Poems About Love Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about love seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Strangeways_Rob
Poem Published
2nd Jan 2025 11:00pm
2nd Jan 2025 11:00pm
Yma o Hyd
Death upon rage
there is a bone yard
full of the likes of you and me.
Take kindness from the storms
you placed under bridges,
I saw your eyes dance
when your youngest pedalled
into her burning future.
Everyone was sick to the tattoo of you
but not me my friend, not me,
your children will taste the
blood from your knuckles
and as chloroform upon a wounded animal
will sleep soundly in your love.
I loved you man
but I won’t place love in terraces
just tell the World of our Cymru
Our fucking...
there is a bone yard
full of the likes of you and me.
Take kindness from the storms
you placed under bridges,
I saw your eyes dance
when your youngest pedalled
into her burning future.
Everyone was sick to the tattoo of you
but not me my friend, not me,
your children will taste the
blood from your knuckles
and as chloroform upon a wounded animal
will sleep soundly in your love.
I loved you man
but I won’t place love in terraces
just tell the World of our Cymru
Our fucking...
#love
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1 Comment
AverageJoe
Poem Published
2nd Jan 2025 10:29pm
2nd Jan 2025 10:29pm
String of Pearls II
It’s the soft deep of night and I lie awake in the stillness
With thoughts of you coming easier than sleep
Your memory answers in the silence with feelings felt
Not heard
The reach beyond my reaching
The distance beyond my words
For the words I’d speak would be but soft as the caress of my breath upon your skin
And yet, urgent and demanding in breath’s rise and fall as my kisses upon your lips
…which haunt my waking thought
Time and distance mean little to sleepless memories.
For your memory with night’s passage ...
With thoughts of you coming easier than sleep
Your memory answers in the silence with feelings felt
Not heard
The reach beyond my reaching
The distance beyond my words
For the words I’d speak would be but soft as the caress of my breath upon your skin
And yet, urgent and demanding in breath’s rise and fall as my kisses upon your lips
…which haunt my waking thought
Time and distance mean little to sleepless memories.
For your memory with night’s passage ...
#love
59 reads
2 Comments
summultima
uma
uma
Poem Published
2nd Jan 2025 9:05pm
2nd Jan 2025 9:05pm
~(y)our timeless traction & tactilities :: in process
if, “touch has a memory”
then, your musky trailing arrival
driving me in a dense haziness
of a nimbus stormy craziness.. in
an impregnating petrichor
pheromonal spree
from
your gentle touching grounds..
I breathe erratically arrhythmic..
as if a wholly deathly choking, a
lumping painpleasure struggle
you stuff me in… in
your arrowing magnetic eye
bows.. that dents & shrinks
my shiversweating contours
.. craving your metallic touch
but then, the foreplaying ...
then, your musky trailing arrival
driving me in a dense haziness
of a nimbus stormy craziness.. in
an impregnating petrichor
pheromonal spree
from
your gentle touching grounds..
I breathe erratically arrhythmic..
as if a wholly deathly choking, a
lumping painpleasure struggle
you stuff me in… in
your arrowing magnetic eye
bows.. that dents & shrinks
my shiversweating contours
.. craving your metallic touch
but then, the foreplaying ...
#love
#romantic
#sensual
#spiritual
#StreamOfConsciousness
90 reads
3 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
2nd Jan 2025 8:46pm
2nd Jan 2025 8:46pm
elsewhere
transport me elsewhere, I am daydreaming
flying on a fantasy
drifting on the air, it's a beautiful day
the winds enchant
whispering to me, in hushed tones
encouraging, he's waiting, they chant
I feel the crush of velvet, under my feet in the green
the garden beckons and I get lost in reverie
unwinding, writing my cares on the delicate petals
forget me not
the day ushers us into a waking state of dreaming
clinging to your memory I sigh within
my soul longs to touch
desire beckons and I follow her in...
flying on a fantasy
drifting on the air, it's a beautiful day
the winds enchant
whispering to me, in hushed tones
encouraging, he's waiting, they chant
I feel the crush of velvet, under my feet in the green
the garden beckons and I get lost in reverie
unwinding, writing my cares on the delicate petals
forget me not
the day ushers us into a waking state of dreaming
clinging to your memory I sigh within
my soul longs to touch
desire beckons and I follow her in...
#love
#magic
65 reads
8 Comments
summultima
uma
uma
Poem Published
2nd Jan 2025 8:12pm
2nd Jan 2025 8:12pm
~ (y)our timeless traction & tactilities:: in essence
viz: touch
#love
#romantic
#sensual #spiritual
#sensual #spiritual
55 reads
2 Comments
NP_NP
NP
NP
Poem Published
2nd Jan 2025 3:58pm
2nd Jan 2025 3:58pm
The Boys First Heartbreak
I ask him, "Was she worth it?"
He exhales, slow and deliberate.
"She was the tweak to my addict,
the dead eyes you see in the lost.
She was dark, parasitic to my heart.
She wanted to crawl inside my skin
just to feel my warmth.
She was fucking everything."
"She sounds terrible," I respond.
He takes the longest drag of his cigarette,
smoke curling like his thoughts.
"Nah," he says,
"she was comfortable in the dark.
It’s there she created art.
Sure, she nearly swallowed my...
He exhales, slow and deliberate.
"She was the tweak to my addict,
the dead eyes you see in the lost.
She was dark, parasitic to my heart.
She wanted to crawl inside my skin
just to feel my warmth.
She was fucking everything."
"She sounds terrible," I respond.
He takes the longest drag of his cigarette,
smoke curling like his thoughts.
"Nah," he says,
"she was comfortable in the dark.
It’s there she created art.
Sure, she nearly swallowed my...
#breakup
#dark
#depression
#heartbroken
#love
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Loki_Undercover
Wannabe-Poet
Wannabe-Poet
Poem Published
2nd Jan 2025 3:41pm
2nd Jan 2025 3:41pm
Lies feel like the truth, the truth feels like lies
I think so highly of you
I forget you know what you do
Quite familiar with the power you wear
I beg for your stare
You say you want me
You need me in ways,
That will stay in between
The walls of your bedroom, the walls of our thoughts
May that be too much for me?
When all I want is less than a touch
Just a text, just a sec
Tell my how you feel, if I make you upset
So ashamed I wait for you to be near
Want to be dismissed from your attachment
Why I think so highly of you,
Though I’ll never know the...
I forget you know what you do
Quite familiar with the power you wear
I beg for your stare
You say you want me
You need me in ways,
That will stay in between
The walls of your bedroom, the walls of our thoughts
May that be too much for me?
When all I want is less than a touch
Just a text, just a sec
Tell my how you feel, if I make you upset
So ashamed I wait for you to be near
Want to be dismissed from your attachment
Why I think so highly of you,
Though I’ll never know the...
#love
46 reads
1 Comment
TimWombles
Poem Published
2nd Jan 2025 3:35pm
2nd Jan 2025 3:35pm
Baby it's Cold Out
Outside my window
A leaveless tree encased in ice
Like my heart beating in my chest
I see you standing there
I'm feeling the heat rising in the room
Are you my spring thaw
Or a voyeur watching this snowman's doom?
Are you my savior?
Or just another flavor, I can't taste
Baby it's cold out
But really it's even colder deep inside
Are you going to be my heatwave?
Can you take me for a warming ride?
[Chorus]
Because there is cold and there's is hot
There is love and there is not
I need to know which you've got ...
A leaveless tree encased in ice
Like my heart beating in my chest
I see you standing there
I'm feeling the heat rising in the room
Are you my spring thaw
Or a voyeur watching this snowman's doom?
Are you my savior?
Or just another flavor, I can't taste
Baby it's cold out
But really it's even colder deep inside
Are you going to be my heatwave?
Can you take me for a warming ride?
[Chorus]
Because there is cold and there's is hot
There is love and there is not
I need to know which you've got ...
#love
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MySmile
Besma
Besma
Poem Published
2nd Jan 2025 12:09pm
2nd Jan 2025 12:09pm
My Vulnerability I Share
I learn
No war against time and age to wage
No end of time rather many a stage
Just keep the flow of what is mundane and sage..
I learn
Not to fly high with rapture not to yield to rage
Not to erase all that is written on my page
Just embrace the tides of life and the swings of age..
I learn
No reason to theorise or advise
All the hearts and minds seem to be wise
Just my very aims and aspirations revise..
I learn
To early rise and wear of sunshine a ray
Thank God in words, deeds and pray
For...
No war against time and age to wage
No end of time rather many a stage
Just keep the flow of what is mundane and sage..
I learn
Not to fly high with rapture not to yield to rage
Not to erase all that is written on my page
Just embrace the tides of life and the swings of age..
I learn
No reason to theorise or advise
All the hearts and minds seem to be wise
Just my very aims and aspirations revise..
I learn
To early rise and wear of sunshine a ray
Thank God in words, deeds and pray
For...
#admiration
#gratitude
#learning
#love
#PersonalGrowth
56 reads
8 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
2nd Jan 2025 4:22am
2nd Jan 2025 4:22am
relic
drawing from the energy I expand my sights
viewing the darkness with tunnel vision
maddening thoughts assault
but I must face it it's going nowhere
dealing in deadly blows
it comes at me with force
I balk under the pressure
retreating for a moment
the sound is deafening
my thoughts scream
inside myself I rise
to stand against the giant
immortal power, thwarted passage
it won't get by me without notice
evil demeanor, wicked justice
scrying the damned
fickle fate I keen in the bleak ...
viewing the darkness with tunnel vision
maddening thoughts assault
but I must face it it's going nowhere
dealing in deadly blows
it comes at me with force
I balk under the pressure
retreating for a moment
the sound is deafening
my thoughts scream
inside myself I rise
to stand against the giant
immortal power, thwarted passage
it won't get by me without notice
evil demeanor, wicked justice
scrying the damned
fickle fate I keen in the bleak ...
#dark
#love
#magic #pagan
#magic #pagan
55 reads
4 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
2nd Jan 2025 3:29am
2nd Jan 2025 3:29am
Do you want better
As we exchange thoughts and insight and imagination, from your own thoughts and dreams, more than anything that you continue to have in your life and world. 🌍 For sure you have the ability and power to eliminate, the negativity and drama from your life what would you, like to be able to remove that which you don't need or want. TO be apart of your existence as it bought nothing to your life. For sure we have to learn that sometimes, we have to let go of some situations that has slowly began, to break your heart ❤️ leaving behind scars of unbelievable pain, that will...
#courage
#hope
#love
#strength
#TimeHeals
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gothicsurrealism
Daniel Long
Daniel Long
Poem Published
1st Jan 2025 11:28pm
1st Jan 2025 11:28pm
From Lust To Frost
From lust to frost,
romance to regret,
from fall to winter.
Our passions have wintered.
Yielding to loneliness -
this season of surrender!
Shared wintry breaths chilled our spirits.
Our fleeting emotions wintering our love.
Our passing trusts, now only wintery words.
This crestfallen experience with you!
We wilted, then can the silence of tears
which froze as visible memories on our cheeks.
romance to regret,
from fall to winter.
Our passions have wintered.
Yielding to loneliness -
this season of surrender!
Shared wintry breaths chilled our spirits.
Our fleeting emotions wintering our love.
Our passing trusts, now only wintery words.
This crestfallen experience with you!
We wilted, then can the silence of tears
which froze as visible memories on our cheeks.
#breakup
#depression
#love
#MentalHealth
#rejection
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