Poems About Patience Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about patience seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
oldmanG
Poem Published
23rd Oct 2024 5:30am
23rd Oct 2024 5:30am
I Can’t Remember
I Can’t remember
Can’t remember
Walk in a room what for
I don’t know as the day begins anew
Can’t remember when I started to forget
Cobwebs on my brain
Try to brush them off
I can’t remember
Say to myself check it out
Get on my phone to look it up
Who am I why am I here
Can’t remember when
And I’ve got cobwebs on the cranium
I can’t remember when I
Started to forget
Blank pages in my mind
Sit and stew but the key is simple
Think about something else ...
Can’t remember
Walk in a room what for
I don’t know as the day begins anew
Can’t remember when I started to forget
Cobwebs on my brain
Try to brush them off
I can’t remember
Say to myself check it out
Get on my phone to look it up
Who am I why am I here
Can’t remember when
And I’ve got cobwebs on the cranium
I can’t remember when I
Started to forget
Blank pages in my mind
Sit and stew but the key is simple
Think about something else ...
#aging
#memories
#nostalgia #patience
#nostalgia #patience
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Quizzy29
Tanzo Ellis
Tanzo Ellis
Poem Published
16th Oct 2024 11:17am
16th Oct 2024 11:17am
Car viewed eye Candy selected
Before there was a seat to sit in you were comfortable walking.
We locked eyes with mutual intentions & we moved in.
Drove with sole independency actions became submissive w/o request.
Sit back & watch them look a bit harder on purpose & marvel.
No longer walking place to place & it’s just the tip of what berg.
Nothing to put the world at your feet but let world in & you’ll use your feet to walk.
(Driving past the passenger looking away)
We locked eyes with mutual intentions & we moved in.
Drove with sole independency actions became submissive w/o request.
Sit back & watch them look a bit harder on purpose & marvel.
No longer walking place to place & it’s just the tip of what berg.
Nothing to put the world at your feet but let world in & you’ll use your feet to walk.
(Driving past the passenger looking away)
#beauty
#cars
#gratitude #patience
#gratitude #patience
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Whackytraveler
Poem Published
13th Oct 2024 8:25am
13th Oct 2024 8:25am
Destiny’s String
Destiny’s string of fate
I wonder if it’s sometimes late
Maybe the red string
Got tangled by a stream
In the mountains far away
From the bay
I lay
And wonder when
This strange feeling
Of something missing
Will disappear
Someone give me a beer
Or maybe some wine
While I untangle this line of
Destiny’s string
That somehow got lost
By a stream
I wonder if it’s sometimes late
Maybe the red string
Got tangled by a stream
In the mountains far away
From the bay
I lay
And wonder when
This strange feeling
Of something missing
Will disappear
Someone give me a beer
Or maybe some wine
While I untangle this line of
Destiny’s string
That somehow got lost
By a stream
#fate
#patience
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jenny_is_hungry
Poem Published
11th Oct 2024 3:32am
11th Oct 2024 3:32am
The lie that Passive Means Weakness
Me: Minding my business as I drink with my friend and his friends in order to be supportive and get to know them.
Them: “Trump will save America”
Me: “Ok.” I take a sip and avoid the the tangents going on around me, but roll my eyes involuntarily as their never ending rants go on and on. It's not enough that I am silently enduring this abuse. I'm choosing not to speak on it. And yet …
Them: “Oh, looks like we got a feminist! I can guess, but, who are you voting for?” He knows, but needs the verbal confirmation to drive his point home.
Me: Kamala....
Them: “Trump will save America”
Me: “Ok.” I take a sip and avoid the the tangents going on around me, but roll my eyes involuntarily as their never ending rants go on and on. It's not enough that I am silently enduring this abuse. I'm choosing not to speak on it. And yet …
Them: “Oh, looks like we got a feminist! I can guess, but, who are you voting for?” He knows, but needs the verbal confirmation to drive his point home.
Me: Kamala....
#conflict
#patience
#politics
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oldmanG
Poem Published
3rd Oct 2024 1:36pm
3rd Oct 2024 1:36pm
Sleep Dream
Send me off on petals made of metal
I lay wake I’m not dreaming
You go to sleep I look after you
I try to sleep but awake is calling me
You go to sleep when I’m not looking
I dream you sleep within me
I wake up screaming while you sleep next to me
I’m dreaming for both of us
You wake while I roll over and tuck under covers
Coffee is brewing while I’m sleeping
Your caffeine keeps me alive
Pulsing in my veins you arouse me
I sleep while you work awake
...
I lay wake I’m not dreaming
You go to sleep I look after you
I try to sleep but awake is calling me
You go to sleep when I’m not looking
I dream you sleep within me
I wake up screaming while you sleep next to me
I’m dreaming for both of us
You wake while I roll over and tuck under covers
Coffee is brewing while I’m sleeping
Your caffeine keeps me alive
Pulsing in my veins you arouse me
I sleep while you work awake
...
#dreams
#love
#patience #sacrifice
#patience #sacrifice
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ManorMyth
Man_Or_Myth
Man_Or_Myth
Poem Published
10th Sep 2024 8:01am
10th Sep 2024 8:01am
Be patient
Just be patient, the storm is almost over.
Be patient, your time will come.
Be patient, because this pain you feel inside will subside and that cloud will be lifted.
No longer will it follow you around to darken your days
No longer will you feel this empty and hollow, but full.
Full of life. Full of love. Full of joy.
Free of the stress that ties you down
Just be patient, the end is near
No more lonely days and tireless nights
No more restless thoughts from sad dreams
No more fuss
No more fights
No more thinking...
Be patient, your time will come.
Be patient, because this pain you feel inside will subside and that cloud will be lifted.
No longer will it follow you around to darken your days
No longer will you feel this empty and hollow, but full.
Full of life. Full of love. Full of joy.
Free of the stress that ties you down
Just be patient, the end is near
No more lonely days and tireless nights
No more restless thoughts from sad dreams
No more fuss
No more fights
No more thinking...
#motivational
#passion
#patience #WritingPoetry
#patience #WritingPoetry
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Whackytraveler
Poem Published
27th Aug 2024 4:09am
27th Aug 2024 4:09am
Whale Shark’s thoughts
Desolate, open space
A deep cerulean
A state of nothingness
But also closely felt like I’ve transformed
My eyes, only seen by few
My back being the only interesting view
As it mirrors the night sky
Of a starry night
A dotted map
I’ve swam this lap before
Another ship has stopped
My company awaits
With flippers
And cameras
I continue on
Through this desolate place
Feeling everything among the open space
My dotted back
A close map to the night sky
I say goodbye to my guests
And continue on...
A deep cerulean
A state of nothingness
But also closely felt like I’ve transformed
My eyes, only seen by few
My back being the only interesting view
As it mirrors the night sky
Of a starry night
A dotted map
I’ve swam this lap before
Another ship has stopped
My company awaits
With flippers
And cameras
I continue on
Through this desolate place
Feeling everything among the open space
My dotted back
A close map to the night sky
I say goodbye to my guests
And continue on...
#patience
#sea
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PAR
Poem Published
23rd Jul 2024 12:42pm
23rd Jul 2024 12:42pm
About Last Year
Patience, a lot of patience,
That's what it takes to keep going.
At many years of age
we just want health and a lot of patience.
We are not attracted to indolence!
We are not afraid of impotence!
But, oh my God, how much we miss
the patience to have with impertinence
and inexperience and malevolence...
We try not to give up on the film
at the end of the first sequence.
And hear the same poorly told stories
out of sheer indulgence.
We then allowed ourselves to sit in the garden
and count the petals...
That's what it takes to keep going.
At many years of age
we just want health and a lot of patience.
We are not attracted to indolence!
We are not afraid of impotence!
But, oh my God, how much we miss
the patience to have with impertinence
and inexperience and malevolence...
We try not to give up on the film
at the end of the first sequence.
And hear the same poorly told stories
out of sheer indulgence.
We then allowed ourselves to sit in the garden
and count the petals...
#healing
#LifeStruggles
#MentalHealth
#MovingOn
#patience
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AaronBraveHeart
Poem Published
15th Jul 2024 4:55pm
15th Jul 2024 4:55pm
My "Ea" Series: Chapter II. The Ainur's Acoustic Adjustment
How could it possibly be conveyed
how gratitude of first breath thrilled;
eyes unlocked the soul's own faith
that itself slowly inspired revealed.
Coming into being for the first time.
Despite the homogenous past
where nothingness was entwined
with the Flame's immortal blast.
A bit of a pain, wasn't it?
To become a spark of a monad.
For birth would also permit
nostalgia of oblivion in God.
The first thought of the I AM,
a diamond descending double spirals,
while past's nothingness was... hm? ...
how gratitude of first breath thrilled;
eyes unlocked the soul's own faith
that itself slowly inspired revealed.
Coming into being for the first time.
Despite the homogenous past
where nothingness was entwined
with the Flame's immortal blast.
A bit of a pain, wasn't it?
To become a spark of a monad.
For birth would also permit
nostalgia of oblivion in God.
The first thought of the I AM,
a diamond descending double spirals,
while past's nothingness was... hm? ...
#God
#JRRTolkien
#patience
#spiritual
#universe
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beanbandit
Poem Published
15th May 2024 6:09am
15th May 2024 6:09am
7.83
I’m colored 7.83 that’s an earth tone
For the evils in my mind I’m
Making wards with these cursed stones
Tryin to grind til shine like I can afford my birthstone
just a sign of the times I’ll get mine til my
Hearse comes
And I’ll Smile through the pain I wont say that
It hurts though
I just play in the rain dry my feet where the
Dirt blows
And the concrete greets my light at each burnt sole
While the burnt coal of my heart
heats my whole damn world slow as
the beat of my blood mixing love til it’s purple
It’s all love,...
For the evils in my mind I’m
Making wards with these cursed stones
Tryin to grind til shine like I can afford my birthstone
just a sign of the times I’ll get mine til my
Hearse comes
And I’ll Smile through the pain I wont say that
It hurts though
I just play in the rain dry my feet where the
Dirt blows
And the concrete greets my light at each burnt sole
While the burnt coal of my heart
heats my whole damn world slow as
the beat of my blood mixing love til it’s purple
It’s all love,...
#LifeCycle
#patience
#rebirth
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wallyroo92
Poem Published
30th Apr 2024 3:33am
30th Apr 2024 3:33am
By My Side
It was in those days of youth
When my emotions had held me loyal and true
And though a mountain range of obstacles lay ahead
I just knew that patience would eventually pay off
I waited and waited for her
But the choices we made carved a different path
And we went our separate and distant ways
Far apart and yet still closer to the heart
And it was after a decade
That upon seeing her face again I knew it was real
That ember never died inside of me
Remembering the emotion with all its intensity
Our time had finally...
When my emotions had held me loyal and true
And though a mountain range of obstacles lay ahead
I just knew that patience would eventually pay off
I waited and waited for her
But the choices we made carved a different path
And we went our separate and distant ways
Far apart and yet still closer to the heart
And it was after a decade
That upon seeing her face again I knew it was real
That ember never died inside of me
Remembering the emotion with all its intensity
Our time had finally...
#fate
#LifeStruggles
#patience
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wallyroo92
Poem Published
24th Apr 2024 3:50am
24th Apr 2024 3:50am
Unreasonable
It’s tough to deal with people who are difficult
They try your patience, they try your nerves
And though you may try to put yourself in their shoes
Your intuition should let know they’re being absurd
Unreasonable people are just blind to plain logic
They fail to see the irony, let alone their hypocrisy
And if you try to use reason and rationality with them
They are sure to erupt and be enraged by the audacity
They will use sarcasm and wit to deflect or avert
Trying to belittle you with their superior knowledge
But you’ll feel there...
They try your patience, they try your nerves
And though you may try to put yourself in their shoes
Your intuition should let know they’re being absurd
Unreasonable people are just blind to plain logic
They fail to see the irony, let alone their hypocrisy
And if you try to use reason and rationality with them
They are sure to erupt and be enraged by the audacity
They will use sarcasm and wit to deflect or avert
Trying to belittle you with their superior knowledge
But you’ll feel there...
#LifeStruggles
#memorial
#patience
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