Poems About Patience Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about patience seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
wallyroo92
Poem Published
24th Apr 2024 3:50am
24th Apr 2024 3:50am
Unreasonable
It’s tough to deal with people who are difficult
They try your patience, they try your nerves
And though you may try to put yourself in their shoes
Your intuition should let know they’re being absurd
Unreasonable people are just blind to plain logic
They fail to see the irony, let alone their hypocrisy
And if you try to use reason and rationality with them
They are sure to erupt and be enraged by the audacity
They will use sarcasm and wit to deflect or avert
Trying to belittle you with their superior knowledge
But you’ll feel there...
They try your patience, they try your nerves
And though you may try to put yourself in their shoes
Your intuition should let know they’re being absurd
Unreasonable people are just blind to plain logic
They fail to see the irony, let alone their hypocrisy
And if you try to use reason and rationality with them
They are sure to erupt and be enraged by the audacity
They will use sarcasm and wit to deflect or avert
Trying to belittle you with their superior knowledge
But you’ll feel there...
#LifeStruggles
#memorial
#patience
131 reads
2 Comments
wallyroo92
Poem Published
18th Apr 2024 5:20am
18th Apr 2024 5:20am
Stay Calm, Stay Cool
Stress and pressure can often overwhelm anyone
Heck, it can put a lot of strain on the heart
And while there may be chaos and mayhem all around
Staying calm and cool can be quite the art
Life will throw challenges at us and people will test us
But the key to composure is that ability to pause
Taking a deep breath to let the brain process and generate
So that the response will focus on the root of the cause
And perhaps it in this type of pragmatic approach
That our action alone will command regard and respect
Because body language...
Heck, it can put a lot of strain on the heart
And while there may be chaos and mayhem all around
Staying calm and cool can be quite the art
Life will throw challenges at us and people will test us
But the key to composure is that ability to pause
Taking a deep breath to let the brain process and generate
So that the response will focus on the root of the cause
And perhaps it in this type of pragmatic approach
That our action alone will command regard and respect
Because body language...
#meditation
#NaPoWriMo2024
#patience #peace
#patience #peace
91 reads
2 Comments
mel44
Poem Published
5th Apr 2024 8:56am
5th Apr 2024 8:56am
Augmentation
Not unacquainted
yet holding still
past attempts tainted
by utter self-will
From a deadly place
of perceived fatal pain
seeking solace and grace
now on knees again
Inward realisation
of soul’s decline
necessary augmentation
to spiritually align
A solution outlined
initiating the quest
failures left behind
gratefully blessed
Familiar, this passage
still, something anew
direction without damage
a fevered path to pursue
yet holding still
past attempts tainted
by utter self-will
From a deadly place
of perceived fatal pain
seeking solace and grace
now on knees again
Inward realisation
of soul’s decline
necessary augmentation
to spiritually align
A solution outlined
initiating the quest
failures left behind
gratefully blessed
Familiar, this passage
still, something anew
direction without damage
a fevered path to pursue
#patience
#NaPoWriMo2024
89 reads
4 Comments
PAR
Poem Published
9th Feb 2024 3:57pm
9th Feb 2024 3:57pm
Empty spaces between commas...
I know witches
who like concoctions
but they don't have
any vegan options!
I know bitches
who like production
but they have no
sense of fashion!
I know assholes
who ask for emotion
but they have no
any good duration!
I know some moles
who dig big suction
but they have no
lasting long action!
I know many others
that keep in motion
but their heat has no
effect of induction!
who like concoctions
but they don't have
any vegan options!
I know bitches
who like production
but they have no
sense of fashion!
I know assholes
who ask for emotion
but they have no
any good duration!
I know some moles
who dig big suction
but they have no
lasting long action!
I know many others
that keep in motion
but their heat has no
effect of induction!
#universe
#patience
#WritingPoetry
#PopCulture
#seductive
137 reads
0 Comments
Zephlin347
Poem Published
6th Feb 2024 3:22pm
6th Feb 2024 3:22pm
A New Desire, A New Tomorrow
I won't depart, even as we drift away,
A steadfast light, in your night, I'll stay.
By your side, whenever you need my part,
But I won't cease living, fueled by my own fire.
Choosing happiness, a new desire,
Leaving sorrow behind, a fresh start I've made.
A steadfast light, in your night, I'll stay.
By your side, whenever you need my part,
But I won't cease living, fueled by my own fire.
Choosing happiness, a new desire,
Leaving sorrow behind, a fresh start I've made.
#happiness
#love
#patience
#LongDistanceRelationship
#support
245 reads
2 Comments
PAR
Poem Published
24th Jan 2024 1:44pm
24th Jan 2024 1:44pm
Moth
Let's pretend they don't exist
the monsters around us...
Let's let it rain
on our lawn.
Let's shut up!
Forget!
Sleep
forever.
Pretend.
the monsters around us...
Let's let it rain
on our lawn.
Let's shut up!
Forget!
Sleep
forever.
Pretend.
#forgiveness
#mirror
#patience
116 reads
0 Comments
MotDi
Poem Published
19th Nov 2023 9:21am
19th Nov 2023 9:21am
Proactivity
#love
#BDSM
#patience #IMissYou
#patience #IMissYou
275 reads
3 Comments
wallyroo92
Poem Published
6th Aug 2023 1:43am
6th Aug 2023 1:43am
While in the Eye of the Hurricane
Gotta remember that life will hit you from time to time
Even if you didn’t see the punch coming your way
Gotta roll with it even if you find yourself deep in it
Because eventually you’ll make it through the fray
It’s true what they say, you’re a villain in someone else’s story
And no matter what facts you put forth the truth can be subjective
Sometimes the consequences from the past will follow all along
Even when you’re close to reaching your goals and objectives
Whether you decide to get up and fight or stay down or take flight
Life...
Even if you didn’t see the punch coming your way
Gotta roll with it even if you find yourself deep in it
Because eventually you’ll make it through the fray
It’s true what they say, you’re a villain in someone else’s story
And no matter what facts you put forth the truth can be subjective
Sometimes the consequences from the past will follow all along
Even when you’re close to reaching your goals and objectives
Whether you decide to get up and fight or stay down or take flight
Life...
#hope
#peace
#patience
288 reads
12 Comments
wiseowl
Poem Published
7th Jul 2023 5:12am
7th Jul 2023 5:12am
Mosaic - 07/06/2023
You have reshaped
By piecing together
A once unified canvas of colors
Which is your being
That was stomped
Shattered
Recreated
Refined
Into a mosaic
A mosaic that is more beautiful
Than the once known canvas
Torn, shattered
But reordered, recreated-
Into the work of art
Known as your life
Your internal self
Your being
Creating a burst of colors
That once did not exist
A mosaic
Of beautiful art
You truly are
By piecing together
A once unified canvas of colors
Which is your being
That was stomped
Shattered
Recreated
Refined
Into a mosaic
A mosaic that is more beautiful
Than the once known canvas
Torn, shattered
But reordered, recreated-
Into the work of art
Known as your life
Your internal self
Your being
Creating a burst of colors
That once did not exist
A mosaic
Of beautiful art
You truly are
#strength
#courage
#motivational
#spiritual
#patience
326 reads
0 Comments
wallyroo92
Poem Published
6th Jul 2023 2:25am
6th Jul 2023 2:25am
Moving Forward
Perhaps it’s the mental preparation that helps with some foresight
Seeing the hurricane winds ahead of time for what they are
Loud and destructive
I’m in a different state of mind
Ready for this
And sure enough when I got the call
It was that old familiar vexing tone
But
I’m more at peace with myself
For some reason as the berating went on
I pictured boards and tiles falling off my roof
As the winds tossed them over my head
I, on a long ladder
Hammering nails to make sure nothing more can be torn off
Watching...
Seeing the hurricane winds ahead of time for what they are
Loud and destructive
I’m in a different state of mind
Ready for this
And sure enough when I got the call
It was that old familiar vexing tone
But
I’m more at peace with myself
For some reason as the berating went on
I pictured boards and tiles falling off my roof
As the winds tossed them over my head
I, on a long ladder
Hammering nails to make sure nothing more can be torn off
Watching...
#patience
#SelfReflection
#PersonalGrowth
304 reads
10 Comments
cabcool
Poem Published
25th Jun 2023 9:44pm
25th Jun 2023 9:44pm
a little patience
a lyric mirror 48©
have a little patience
when your strength is tested;
ere the night is over,
comes the golden sunshine
mellowing the shoreline.
soon, you will discover
faith you have invested
makes a world of difference.
© Copyright 2023 June 24
by Clyve A. Bowen♫
have a little patience
when your strength is tested;
ere the night is over,
comes the golden sunshine
mellowing the shoreline.
soon, you will discover
faith you have invested
makes a world of difference.
© Copyright 2023 June 24
by Clyve A. Bowen♫
#strength
#courage
#faith #patience
#faith #patience
226 reads
0 Comments
shadow_starzzz
Poem Published
12th Jun 2023 1:48pm
12th Jun 2023 1:48pm
Adulting
#love
#family
#patience
190 reads
1 Comment
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