Poems About Patience Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about patience seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
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I know witches
who like concoctions
but they don't have
any vegan options!
I know bitches
who like production
but they have no
sense of fashion!
I know assholes
who ask for emotion
but they have no
any good duration!
I know some moles
who dig big suction
but they have no
lasting long action!
I know many others
that keep in motion
but their heat has no
effect of induction!
who like concoctions
but they don't have
any vegan options!
I know bitches
who like production
but they have no
sense of fashion!
I know assholes
who ask for emotion
but they have no
any good duration!
I know some moles
who dig big suction
but they have no
lasting long action!
I know many others
that keep in motion
but their heat has no
effect of induction!
#universe
#patience
#WritingPoetry
#PopCulture
#seductive
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A New Desire, A New Tomorrow
I won't depart, even as we drift away,
A steadfast light, in your night, I'll stay.
By your side, whenever you need my part,
But I won't cease living, fueled by my own fire.
Choosing happiness, a new desire,
Leaving sorrow behind, a fresh start I've made.
A steadfast light, in your night, I'll stay.
By your side, whenever you need my part,
But I won't cease living, fueled by my own fire.
Choosing happiness, a new desire,
Leaving sorrow behind, a fresh start I've made.
#happiness
#love
#patience
#LongDistanceRelationship
#support
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Moth
Let's pretend they don't exist
the monsters around us...
Let's let it rain
on our lawn.
Let's shut up!
Forget!
Sleep
forever.
Pretend.
the monsters around us...
Let's let it rain
on our lawn.
Let's shut up!
Forget!
Sleep
forever.
Pretend.
#forgiveness
#mirror
#patience
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Proactivity
#love
#BDSM
#patience #IMissYou
#patience #IMissYou
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3 Comments
Phone Call
The phone rings…
It’s a telemarketer
My cell dings…
It’s my mother
A notification…
Spam mail
A vibration…
I imagined it
Every time, my breath quickens
I hope it’s you
I never longed so much
For two words:
I’m sorry
It’s a telemarketer
My cell dings…
It’s my mother
A notification…
Spam mail
A vibration…
I imagined it
Every time, my breath quickens
I hope it’s you
I never longed so much
For two words:
I’m sorry
#love
#forgiveness
#patience
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While in the Eye of the Hurricane
Gotta remember that life will hit you from time to time
Even if you didn’t see the punch coming your way
Gotta roll with it even if you find yourself deep in it
Because eventually you’ll make it through the fray
It’s true what they say, you’re a villain in someone else’s story
And no matter what facts you put forth the truth can be subjective
Sometimes the consequences from the past will follow all along
Even when you’re close to reaching your goals and objectives
Whether you decide to get up and fight or stay down or take flight
Life...
Even if you didn’t see the punch coming your way
Gotta roll with it even if you find yourself deep in it
Because eventually you’ll make it through the fray
It’s true what they say, you’re a villain in someone else’s story
And no matter what facts you put forth the truth can be subjective
Sometimes the consequences from the past will follow all along
Even when you’re close to reaching your goals and objectives
Whether you decide to get up and fight or stay down or take flight
Life...
#hope
#peace
#patience
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Mosaic - 07/06/2023
You have reshaped
By piecing together
A once unified canvas of colors
Which is your being
That was stomped
Shattered
Recreated
Refined
Into a mosaic
A mosaic that is more beautiful
Than the once known canvas
Torn, shattered
But reordered, recreated-
Into the work of art
Known as your life
Your internal self
Your being
Creating a burst of colors
That once did not exist
A mosaic
Of beautiful art
You truly are
By piecing together
A once unified canvas of colors
Which is your being
That was stomped
Shattered
Recreated
Refined
Into a mosaic
A mosaic that is more beautiful
Than the once known canvas
Torn, shattered
But reordered, recreated-
Into the work of art
Known as your life
Your internal self
Your being
Creating a burst of colors
That once did not exist
A mosaic
Of beautiful art
You truly are
#strength
#courage
#motivational
#spiritual
#patience
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Moving Forward
Perhaps it’s the mental preparation that helps with some foresight
Seeing the hurricane winds ahead of time for what they are
Loud and destructive
I’m in a different state of mind
Ready for this
And sure enough when I got the call
It was that old familiar vexing tone
But
I’m more at peace with myself
For some reason as the berating went on
I pictured boards and tiles falling off my roof
As the winds tossed them over my head
I, on a long ladder
Hammering nails to make sure nothing more can be torn off
Watching...
Seeing the hurricane winds ahead of time for what they are
Loud and destructive
I’m in a different state of mind
Ready for this
And sure enough when I got the call
It was that old familiar vexing tone
But
I’m more at peace with myself
For some reason as the berating went on
I pictured boards and tiles falling off my roof
As the winds tossed them over my head
I, on a long ladder
Hammering nails to make sure nothing more can be torn off
Watching...
#patience
#SelfReflection
#PersonalGrowth
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a little patience
a lyric mirror 48©
have a little patience
when your strength is tested;
ere the night is over,
comes the golden sunshine
mellowing the shoreline.
soon, you will discover
faith you have invested
makes a world of difference.
© Copyright 2023 June 24
by Clyve A. Bowen♫
have a little patience
when your strength is tested;
ere the night is over,
comes the golden sunshine
mellowing the shoreline.
soon, you will discover
faith you have invested
makes a world of difference.
© Copyright 2023 June 24
by Clyve A. Bowen♫
#strength
#courage
#faith #patience
#faith #patience
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Adulting
#love
#family
#patience
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#utopia
#faith
#fate
#patience
#acceptance
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[WIP]
the pulp of an orange
twisting like a labyrinthine
tear my carpels apart
consume my pericarp
tenuous chiffon, unveil me
rip me from my seams
pick out the loose threads
something you'll never mend
.
.
.
.
.
.
(when i first got together with
my partner, it was hard for me
i was unused to feeling
the rawness and reality of love.
so quickly i became obsessed
with that idea and i felt afraid.
i didn't want him to leave me
and the only type of love...
twisting like a labyrinthine
tear my carpels apart
consume my pericarp
tenuous chiffon, unveil me
rip me from my seams
pick out the loose threads
something you'll never mend
.
.
.
.
.
.
(when i first got together with
my partner, it was hard for me
i was unused to feeling
the rawness and reality of love.
so quickly i became obsessed
with that idea and i felt afraid.
i didn't want him to leave me
and the only type of love...
#patience
#FirstLove
#sacrifice #obsession
#sacrifice #obsession
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DU Poetry : Poems About Patience Seeking Honest Critique