Motivational by Top Critiquers Poems
#motivational
motivational by top critiquers poems. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
19th Jan 2025 1:22am
19th Jan 2025 1:22am
No More Games
One day I stopped hating
I ceased all meaningless activity
I completed the circle
I set my sights straight
Like an arrow I flew
I stopped acting
I got tired of playing with you
Violence & destruction became my reason for living
My out, my excuse
What is your excuse?
Destruction
Without hate, without fear, without judgement
I am no better then you
No one knows this better then I do
I just got tired of playing parlor games
I ceased all meaningless activity
I completed the circle
I set my sights straight
Like an arrow I flew
I stopped acting
I got tired of playing with you
Violence & destruction became my reason for living
My out, my excuse
What is your excuse?
Destruction
Without hate, without fear, without judgement
I am no better then you
No one knows this better then I do
I just got tired of playing parlor games
#determination
#motivational
#strength #uplifting
#strength #uplifting
77 reads
11 Comments
fianaturie8
Fia Naturie
Fia Naturie
Poem Published
29th Nov 2024 00:47am
29th Nov 2024 00:47am
Finally My Dream
Once, I had a dream
That was not my own
I tried so very hard
To nurture the seeds that were sown
As with all dreams
I woke up
Realizing that was not my luck
That was not my drive
That was not at all that kept me alive
I took a breath so deep
That I could feel the ground
Through the concrete on the street
Dreams have come to me and slipped away
I refuse to let go
I command it to stay
If they were not for me
Let them believe I was in the dark
My eyes have adjusted
Yet they still see no...
That was not my own
I tried so very hard
To nurture the seeds that were sown
As with all dreams
I woke up
Realizing that was not my luck
That was not my drive
That was not at all that kept me alive
I took a breath so deep
That I could feel the ground
Through the concrete on the street
Dreams have come to me and slipped away
I refuse to let go
I command it to stay
If they were not for me
Let them believe I was in the dark
My eyes have adjusted
Yet they still see no...
#courage
#motivational
#strength
199 reads
22 Comments
Her
Poem Published
16th Dec 2024 7:48am
16th Dec 2024 7:48am
Keep Swimming (moony_)
Carve out your path
Young sister of mine
And
Don’t ever forget:
Your mind
Is gorgeous
You’re tenacious
Intelligent
Beautiful
Creative
Introspective
Enough
You’ve already moved mountains
When the world
Suddenly feels too heavy
And you just need
To hear
Something friendly
Remember:
My world has been
Enhanced
Since I’ve had
The opportunity
To get to know you
moony_
You inspire me daily
To be a better me ...
Young sister of mine
And
Don’t ever forget:
Your mind
Is gorgeous
You’re tenacious
Intelligent
Beautiful
Creative
Introspective
Enough
You’ve already moved mountains
When the world
Suddenly feels too heavy
And you just need
To hear
Something friendly
Remember:
My world has been
Enhanced
Since I’ve had
The opportunity
To get to know you
moony_
You inspire me daily
To be a better me ...
#admiration
#motivational
#MyInspiration
#respect
#strength
118 reads
6 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
10th Aug 2018 4:03pm
10th Aug 2018 4:03pm
the homecoming
turning up the furnace
we're going full bore now
I enjoy war
this is where I excel
but this lady would like to take her armor off
imagine now a soul fully undressed
climbing into the celestial pools with you
cooling waters it's been a long day
a millennia has come and gone
I see you on the horizon
coming home from work
from the ninth sector of the nix universe
I'm emotional at the homecoming
watching our warriors
one by one come in
yes, it's a sight no one thought they'd ever see ...
we're going full bore now
I enjoy war
this is where I excel
but this lady would like to take her armor off
imagine now a soul fully undressed
climbing into the celestial pools with you
cooling waters it's been a long day
a millennia has come and gone
I see you on the horizon
coming home from work
from the ninth sector of the nix universe
I'm emotional at the homecoming
watching our warriors
one by one come in
yes, it's a sight no one thought they'd ever see ...
#love
#ILoveYou
#motivational
#inspirational
#admiration
693 reads
6 Comments
TheOralizer
Poem Published
17th Jan 2025 1:57pm
17th Jan 2025 1:57pm
TODAY I DARE
TODAY
I dare to expose
the secrets in my heart;
I fearlessly let YOU in
to see my love.
THE
words I write
flow from my honest
heart and soul;
nothing is hidden;
poetry reveals my feelings.
A skeptic may ask, "Why
be so foolish?" a rational
mind may ask, the answer is
"Love does not march by
the whims of human logic.
THAT'S
why today I dare to let
my heart say again and again,
"I LOVE YOU...YES! YOU!
I dare to expose
the secrets in my heart;
I fearlessly let YOU in
to see my love.
THE
words I write
flow from my honest
heart and soul;
nothing is hidden;
poetry reveals my feelings.
A skeptic may ask, "Why
be so foolish?" a rational
mind may ask, the answer is
"Love does not march by
the whims of human logic.
THAT'S
why today I dare to let
my heart say again and again,
"I LOVE YOU...YES! YOU!
#emotions
#happiness
#inspirational
#love
#motivational
73 reads
3 Comments
backdeckbenny
Poem Published
18th Nov 2024 8:50pm
18th Nov 2024 8:50pm
DuP
Deep underground real poets live
It's safer down there than above
They don't conform to the general view
And search for the meaning of love.
They write with a view from the lives they have lived.
Torn, shredded, healed and still here
Deep underground real poets live
Where they write without favour or fear.
Who ever runs the show blesses you all.
It's safer down there than above
They don't conform to the general view
And search for the meaning of love.
They write with a view from the lives they have lived.
Torn, shredded, healed and still here
Deep underground real poets live
Where they write without favour or fear.
Who ever runs the show blesses you all.
#courage
#inspirational
#motivational
#romantic
#wisdom
100 reads
7 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
24th Dec 2024 2:54pm
24th Dec 2024 2:54pm
IN THIS MOMENT
It's me again the story teller of unspoken words ✍️. For real that in this moment of tranquility and space and time, a scenario slowly begins to unfold the deepness of my thoughts, as I reflect upon where I've been and gone. 😭 THAT will forever change my mind and heart, plus my spiritual soul of my SUBCONSCIOUSNESS. THOUGHTS of my brain and what I've learned from these two brain tumors, 🧠 that I have gone through some mental changes. Yet as I sit here and now, within this place I can truly say that I am truly grateful and...
#courage
#inspirational
#motivational
#StreamOfConsciousness
#strength
45 reads
2 Comments
Numer90
Numer0-un0
Numer0-un0
Poem Published
14th Dec 2020 12:43pm
14th Dec 2020 12:43pm
Moon by Noon; Justice League
You think you brave?..
Come join the Justice League..
See for yourself what the eyes see but cannot believe..
Masters in flattering to deceive..
Erotic images and sounds
I perceive..
Is for all the accolades i am yet to receive..
Sure, I learn some few words in Arabic..
Just not as sure this shit
I wrote is r 'n' b..
I don't ogle at what is ugly..
But i Iove phantomising in a fantasy..
Forcing me to walk into the fields of mine..
I will fix some steels like that of wolverine..
If you don't mind my similes..
I just...
Come join the Justice League..
See for yourself what the eyes see but cannot believe..
Masters in flattering to deceive..
Erotic images and sounds
I perceive..
Is for all the accolades i am yet to receive..
Sure, I learn some few words in Arabic..
Just not as sure this shit
I wrote is r 'n' b..
I don't ogle at what is ugly..
But i Iove phantomising in a fantasy..
Forcing me to walk into the fields of mine..
I will fix some steels like that of wolverine..
If you don't mind my similes..
I just...
#strength
#courage
#motivational
#admiration
#respect
314 reads
0 Comments
PoetSpeak
Poem Published
17th Mar 2024 5:32pm
17th Mar 2024 5:32pm
Collage - A New Calling
Pieces
Scraps
Cutoffs
Electric Bill Envelope
Blue boxes
Anything and everything
No rules
A journey to places unknown
Landscape
Art sake
My take
Scraps
Cutoffs
Electric Bill Envelope
Blue boxes
Anything and everything
No rules
A journey to places unknown
Landscape
Art sake
My take
#identity
#motivational
#inspirational
#uplifting
#art
246 reads
28 Comments
Ahavati
Tams
Tams
Poem Published
23rd Jul 2019 4:45pm
23rd Jul 2019 4:45pm
The Albatross
I used to think
those hanging an albatross
around their neck
were serious about penance—
those standing their ground
saying, I refuse to retreat
but will go down with this ship
because that's how much I believe;
or, deeply loved—
because any other behavior
would mean I did not
Yet, sooner or later
some kind rebound lover
bearing gifts and poetry
appears in shining armor;
or, perhaps another...
those hanging an albatross
around their neck
were serious about penance—
those standing their ground
saying, I refuse to retreat
but will go down with this ship
because that's how much I believe;
or, deeply loved—
because any other behavior
would mean I did not
Yet, sooner or later
some kind rebound lover
bearing gifts and poetry
appears in shining armor;
or, perhaps another...
#love
#regret
#suffering
#motivational
#spiritual
1672 reads
18 Comments
Solomon_Song
Poem Published
6th Nov 2024 10:05pm
6th Nov 2024 10:05pm
THE APPEAL OF THE NATURIST BEACH
#beach
#holiday
#inspirational
#motivational
#sea
56 reads
0 Comments
AfterSexDilemma
Poem Published
22nd Jul 2019 12:23pm
22nd Jul 2019 12:23pm
Motivate
Motivate me
To set my mind free.
Don't wait for someone
To care about me.
Trust in me
To be all I can be
No reason to hesitate.
Favor the greed
Its plentiful, you see?
No end in sight, this hunger.
To motivate me
To fulfill my dreams
Not sulk in useless somber.
Gather the will
There's something inside.
Let it out!
There's really nothing to hide.
All I need,
Is to let them see.
Let motivation be the key.
Don't wait too long,
Or you never will.
Don't be ashamed
For...
To set my mind free.
Don't wait for someone
To care about me.
Trust in me
To be all I can be
No reason to hesitate.
Favor the greed
Its plentiful, you see?
No end in sight, this hunger.
To motivate me
To fulfill my dreams
Not sulk in useless somber.
Gather the will
There's something inside.
Let it out!
There's really nothing to hide.
All I need,
Is to let them see.
Let motivation be the key.
Don't wait too long,
Or you never will.
Don't be ashamed
For...
#motivational
586 reads
3 Comments
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