondering a situation where we both win
Pouring out any strength I may possess
an effort to get rid of this stress
hoping my desires aren't only a mess
you can reveal and get out of that dress
The essence of what makes me a male defined
hoping to bring you to that noteworthy chime
two bodies moving in picturesque rhyme
getting blowing going on in more than the minds
for being intrigued by motions one might call sin
even if my chances are ever thin
pondering a situation where we both win
Pouring out any strength I may possess
an effort to get rid of this stress
hoping my desires aren't only a mess
you can reveal and get out of that dress
The essence of what makes me a male defined
hoping to bring you to that noteworthy chime
two bodies moving in picturesque rhyme
getting blowing going on in more than the minds
#happiness
#love
#relationships #lover
#relationships #lover
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Secrets
Five secrets to ensure
a perfect and good relationship:
It's important to find a man
who has money
to pay your bills
and take care of you.
It's important to find a man
that make you laugh
that make you happy
and be happy with you.
It's important to find a man
to be responsible
who never lies
except to praise
your beauty in the morning.
It's important to find a man
who's good In bed and out of it
who loves to have sex with you!
But the important!
Very important!
The...
a perfect and good relationship:
It's important to find a man
who has money
to pay your bills
and take care of you.
It's important to find a man
that make you laugh
that make you happy
and be happy with you.
It's important to find a man
to be responsible
who never lies
except to praise
your beauty in the morning.
It's important to find a man
who's good In bed and out of it
who loves to have sex with you!
But the important!
Very important!
The...
#men
#relationships
#parody
#satirical
#funny
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Doubts
Lately you only been giving me nothing but doubts
Will I ever measure up?
Will I ever receive the same love I give?
Will I ever be enough of a man, to take your hand and make you the woman of my dreams,
the woman I’ll die for
the woman I’ll do time for
the woman that showed me she cared up until the day I fell
I mean failed to be the one you could come to.
So now I’m only filled with doubts
Do you still love me?
Do you still want this life like we planned in the past?
Do you still want to make what we have last,
until both of us...
Will I ever measure up?
Will I ever receive the same love I give?
Will I ever be enough of a man, to take your hand and make you the woman of my dreams,
the woman I’ll die for
the woman I’ll do time for
the woman that showed me she cared up until the day I fell
I mean failed to be the one you could come to.
So now I’m only filled with doubts
Do you still love me?
Do you still want this life like we planned in the past?
Do you still want to make what we have last,
until both of us...
#love
#relationships
#lover
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Unrequited Soulmate
You are,
my heart, soul, and flower.
My mirrored kin and spirit,
yet looks and kisses unreturned.
You are,
the beating heart of my soul,
still waves of unrequited love
crash, pummeling my psyche.
You are,
my flower whose petals never wilt -
Rather, bloom in my moonlight of solitude,
as you bask in the sunshine of companionship.
You are,
the congenial mate for my soul.
One to draw me close,
one to deny.
my heart, soul, and flower.
My mirrored kin and spirit,
yet looks and kisses unreturned.
You are,
the beating heart of my soul,
still waves of unrequited love
crash, pummeling my psyche.
You are,
my flower whose petals never wilt -
Rather, bloom in my moonlight of solitude,
as you bask in the sunshine of companionship.
You are,
the congenial mate for my soul.
One to draw me close,
one to deny.
#sadness
#love
#relationships
#breakup
#UnrequitedLove
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Couplet of Love & Lust (2nd Version)
Prelude
January 1
poetry of Love and Lust. a couplet are these two
soliloquy of words expressed, I do share with you
imagination inks my lines here in black and white
‘tis a reader’s indulgence, and of mind’s eye delight
most do seek intimacy that Love and Lust provide
romantic and physical with one that they confide
and so my story begins in the prime of Euler’s year ...
January 1
poetry of Love and Lust. a couplet are these two
soliloquy of words expressed, I do share with you
imagination inks my lines here in black and white
‘tis a reader’s indulgence, and of mind’s eye delight
most do seek intimacy that Love and Lust provide
romantic and physical with one that they confide
and so my story begins in the prime of Euler’s year ...
#love
#lust
#relationships
#sex
#erotic
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Something Untouchable
You are something that will always be out of reach to me.
Something I can sense with even blurred consciousness,
though your form is both perfect and clear to me.
Do I know you? Or am I mad in love?
Is this love poem with sails bound for an old flame?
The sea between us is something that makes us untouchable.
Those jade eyes of yours with winking lids,
surely our eyes have embraced, though
not our hands, nor our lips, nor our bodies.
I want nothing more than something of a touch.
Someone to share my tongue, my sweaty...
Something I can sense with even blurred consciousness,
though your form is both perfect and clear to me.
Do I know you? Or am I mad in love?
Is this love poem with sails bound for an old flame?
The sea between us is something that makes us untouchable.
Those jade eyes of yours with winking lids,
surely our eyes have embraced, though
not our hands, nor our lips, nor our bodies.
I want nothing more than something of a touch.
Someone to share my tongue, my sweaty...
#sadness
#love
#relationships
#breakup
#UnrequitedLove
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inks on fire: random sketches 02
time-out
you strangle me by day
entangle me by night
stone-deaf to all i try to say
of my impending flight
your filigree is spent
entrapment cunningless
horizons new my spirit vent
beyond your stunningness
i see the open sea
might i plunge in and drown
perhaps your passion would be free
or silence wear a frown
i grieve for your demise
i wanted us to last
implosive, without compromise,
we sink into the past
© Copyright 2023 February16
by Clyve A. Bowen♫
you strangle me by day
entangle me by night
stone-deaf to all i try to say
of my impending flight
your filigree is spent
entrapment cunningless
horizons new my spirit vent
beyond your stunningness
i see the open sea
might i plunge in and drown
perhaps your passion would be free
or silence wear a frown
i grieve for your demise
i wanted us to last
implosive, without compromise,
we sink into the past
© Copyright 2023 February16
by Clyve A. Bowen♫
#relationships
#breakup
#UnrequitedLove #NaPoWriMo2023
#UnrequitedLove #NaPoWriMo2023
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Yeah It's Over (So Here I Go)
Fast Rant]
I'm tired of the way you act
as if the world is slowing down
but you're still flying through the air
at faster than the speed of sound
if you can't hear the things I say
then maybe you should sit with me
so we can talk about all this
and why it is that I'll be leaving you
[chorus]
yeah it's over
and you should know
if you were sober
well, I'd still go
yeah it's over
and it goes to show
I'm no push-over
ugh!
so here I go
[regular]
I'm giving us another chance
I hope...
I'm tired of the way you act
as if the world is slowing down
but you're still flying through the air
at faster than the speed of sound
if you can't hear the things I say
then maybe you should sit with me
so we can talk about all this
and why it is that I'll be leaving you
[chorus]
yeah it's over
and you should know
if you were sober
well, I'd still go
yeah it's over
and it goes to show
I'm no push-over
ugh!
so here I go
[regular]
I'm giving us another chance
I hope...
#relationships
#breakup
#addiction #denial
#addiction #denial
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DU Poetry : Poems About Relationships Seeking Honest Critique